FYI,
PiggyNose, I just started this yesterday and finished today. I noticed some things, all meant as constructive feedback:
Don't let what I listed above give you the wrong impression. I enjoyed what I've seen so far. There's an interesting story, both why the MC is in Goldfield in the first place as well as the different plots for various characters. The use of music and sound effects is done well, and you have chosen nice models for the girls. Thanks for sharing on here, and good luck on the future of your game. I'm looking forward to coming releases.
All this feedback gave me goosebumps, you really understood all the messages I wanted to convey. Well, let's go!
- This first error occurred in my translation files, which ended up mixing the game's default language (English) with the other official language (Portuguese). I will delete the translation files and export them again to correct. Thanks for flagging!
- Actually, I ended up getting confused with the acronyms in the script. I use "jf" for Jeffrey and "js" for Josephine. I've already corrected it in the script and will make it available along with the graphical improvements patch that should be released this weekend.
- I also changed the nomenclature from kilometers to miles. I agree that it makes more sense that way.
- Also changed the $ side.
- Coincidentally, I was editing this scene at that moment, I'm going to reposition it. I'm still having some problems finding holster models that fit all characters and weapons well but this should be fixed in future updates.
- Changed!
- Fixed variable name, It will also be released in the weekend patch.
- English is not my native language, usually some friends of mine who are American help me review the texts before launching but any extra help is welcome. I'll pay more attention to these grammar rules.
Thank you very much for the tips, I will make the corrections and work on it immediately! I'm glad you liked the game.