Ren'Py Broken Sky [v0.5.2 Public] [Wistala]

[Hordragg]

Lilly!

First things first, though, Wistala: it's possible to soft-lock the game on the phone call to Wistala. This requires not having looked up her sexual information beforehand and initiating said phone call immediately after. The problem lies with the AI menu being already active the second time the dev message is shown. Initiating the phone call without advancing past said message will soft-lock the game upon finising the call, leaving one stranded inside an empty apartment with nothing else to do. Sad. Placing hide screen ai_menu right after the label should keep even the most eager player (Sorry!) from borking their playthrough, though there's probably better ways to deal with this. Oh, while I'm at it, line 784 of script.rpy misspells 'anthros'.

Now, this is fun! Great premise, captivating story, interesting characters… and there's just something about relinquishing control to a pretty pink panzerfaust. *purrr*

 

[Wistala]

Lilly!

First things first, though, Wistala: it's possible to soft-lock the game on the phone call to Wistala. This requires not having looked up her sexual information beforehand and initiating said phone call immediately after. The problem lies with the AI menu being already active the second time the dev message is shown. Initiating the phone call without advancing past said message will soft-lock the game upon finising the call, leaving one stranded inside an empty apartment with nothing else to do. Sad. Placing hide screen ai_menu right after the label should keep even the most eager player (Sorry!) from borking their playthrough, though there's probably better ways to deal with this. Oh, while I'm at it, line 784 of script.rpy misspells 'anthros'.

Now, this is fun! Great premise, captivating story, interesting characters… and there's just something about relinquishing control to a pretty pink panzerfaust. *purrr*

Oh thank you so much for that bug report. We had encountered it a few times but I couldn't figure out what was causing it! Now that I know what's happening I think I have a good fix for it! That's been bothering me for days since before the update released but I just couldn't figure it out!

 

[clown48212]

Just played v0.06. The game has a really promising start and I'm looking forward to seeing how it develops.

However, I have concerns regarding the game's scope. There are intended to be:

• 2 different genders
• Dom & sub paths
• x4 different character types
• Branching storylines
• Multiple Love interests

On one hand, it's great seeing something this ambitous. However if the intention is for these variables to interact with each other, then that's going to entail a ton of effort and re-work. Just hope the developer doesn't burn themself out trying to accomplish this

 

[Wistala]

Yea I figured that was a bug.

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I went back and reviewed how the interaction plays out in game and I think you have a valid point. I'll be releasing a patch in an hour or so (0.061) to fix the bug causing people to get stuck and I'm including a rework of the dialogue for having NTR/cuckolding/swinging turned off. This should keep the paths much more separate from one another! That was definitely my own personal bias for my preferred content bleeding through into the game. I'll endeavor not to make the same mistake in the future ♥

Just played v0.06. The game has a really promising start and I'm looking forward to seeing how it develops.

However, I have concerns regarding the game's scope. There are intended to be:

• 2 different genders
• Dom & sub paths
• x4 different character types
• Branching storylines
• Multiple Love interests

On one hand, it's great seeing something this ambitous. However if the intention is for these variables to interact with each other, then that's going to entail a ton of effort and re-work. Just hope the developer doesn't burn themself out trying to accomplish this

Thank you!

The different MC customization options are certainly going to be a lot of work, but they won't start getting implemented until chapter 1 is completed. At which point I'll return and begin working on them so I'm not trying to juggle everything all at once! The species alternates are fairly simple to do, but the gender swap will be comparable to making a brand new game, which is both an exciting and daunting task for me!

 

[Fazed]

I went back and reviewed how the interaction plays out in game and I think you have a valid point. I'll be releasing a patch in an hour or so (0.061) to fix the bug causing people to get stuck and I'm including a rework of the dialogue for having NTR/cuckolding/swinging turned off. This should keep the paths much more separate from one another! That was definitely my own personal bias for my preferred content bleeding through into the game. I'll endeavor not to make the same mistake in the future ♥

hmm sounds good.

 

[Fazed]

Wistala
I gather that most people who played this are either into or generally open to the submissive and sharing aspect of the game, and I know my feedback has been rather critical.
To be clear this game has caught my interest or I wouldnt have bothered leaving such a long comment. I do wish to see what comes next but there were just some things that stuck out to me as one of the apparently few players that chose to play differently than the rest. You made the effort to implement different flavors of content in the game so I figured I'd also put effort into giving feedback from a different perspective to help that along. Its a big task.

