I like the art, the characters are okay ("the amulet" is crap though), the setting is interesting, the sex scenes pretty nice, and the plot tries more than your usual porn cliché ...
... but to me, if you are actually serious about plot, the quality of that plot becomes suddenly much more important and what's forgivable in "generic porn game #5479" can become quite the big problem quickly. 
I found it quite worrying right away that we get an author Mary Sue selfinsert in a porn game, but that aside, the first "mission" isn't any better. 
You don't do any sort of recon, information gathering, equipment prep or anything. You don't do any sort of plausible subterfuge; invented backgrounds, disguised IDs, whatever. You have zero plans about anything, nothing about extraction, nothing if things go south, nothing if you encounter this or that problem. You are supposed to be experienced security personell (hired by the absolute genius Jesus that is the game's dev naturally) but you act like "dudes on a discord chat". You are clueless, immediately made, and utterly unprepared. This hugely undermines the moment everything goes wrong because it'd have been absolutely insane if it hadn't gone wrong; the trio couldn't have been more comically incompetent and stupid if they had tried to be.
Maybe I'll give it another try later on - perhaps its just this early bit and it gets better from there, who knows; or maybe I need to adjust my expectations and just read it for the porn if I can manage - but it seems a shame to me (and specifically to me since generally reception of the game seems to be fine so what do I know ^^).