VN Ren'Py Broken Promises [v0.34] [Light Cavalry]

[Knight_BP]

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[Knight_BP]

oh my God I completely forgot about that. Dialogue
you're absolutely 100% right. MC is a cop

besides that he's a good guy who would never take money to help someone he wouldn't even consider it

Have no fear I'll do my best to make him sound more of a cop, just atm doing my best

 

[Nurikabe]

oh my God I completely forgot about that. Dialogue
you're absolutely 100% right. MC is a cop

besides that he's a good guy who would never take money to help someone he wouldn't even consider it

Remember: He is undercover! What would the average new college student do if he was given the opportunity to make money just for "looking out" for a beautiful woman?

 

[Vidal the king of Pervert]

Remember: He is undercover! What would the average new college student do if he was given the opportunity to make money just for "looking out" for a beautiful woman?

it depends on the person

and one of the rules of undercover cops is when you're undercover try not to pretend to be a completely different person try to play a different version of yourself

so if you're not the type of person that would take money to help someone don't

of course, at times you have to do things to gain people's trust

but that's only when necessary

for example if you are not much of a drinker don't go and tell people that you can drink more than them

but if you have to drink to gain someone's trust fill your glass with ice and keep spilling your drink

and keep refilling your Glass even though your Glass is not empty keep going for a refill so it looks like you're drinking more than you actually are

 

[Nurikabe]

it depends on the person

and one of the rules of undercover cops is when you're undercover try not to pretend to be a completely different person try to play a different version of yourself

so if you're not the type of person that would take money to help someone don't

of course, at times you have to do things to gain people's trust

but that's only when necessary

for example if you are not much of a drinker don't go and tell people that you can drink more than them

but if you have to drink to gain someone's trust fill your glass with ice and keep spilling your drink

and keep refilling your Glass even though your Glass is not empty keep going for a refill so it looks like you're drinking more than you actually are

Pretending to be a drinker versus accepting a protection gig...for a cop? Not only is this a no-brainer, but MANY people in law enforcement take on extra duties and second jobs as personal security. Completely plausible and realistic. (Consider how many undercover cops get involved in drugs, alcohol, and sex issues.)

But more importantly, we have a young, green officer on his first undercover job. And he needs the money. He is also interested in the girls. Very likely for him to kindly accept money, or entertain the idea, so as not to make her question his motives any further.

No doubt our young friend will come under scrutiny in the future as his role deepens and the plot thickens. Are all of these girls innocent? Seems unlikely. Someone somehow is involved in the investigation. He will be investigating them while he, no doubt, develops feelings for them. Being the "hired help" providing security (or keeping an eye on) Afina provides cover for spending more time with her, as well.

 

[Vidal the king of Pervert]

Pretending to be a drinker versus accepting a protection gig...for a cop? Not only is this a no-brainer, but MANY people in law enforcement take on extra duties and second jobs as personal security. Completely plausible and realistic. (Consider how many undercover cops get involved in drugs, alcohol, and sex issues.)

But more importantly, we have a young, green officer on his first undercover job. And he needs the money. He is also interested in the girls. Very likely for him to kindly accept money, or entertain the idea, so as not to make her question his motives any further.

No doubt our young friend will come under scrutiny in the future as his role deepens and the plot thickens. Are all of these girls innocent? Seems unlikely. Someone somehow is involved in the investigation. He will be investigating them while he, no doubt, develops feelings for them. Being the "hired help" providing security (or keeping an eye on) Afina provides cover for spending more time with her, as well.

fair enough but I don't think the MC is the kind of guy that would take money to help someone and just because he refuses to take money that doesn't mean she would question his motives further. she

would probably just think he's a nice guy and that's it

the MC is green

but his captain would never choose him for the undercover job if he didn't show amazing potential and he seems to be a very good person


that takes his job and helping people very seriously but I do see your point maybe It could be an option in the game to take the money

 

[Nurikabe]

that takes his job and helping people very seriously but I do see your point maybe It could be an option in the game to take the money

Absolutely! The choice of taking the money or refusing but offering to protect her regardless. It's what a good friend would do, right! That is the option I would choose, as well.

 

[Knight_BP]

Like to add that there is 2 scenes left to be rendered, after that Chapter 1 Rework just needs writing to be finished and coded.

It won't be as long as the original, however it's a foundation of MY story and how I want it

Let's hope I get the release this month, I put myself on a 110% because I want to make things right and I hope you guys see it

I hope I don't fuck up here

 

[Crowangel]

Like to add that there is 2 scenes left to be rendered, after that Chapter 1 Rework just needs writing to be finished and coded.

It won't be as long as the original, however it's a foundation of MY story and how I want it

Let's hope I get the release this month, I put myself on a 110% because I want to make things right and I hope you guys see it

I hope I don't fuck up here

You havent steered us wrong yet Captain.. Oh shit.. Iceberg.. Right Ahead!

 

[Topper69]

Like to add that there is 2 scenes left to be rendered, after that Chapter 1 Rework just needs writing to be finished and coded.

It won't be as long as the original, however it's a foundation of MY story and how I want it

Let's hope I get the release this month, I put myself on a 110% because I want to make things right and I hope you guys see it

I hope I don't fuck up here

Looking forward to it, the story and the game does have potential, keep it up and running.

 

[Ecchi-Lover44]

i feel stupid for asking this but how do you make the incest patch work? the normal put it in game folder does noting but create a duplicate and puting in it in the scripts folder make the text change but you get image errors

 

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well, now that looks interesting

 

[Canto Forte]

There is a cliff standing to crush that hangar and everything inside.
It is also possible that the revelations in store for our protagonists would break them more tho.

 

[Alex Lem]

Knight_BP So will there be a harem in the game or not? (This is when the MC is in a relationship with all the girls at once and they know about it and don't mind)

 

[Knight_BP]

Knight_BP So will there be a harem in the game or not? (This is when the MC is in a relationship with all the girls at once and they know about it and don't mind)

That question is still out there, I can't answer that yet

 

[Vidal the king of Pervert]

That question is still out there, I can't answer that yet

well me personally I don't like harem I love monogamy

so as long as that is an option and I don't have to cheat on anybody I'm good

wait hold up what.the fuck

why do you have to of my waifus

as your signature

ooh
Knight_BP

you "Motherf*cker".

 

[Prokopije]

Hello. I skipped through this and have one question before playing it for real.
Is this going to be fuckfest where player have no choice to refuse chicks or will be possible to play in monogamy way, to have sexual actions with just one chick, while reject all others?
There is this chick Sakae, where player can refuse her first offer, but than later player is forced into some kissing and groping action with her...it's very discouraging, so would like to know, if possible, in which direction, when it comes to sexual actions, game will go further?

 

[Vidal the king of Pervert]

Hello. I skipped through this and have one question before playing it for real.
Is this going to be fuckfest where player have no choice to refuse chicks or will be possible to play in monogamy way, to have sexual actions with just one chick, while reject all others?
There is this chick Sakae, where player can refuse her first offer, but than later player is forced into some kissing and groping action with her...it's very discouraging, so would like to know, if possible, in which direction, when it comes to sexual actions, game will go further?

well I'm not 100% sure but I think in the remake of the first chapter one you won't be forced to do anything

and I believe the scene with the teacher will be changed but you should ask
Knight_BP

just to be sure

and yes that scene made no sense

I mean you reject her one second and then make out with her in the next it made no sense

 

[Knight_BP]

I'm going to say this for the last time since hopefully ch.1 rework will come out, you will not be forced to have sex with anyone that was a mistake, you will choose who you want