I wish you well.

 

[Wistala]

Patched the game to V0.061. Changes listed in the changelog!

 

[Desenra]

Like other have said, love the game. And am also a bit concerned with the game scope like others have said. But I think if the dev keeps up with it this could be a really great game. If they really put in all these choices and branching paths (plus a good story) then that'll be even better (have fun with the bugs though). And I'm a sucker for futuristic stories (gotta get them credits). Wish dev the best of luck, very much considering supporting on Patreon but will wait for a couple more updates. Cant wait for more! P.S Wistala best girl, Oliver don't pull a Jackie on us.

 

[Wistala]

Like other have said, love the game. And am also a bit concerned with the game scope like others have said. But I think if the dev keeps up with it this could be a really great game. If they really put in all these choices and branching paths (plus a good story) then that'll be even better (have fun with the bugs though). And I'm a sucker for futuristic stories (gotta get them credits). Wish dev the best of luck, very much considering supporting on Patreon but will wait for a couple more updates. Cant wait for more! P.S Wistala best girl, Oliver don't pull a Jackie on us.

I am the best girl! Thank you ♥

 

[Kekekerkek]

I went back and reviewed how the interaction plays out in game and I think you have a valid point. I'll be releasing a patch in an hour or so (0.061) to fix the bug causing people to get stuck and I'm including a rework of the dialogue for having NTR/cuckolding/swinging turned off. This should keep the paths much more separate from one another! That was definitely my own personal bias for my preferred content bleeding through into the game. I'll endeavor not to make the same mistake in the future ♥



Thank you!

The different MC customization options are certainly going to be a lot of work, but they won't start getting implemented until chapter 1 is completed. At which point I'll return and begin working on them so I'm not trying to juggle everything all at once! The species alternates are fairly simple to do, but the gender swap will be comparable to making a brand new game, which is both an exciting and daunting task for me!

my 2 cents would be that you finish completly the game then add the (ntr/sharing/cuckold) and others fetish you want then the other gender after because as you said it will be as making a new game so it'll take a LOT of time and if people aren't interested in playing as a female then they'll wait multiples months without update multiples times which would be bad in the long run in my opinion, the more you try to do multiples things at the same time the thinner the updates will be overall.
Anyway that's just my 2 cents and what i would personally do, hope you succeed with this game

 

[Sad Walrus]

That is actually a bug! I will get it fixed and put it out with the next technical patch later this week! Thank you for pointing it out.

А до какого момента дошла версия на патреоне за 5$?

 

[Fazed]

Patched the game to V0.061. Changes listed in the changelog!

-Updated dialogue between Lilly and Oliver when waiting for meeting with Wistala for those who have NTR/cuckolding/sharing turned off to separate paths more cleanly.

Nice, the flow is so much better now. Simple yet effective change.

 

[Look-see]

didnt have the chance to play this game on the first release because i ended up forgetting about it (so yes i did have the chance but...)

but honestly i liked it more than i thought i would. glad everything i dont like is easily avoidable, the girl is cute and normally im not into furry.

somethings i have to ask like what are the future tags? also since cucking and sub/dom dynamics seems to be a main focus of the game. will we get the chance for a Netori and cuckqueen route?

i'll admit not sure exactly what i would expect from said route since so far Oliver has no one... unless you give him a sister but i'm not even sure human lovers are gonna be a thing in this game.

aside from that like i said liked it more than i thought and will continue to play. good luck dev.

 

[sp4ckj4rr0w_420]

Nice update! Couple things though, when meeting wistala, it's said that she's 4'11 tall. Since I've grown up with the metric system, I don't really understand the imperial system besides that I know its feet and inches. So I had to look for a converter to know that she's 1.49 m or 149cm ^^

Also, I'm mildly disturbed by how Lily was disappointed to not cuck the mc or sharing with Oliver... yeah... let's ignore that

Oh, and this time I've tried a different route, my first playthrough on the initial release, I played as a technician (Intelligence). Now I played with Emisary (charisma) and dayum, the dialog in the bar is badass =D

That video phone call was pretty hot,

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, but since it was kind of mild, I wasn't put off by it.

