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is the teacher even after you reject her the first time
but later on you make out with her and imply you wouldn't mind or you would be open to sleeping with her
after you reject her the first time
- Sep 12, 2018
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we are holding you to your brok..uhhm..solid promise
we are holding you to your brok..uhhm..solid promise
Writing and Renders are finished, now it's just welp, coding
Note there aren't any Lewd scenes in this and this isn't as big as 1.0, but this how I want my story to start
Current render count is 400+
And words count wise we can say there aren't any monlouge and fillers
Once it's finished I hope you guys like it
Note there aren't any Lewd scenes in this and this isn't as big as 1.0, but this how I want my story to start
Current render count is 400+
And words count wise we can say there aren't any monlouge and fillers
Once it's finished I hope you guys like it
- Sep 3, 2020
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honestly my brother that sounds amazing honestly I don't give a fuck about sex scenes all I care about is a good story
and I know that's exactly what you're going to give me I can't wait to play it
- May 16, 2020
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Couldn't agree more, as long as the story is consistent and good, the lewd scenes will come naturally.
- Sep 3, 2020
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honestly, it's the story that makes a lewd scene so good
story and characters should always come first before lewd scenes
sex scenes will happen when it makes sense and it feels natural and not rushed
in fact, if you put a sex scene in a game just for the sake of having a sex scene it can actually ruin the story
- Nov 3, 2020
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Hmmm the last writter is no more? good! bye bye amigo
I have to play this game for the first time
I have to play this game for the first time
- Jun 14, 2020
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I couldn't agree more. And your arguments are more than perfect.
Like, what makes me "waste time" following a VN if not History? If I just want to watch a meaningless sex scene and masturbate, wouldn't it be easier to watch a shitty video on Xvideos?
For me what makes a good VN is yes the story and if it is well told, sometimes we have a premise for a good story but is spoiled by the simple fact that the developer wants to deliver a scene H is rushed and out of time.
So dear Dev Knight_BP , take your time to tell your story, develop your characters (give them life) and when the time comes I am sure we will have a great time. Take your time.
- Oct 28, 2020
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...perfectly said! This is why 80% of the VN's on F95zone fail to impress. Great looking characters a lot of times but the story drifts into trope-filled Bangbus mediocrity! So you think to yourself "Wait! What? This makes no sense!" or "the old 'bath peeking' trope OF COURSE!".
It's just terrible and the most anime VN's out of Japan are just like these!
well story is why im here(with little lewd things
). there are other quick fap material out there if i wanted one
- Sep 3, 2020
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exactly right
and your English is perfect to me I have a reading disability so although I can
speak English perfectly I can't spell very well so I know how hard it can be to make comments I'm just glad I can explain myself good enough
and it helps that
Knight_BP
can understand me even though I cant spell
- Mar 7, 2019
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This is the relationship I want to get into the most......Big time!
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I know I'm kind of late to this discussion and I don't want to bring it up again. But I just read all the comment pages from the beginning (reread some actually, since I've been following the game since the first release) and wanted to comment on some things that bothered me and others that made my eyes sweat .
And this is from a guy who has as his favorite MILF LI's (I guess all moms have a little baggage, right?), I don't mind "baggage" one bit, baggage is good, it shows us a lot about a person and gives a "depth". A good example is June of the game Artemis, she has a dark past, frequented wheels of conversations (not remember the name, more places where people with trauma or addiction usually vent) about an abusive relationship, and still has problems hooking a relationship serious and this is one of the factors that went wrong before the mind as the MC of the game mentioned. Actually, almost every LI in that game has "baggage" and it's one of my favorite games. So once again, the problem is not the luggage, but the size and content of that luggage.
And I was fine with Grace from V1.1 (when she had ONE married guy). The first Grace?
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Leaving that behind since Dev will do as he originally envisioned before someone stuck it in his head that he should "endure" I think it's a good idea to have your characters ruined by a distorted vision of people with tastes different from those of the STORY'S OWN CREATOR and probably of this VN's target audience.
