VN Ren'Py Abandoned Camille : The Countdown [v0.2] [Part]

[iodio]

No choices at the moment (v0.1).
I think all the characters lack personality, I mean, they are just bland stereotypes. And the story feels a bit rushed? (I mean, in a matter of hours the landlord is slapping her tits while a complete stranger nibbles her nipples?!)
As for the renders... you may want to work a little more on the dresses/shirts, since Camille is quite... busty; as it is now, they all look unnatural (especially the pink top), in my opinion.

Good luck!

 

[botc76]

I don't get it. Why did you even click on the thread, never mind post? If you don't like the genre, just stick with what you do like.

1. What's it to you? Does it bother you that much, if someone comments here that this is not his cup of tea?
2. I usually just open the latest games and updates page and check out games that have an interesting name or picture, so I normally don't see the genre tags.
3. There are games with female prots where you can just decide to only have lesbian relationships, those are fine with me.

Did that answer your inquiry sufficiently, comrade commissar?

 

[waxall]

I saw the screenshots and immediately thought of the "puffy shirt" Sienfeld episode. Why is that guy dressed like a pirate?

 

[RRX]

I'll download and give her a try. Don't surrender!!! Heh-heh....:coldsweat:

 

[rogosh]

Lots of potential for fun, gotta love some corruption games.

 

[Moanie]

I saw the screenshots and immediately thought of the "puffy shirt" Sienfeld episode. Why is that guy dressed like a pirate?

Maybe it's french fashion. ;-)

Either way, I'll check this out. I find it very cool that you created something in 2 months with no previous experience.
Congrats on achieving that.

Edit: Just saw even Camille commented on his piratey-look.
Edit2: No choices yet, but it looks fine.

 

[Ignazzio]

Fine start. Everything moves a bit too fast but I like it. Corruption games are always welcome

 

[Yadayada]

 

[YakuzaZzz]

well people are complaining that blackmail are all disgusting and fat man and whatever but what they don't know is if you were pretty and all that, whats the point of black mailing if you're already getting the hots babes. I feel people just like to complain for a yes or no "OH WOW A GAME THAT I AM THE MAN AND BY SOME MIRACLE I FUCK ALL THE BITCHES BECAUSE THATS THAT" ... every one leaves thumbs up and like and goes yeah that is real life i can relate to this Like what ... these blackmailing games are closer to real life more than these foolish false fantasy romance invented out of thin air ..... i mean blackmailing games and corruption are so much more ideal for a larger audience in my opinions as you can fill up more kinks here and there instead of the good ol " wow that is cute when i get a women one day in real life i would love her like this type of feelings" which gets kinda boring at one point because these games are mostly filled with wall of text 10 hours reading 2 hours of action in most VN games is quite redundant when you're done its like meh alright i guess thats that LOL or the good ol " awwww that was so cute what a lovely game"

PS : i ain't trashing your opinions but lets say most of you didn't think before posting and go wow this game is so disgusting isn't really appropriated ....

and those saying well this isn't my kinks this game isn't really good its almost retarded ... because this could apply to everything if you don't like just past over it and don't say you don't like it negativity isn't very constructive criticism all im saying

 

[UncleVT]

Still people are coming here to talk about his own tastes and not the game? Please, guys.

 

[macadam]

bonne chance et bon courage ! ba-dum-tiss !



(ENG)
good luck and courage ! (do i really need to translate the "ba-dum-tiss!" ?? :tf: )

 

[YakuzaZzz]

bonne chance et bon courage ! ba-dum-tiss !



(ENG)
good luck and courage ! (do i really need to translate the "ba-dum-tiss!" ?? :tf: )

Oh you silly Mecadam what we would do without you bringing some shiny laughter in our hearts <3

 

[Cervantes123]

Well looks like another generic corruption game with stupid protagonists who is fucking most disgusting dudes that can be created on daz3d xD

 

[Mrs Delington]

lolll franchies wake up in this thread !

like in other games, let time does is work, i's just a preview.
let's hope Dev 've a good story to write, but if he write some french joke, or some britany jokes, not sure the translation help lollll
Only English version of the game or we can hope a french version ? ( tant que c'est pas en Breton heinnnn).

And why not in Quebecois ?
Et pourquoi pas en Québécois ?
:FeelsGoodMan:

 

[Mrs Delington]

No choices at the moment (v0.1).
I think all the characters lack personality, I mean, they are just bland stereotypes. And the story feels a bit rushed? (I mean, in a matter of hours the landlord is slapping her tits while a complete stranger nibbles her nipples?!)
As for the renders... you may want to work a little more on the dresses/shirts, since Camille is quite... busty; as it is now, they all look unnatural (especially the pink top), in my opinion.

Good luck!

Do you liked something in this game? You know like pros and cons...and not just cons...

 

[Ogre]

Amazing how whiny people on this board are.

You are getting free games. Free. Don't play if it's not your cup of tea, but for fuck's sake stop bitching. No one cares if you don't like the genre. You aren't the king of the world - no one needs to cater to your personal interests.

and thanks for your effort OP. It looks fun.

 

[SpikeZg]

great start, will be watching this, tnx

 

[wurg]

A piece of constructive criticism: On the nipple biting scene all the renders looked good to me until the last one, I have no idea how hard it is to render these kinds of things, but the last render didn't look natural to me. It look like a cone on top of a ball, for lack of a better description. To me it would look better to have to whole boob stretch out rather than just the nipple.
For me it is these little things that will take me out of a game and ruin it for me, things that don't look natural. The little things are probably the biggest pain-in-the-ass for the renders, but for me they draw me into the story more.
Just my two cents, hope it helps. Keep plugging away, it looks good so far.

 

[Part]

Lots of bad comments but a lot of private messages to encourage (thanks ).
I'm working on the 0.2 version.

I will respond to one question that need to be answered.

The "puffy shirt" from Sienfeld episode :
It's interesting because my English corrector tells me the same, and I didn't understand (he gives me the setence about the parrot in the game). For me (and frenchies ?), it's not a pirate suit. It's just an old fashioned shirt (medieval to Renaissance period). Nick (with this puffy shirt) has a fashion cloth shop, so I create a quirky character. In France, people who are working in fashion business can be incredible how they were dressed.

Thanks to people who are reporting me bugs. I have corrected bugs.

Thanks to all people with constructive responses, I have red very carefully and will try to do better in v0.2.

Thanks for the encouragement.

Thanks to the french community

 

[macadam]

Lots of bad comments but a lot of private messages to encourage (thanks ).
I'm working on the 0.2 version.

I will respond to one question that need to be answered.

The "puffy shirt" from Sienfeld episode :
It's interesting because my English corrector tells me the same, and I didn't understand (he gives me the setence about the parrot in the game). For me (and frenchies ?), it's not a pirate suit. It's just an old fashioned shirt (medieval to Renaissance period). Nick (with this puffy shirt) has a fashion cloth shop, so I create a quirky character. In France, people who are working in fashion business can be incredible how they were dressed.

Thanks to people who are reporting me bugs. I have corrected bugs.

Thanks to all people with constructive responses, I have red very carefully and will try to do better in v0.2.

Thanks for the encouragement.

Thanks to the french community

its not only in france.. all around the world, peoples who work on fashion always have the weirdest taste for clothes XD
( funny fact is most of french fashion creator tend to only wear black and white stuff :/ )


also, for fixing a point with everybody.. the renaissance period is the exact same period of the great piracy (1550-1650) .
both pirates and nobles used the same outfit style ( except better quality and materials for nobles).

thats why it can easily be considered as both.