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Anyways, I'm looking forward to the next update!

 

[grahegri]

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[Wistala]

didnt have the chance to play this game on the first release because i ended up forgetting about it (so yes i did have the chance but...)

but honestly i liked it more than i thought i would. glad everything i dont like is easily avoidable, the girl is cute and normally im not into furry.

somethings i have to ask like what are the future tags? also since cucking and sub/dom dynamics seems to be a main focus of the game. will we get the chance for a Netori and cuckqueen route?

i'll admit not sure exactly what i would expect from said route since so far Oliver has no one... unless you give him a sister but i'm not even sure human lovers are gonna be a thing in this game.

aside from that like i said liked it more than i thought and will continue to play. good luck dev.

I listed all of the future tags on the games discord server! F95 likes to limit tags to only what is currently in the game, and I'm scared of Patreon nuking me if I listed them there.

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There are some extreme kinks listed that will have a few scenes in the game, but they can also be avoided like everything else!

Nice update! Couple things though, when meeting wistala, it's said that she's 4'11 tall. Since I've grown up with the metric system, I don't really understand the imperial system besides that I know its feet and inches. So I had to look for a converter to know that she's 1.49 m or 149cm ^^

Also, I'm mildly disturbed by how Lily was disappointed to not cuck the mc or sharing with Oliver... yeah... let's ignore that

Oh, and this time I've tried a different route, my first playthrough on the initial release, I played as a technician (Intelligence). Now I played with Emisary (charisma) and dayum, the dialog in the bar is badass =D

That video phone call was pretty hot,

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, but since it was kind of mild, I wasn't put off by it.

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Anyways, I'm looking forward to the next update!

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[Hentai_Connoisseur]

The Unholy Trinity:
NTR
Interracial
Furry

 

[sp4ckj4rr0w_420]

I listed all of the future tags on the games discord server! F95 likes to limit tags to only what is currently in the game, and I'm scared of Patreon nuking me if I listed them there.

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There are some extreme kinks listed that will have a few scenes in the game, but they can also be avoided like everything else!

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oooh, keeping me in suspense! Welp you got me curious for sure ^^

 

[grahegri]

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[The Pointman]

..."overprotective"? No, I dont think so but it's probably an oversight on the dev's part. It happens because...(
Wistala
(I looked at the script)
The flag for Lilly flirting with Oliver is set immediately after choosing to hold her hand when she is feeling nervous rather than after the next choice that warns the player about the upcoming content. Which is incredibly strange to me since nothing of the sequence following after it plays out at all if you do not hold her hand. Why is holding her hand the trigger for Oliver and her flirting? Especially after having that choice at the start to disable ntr? Very counterintuitive. Not to mention Oliver. Not much of a best friend is he after saying he would be wingman for the player. Really tired of the fake best friend trope in AVN's. Anyway it seems to me that the flag should be set later in the script after the player confirms that they wish to see sharing/cuckolding. Do that and inconsistency problem solved. Now for the other issue...

I really hope this is another oversight. Even if you choose "disable both" after holding her hand, the narration states that she is disappointed when Oliver backs off. Bruh she and MC just decided on being an item that morning.

Maybe I am just too vanilla but that kind of suggestive writing is quite unpleasant when I have already opted out of such content....twice. I read your comments about being frustrated about not having options in other games or having them ignored...Well here's a reminder. Gotta be careful not to let path specific dialogue and themes bleed into other paths.

After having read that section of the script, my impression thus far is that Lilly was imagined and written to be a LI that *wants* to heavily dominate and even cuck the MC by default, considering how heavily she leans into flirting with Oliver if you leave the toggle on. The warning is there yes but no talks about that kind of thing before hand...like couples are suppose to do?

Oh...well now I see how these oversights may have happened.

Other than that...the art is pretty good and I like making Lilly feel like a small kitten(dom path). Though I do wish the relationship wasnt so focused on dom or sub dynamic. I like the tease of a foot job at the table though, I like feet but I not so much that I would grovel for it. I hope we wont have to play total sub in order to get a little bit of that.

Yeah same here man i have said it many times i am really sick of the fake best friend crap like no i don't want him as a friend i want to beat him with a base ball bat other than that game the seems fine i don't mind it.