I want to wish you strength and positive energy Knight_BP . You were the only one who until you prove otherwise did not err in all development of this work. Because art is beautiful. We probably share similar tastes and I understand you when you say you get upset about the criticism, as I also go through depressive problems (in the last 6 months I faced together with my father in a fight against cancer, and about a month ago he passed away) and it pained me to read all the criticism you had to face, even though you agreed with it. Using this as an escape is something we do, so I avoid games of genres like NTR, real life is painful enough to face, so I prefer softer games, with humor, romance, especially if I do not have to choose a girl in the end, I understand that it is not realistic and such, so I like fantasy genres too. And as many like to remind us when we complain about an "NTR", "that's a game, it's pixels" the same goes for justifying "harem", that's a game, not real.
Okay, I'm getting away from what I wanted to say. Finally, I wanted to thank you for your effort and care with this project, I have great faith that it will be something giant, hoping that you achieve all your goals.
About facing the creation of your game alone, find some "revisions" with similar tastes to yours, so they can help you with a more "decentralized" vision. R.R. Martin talks in the acknowledgments of his book about the devils and angels of writing something. The devils in the details and the angel are your editors/reviewers.
I want to apologize for the extensive text and a little out of time, as I said I was a little busy recently. Good luck and all the best.
.The big issue here is not "ONE affair with ONE married man", but how this man humiliated (may not be the most correct word here) and how she was horny for suffering these humiliations and the "other guys" that this ONE man quotes in the blackmail movies with these "men fucking her" (gangbang/orgy). So yeah, she was a slut who was passed around the office for all the men who were into slut-slinging and weren't afraid of getting an STD and all that "grown woman" stuff maybe she doesn't even know who the biological father of her child is.
And this is from a guy who has as his favorite MILF LI's (I guess all moms have a little baggage, right?), I don't mind "baggage" one bit, baggage is good, it shows us a lot about a person and gives a "depth". A good example is June of the game Artemis, she has a dark past, frequented wheels of conversations (not remember the name, more places where people with trauma or addiction usually vent) about an abusive relationship, and still has problems hooking a relationship serious and this is one of the factors that went wrong before the mind as the MC of the game mentioned. Actually, almost every LI in that game has "baggage" and it's one of my favorite games. So once again, the problem is not the luggage, but the size and content of that luggage.
I understand that you were annoyed because you invested your money and your favorite LI was ruined for you. But by your definition I believe you picked the wrong type of game (romance), usually, NTR/swing games (inevitable and avoidable) have plenty of those "attractive adult women" who fuck or have fucked 80% of the male population (and female too, who knows?) that she came in contact with, without caring about anything, marital status, how many at once, DP, gangbang.
And I was fine with Grace from V1.1 (when she had ONE married guy). The first Grace?
--------------------------------//-------------------------------
Leaving that behind since Dev will do as he originally envisioned before someone stuck it in his head that he should "endure" I think it's a good idea to have your characters ruined by a distorted vision of people with tastes different from those of the STORY'S OWN CREATOR and probably of this VN's target audience.
I want to wish you strength and positive energy Knight_BP . You were the only one who until you prove otherwise did not err in all development of this work. Because art is beautiful. We probably share similar tastes and I understand you when you say you get upset about the criticism, as I also go through depressive problems (in the last 6 months I faced together with my father in a fight against cancer, and about a month ago he passed away) and it pained me to read all the criticism you had to face, even though you agreed with it. Using this as an escape is something we do, so I avoid games of genres like NTR, real life is painful enough to face, so I prefer softer games, with humor, romance, especially if I do not have to choose a girl in the end, I understand that it is not realistic and such, so I like fantasy genres too. And as many like to remind us when we complain about an "NTR", "that's a game, it's pixels" the same goes for justifying "harem", that's a game, not real.
Okay, I'm getting away from what I wanted to say. Finally, I wanted to thank you for your effort and care with this project, I have great faith that it will be something giant, hoping that you achieve all your goals.
About facing the creation of your game alone, find some "revisions" with similar tastes to yours, so they can help you with a more "decentralized" vision. R.R. Martin talks in the acknowledgments of his book about the devils and angels of writing something. The devils in the details and the angel are your editors/reviewers.
