Great story, loved it, it did bother me that Audrey was literally broken by what happened at Victoria's. If I knew that she would be looking so anguished and traumatized, I would not have selected the obvious choice that an AVN expects of me. Seriously though, I appreciate the realism, but Dev, please don't traumatize me in the process of playing your game, I want to love and nurture all of them, I don't want them to be in mental anguish because of my choices. Also, can you unfreeze this glacial character of MC? I understand the apprehension with the sisters, but dude, the ponytail chick is up for it big time, hold her fucking hand! Also, mom seems to know something the MC doesn't, or at least he hasn't realized yet. On the other hand, it's actually hilarious (and absolutely retarded) that the MC missed the actual news, and instead chose death as a career because he did not read the news feed properly. Uncle is an idiot too. In any other case, dumbass should have died, but all the little sisters would be without a dong.... Let's see how the scenario goes, I like the story, even if I feel the MC is homo-ey.