Pretty good looking renders but definitely a 'meh' from me. I would wait for a couple updates for something to happen. Very bored by it and not great writing imo.
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- Sep 7, 2018
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I know you guys want to introduce every character and get to know them but I thought it focused way to much on the other characters and I was mainly interested in the MC and how the story effects him. It's a personal issue for me but I hate seeing story scenes happening when the MC isn't around to see them.
While I like playing these kind of games for the story I thought there was far too much of it and a lot of it was pretty dull and uninteresting especially when it focused on characters I'm not really interested in like Alice and Afina. There also doesn't seem to be very many choices at all and the game seemed really on rails though since it's a first release hopefully more choices appear as the game goes on.
Then there is how every female character introduced instantly starts thirsting over the MC which is kind of ridiculous especially since you can hear their internal thoughts which is something I'm personally not a fan of. When the other male student appeared I thought he would start thirsting over the MC as well since everyone else seems to.
I have to ask though I really hated the teacher and it bugged me you can't flat out reject her since she annoyed the shit out of me, will that be an option later on? because she really got on my nerves and I wanted an option to report her for sexual harassment.
The game looks pretty decent though and I'm waiting to see what the next update is like since there is quite a few issues I have with the game mainly with the writing being really dull and boring.
While I like playing these kind of games for the story I thought there was far too much of it and a lot of it was pretty dull and uninteresting especially when it focused on characters I'm not really interested in like Alice and Afina. There also doesn't seem to be very many choices at all and the game seemed really on rails though since it's a first release hopefully more choices appear as the game goes on.
Then there is how every female character introduced instantly starts thirsting over the MC which is kind of ridiculous especially since you can hear their internal thoughts which is something I'm personally not a fan of. When the other male student appeared I thought he would start thirsting over the MC as well since everyone else seems to.
I have to ask though I really hated the teacher and it bugged me you can't flat out reject her since she annoyed the shit out of me, will that be an option later on? because she really got on my nerves and I wanted an option to report her for sexual harassment.
The game looks pretty decent though and I'm waiting to see what the next update is like since there is quite a few issues I have with the game mainly with the writing being really dull and boring.
- Dec 21, 2021
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straight up robbed the MC from chasing sunsets must of seen their amazing game and success and decided yeah lets rob that i feel so sorry for the Stone fox devs having their MC's likeness stolen and put in this game oof
- Apr 14, 2020
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most of these girls are natural hair colour is black ? 1st woman met in the game is the police chief. black eye browns with blonde hair. looks off to me at first sight.more worrying is their "404 weird" patreon page, I would say.
it might be only temporary fingers crossed...yet it might be those guys are just went from "broken promises" to the full broke(( n) pages)
their patreon page works fine for me. guess the op post updated with new link.
- Sep 23, 2017
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But he's so muscular!
Every girl is obsessed with MC just by looking at him, that's why, they were looking at another game character, that shit is hilarious in way but gross
- Apr 25, 2017
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Knight_BP
I think you just ruined the vn, at least for me with that whole thing with Grace
If you think this is the type of thing we want to read in a vn and then fall in love with said Li, you are clearly mistaken about what we want in a romance game or how much we can put up with it.
I'm not a fan of this type of writing.
I think you just ruined the vn, at least for me with that whole thing with Grace
If you think this is the type of thing we want to read in a vn and then fall in love with said Li, you are clearly mistaken about what we want in a romance game or how much we can put up with it.
I'm not a fan of this type of writing.
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Every time i see "romance" tag i think to myself: "Here we are again, another porn game without porn!"
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You know how things will go, he'll tease alot, after a while he'll start showing flashbacks "bUt It'S In ThE PasT, iT isN'T NtR, hErHer", the usual.wait a minute .... that woman wasn't mc's sister or aunt? I remember playing the first version and I think that was not there, did they add that in the rework?
- Apr 25, 2017
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I don't think they will add ntr considering Knight is one of the devs, but whoever wrote this game clearly missed how this type of writing and giving this type of info to the players will ruin both the LI and the game for said players...
Anyway, they clearly fucked up big time with this.
- Nov 26, 2020
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Yea that why i sayed this one will be one hell of complex-maze storylol was the sister the dealer? dammm hahaha my mc its going to be a corrupted cop, I can't arrest the sister
- Nov 26, 2020
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Hope that dev wilk fix this dowsides. I really like this game and want to see it gets complated. Without rushed story
I enjoyed playing through the game and it was an enjoyable experience all things considered but.....Holy Cow, could you please NOT cramp so much drama into version 0.1?
This is just overbearing, there is not one person that is even remotely normal. Feels more like you entered a daycare center for adults. It would have been fine if you'd have introduced those problems as the story progressed instead of throwing it into peoples face á la "take that!"
The story itself was engaging enough, but considering that every woman in this game seems to have problems that might/might not be stuff that usually tied to them (domestic violence, semi-stalker, possessive ex, etc) you kinda start guessing which mental issue the next girl has that might be introduced. At this point I think we only are missing a rape victim, then we should have managed to gather all the stereotypes.
Please, it's just too much.
This is just overbearing, there is not one person that is even remotely normal. Feels more like you entered a daycare center for adults. It would have been fine if you'd have introduced those problems as the story progressed instead of throwing it into peoples face á la "take that!"
The story itself was engaging enough, but considering that every woman in this game seems to have problems that might/might not be stuff that usually tied to them (domestic violence, semi-stalker, possessive ex, etc) you kinda start guessing which mental issue the next girl has that might be introduced. At this point I think we only are missing a rape victim, then we should have managed to gather all the stereotypes.
Please, it's just too much.
- Feb 18, 2021
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the renders are nice and the story seems like it could be promising,but the fact that every girl is falling for the mc right away is something I don't really like,especially since the mc's flirting is quite awkward. Also,those internal dialogues are hard to read sometimes,especially when LI's are swooning over mc's every word. the fact that mc is so hung up on Vanessa and blames himself for breaking that promise when in fact he couldn't do anything to uphold it cause it was a punishment( he tried to meet with her despite that) is a bit overdramatic. I love the models and the premise but maybe stop trying to beat WVM in getting girls to fall in love with the mc in a heartbeat. Also that teacher who has an orgasm when mc just kisses her or some shit is just so hilarious lmao. wishing best of luck to dev and can't wait to see how will the story develop and hopefully with less internal dialogue lol