I want to apologize for the extensive text and a little out of time, as I said I was a little busy recently. Good luck and all the best.
Yeah, I get it. Don't have an opinion on this thread unless it is approved by the main collective.I know I'm kind of late to this discussion and I don't want to bring it up again. But I just read all the comment pages from the beginning (reread some actually, since I've been following the game since the first release) and wanted to comment on some things that bothered me and others that made my eyes sweat
The big issue here is not "ONE affair with ONE married man", but how this man humiliated (may not be the most correct word here) and how she was horny for suffering these humiliations and the "other guys" that this ONE man quotes in the blackmail movies with these "men fucking her" (gangbang/orgy). So yeah, she was a slut who was passed around the office for all the men who were into slut-slinging and weren't afraid of getting an STD and all that "grown woman" stuff maybe she doesn't even know who the biological father of her child is.
And this is from a guy who has as his favorite MILF LI's (I guess all moms have a little baggage, right?), I don't mind "baggage" one bit, baggage is good, it shows us a lot about a person and gives a "depth". A good example is June of the game Artemis, she has a dark past, frequented wheels of conversations (not remember the name, more places where people with trauma or addiction usually vent) about an abusive relationship, and still has problems hooking a relationship serious and this is one of the factors that went wrong before the mind as the MC of the game mentioned. Actually, almost every LI in that game has "baggage" and it's one of my favorite games. So once again, the problem is not the luggage, but the size and content of that luggage.
I understand that you were annoyed because you invested your money and your favorite LI was ruined for you. But by your definition I believe you picked the wrong type of game (romance), usually, NTR/swing games (inevitable and avoidable) have plenty of those "attractive adult women" who fuck or have fucked 80% of the male population (and female too, who knows?) that she came in contact with, without caring about anything, marital status, how many at once, DP, gangbang.
And I was fine with Grace from V1.1 (when she had ONE married guy). The first Grace?
--------------------------------//-------------------------------
Leaving that behind since Dev will do as he originally envisioned before someone stuck it in his head that he should "endure" I think it's a good idea to have your characters ruined by a distorted vision of people with tastes different from those of the STORY'S OWN CREATOR and probably of this VN's target audience.
I want to wish you strength and positive energy Knight_BP . You were the only one who until you prove otherwise did not err in all development of this work. Because art is beautiful. We probably share similar tastes and I understand you when you say you get upset about the criticism, as I also go through depressive problems (in the last 6 months I faced together with my father in a fight against cancer, and about a month ago he passed away) and it pained me to read all the criticism you had to face, even though you agreed with it. Using this as an escape is something we do, so I avoid games of genres like NTR, real life is painful enough to face, so I prefer softer games, with humor, romance, especially if I do not have to choose a girl in the end, I understand that it is not realistic and such, so I like fantasy genres too. And as many like to remind us when we complain about an "NTR", "that's a game, it's pixels" the same goes for justifying "harem", that's a game, not real.
Okay, I'm getting away from what I wanted to say. Finally, I wanted to thank you for your effort and care with this project, I have great faith that it will be something giant, hoping that you achieve all your goals.
About facing the creation of your game alone, find some "revisions" with similar tastes to yours, so they can help you with a more "decentralized" vision. R.R. Martin talks in the acknowledgments of his book about the devils and angels of writing something. The devils in the details and the angel are your editors/reviewers.
I want to apologize for the extensive text and a little out of time, as I said I was a little busy recently. Good luck and all the best.
- Oct 28, 2020
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Tianna is gorgeous! One of the most beautiful character models i've ever seen.
That the old version, chapter 1 revamp is out, this version you are playing is not the new one, I’m sure I did the chief better there hehe
- Sep 3, 2020
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don't worry I know it's worth the waitThat the old version, chapter 1 revamp is out, this version you are playing is not the new one, I’m sure I did the chief better there hehe
sorry I'm poor and I have no credit card
but I don't mind waiting for it
this game needs all the financial support so it'll have a bright future
Thank you if you can support me and want to please do if you can’t or don’t want to I understand