VN Ren'Py Abandoned Camille : The Countdown [v0.2] [Part]

[iodio]

Do you liked something in this game? You know like pros and cons...and not just cons...

I like the general setting of the game.

Apologies if my comment sounded too harsh, I was aiming at giving constructive criticism. I stated a fact (there are no choices at the moment) and three things i don't like in the game (bland characters personality, rushed story and some details in the renders). The dev is free to do what s/he want with these points -- I expressed my opinion to help improve the game, but of course it's just my point of view, i don't pretend (nor claimed) it to be universal.

 

[balvenie1401]

Lots of bad comments but a lot of private messages to encourage (thanks ).
I'm working on the 0.2 version.

I will respond to one question that need to be answered.

The "puffy shirt" from Sienfeld episode :
It's interesting because my English corrector tells me the same, and I didn't understand (he gives me the setence about the parrot in the game). For me (and frenchies ?), it's not a pirate suit. It's just an old fashioned shirt (medieval to Renaissance period). Nick (with this puffy shirt) has a fashion cloth shop, so I create a quirky character. In France, people who are working in fashion business can be incredible how they were dressed.

Thanks to people who are reporting me bugs. I have corrected bugs.

Thanks to all people with constructive responses, I have red very carefully and will try to do better in v0.2.

Thanks for the encouragement.

Thanks to the french community

I liked the game so far, will be following this. Tried to find you on PAtreon but no success :/ Are you not on there or am I just failing in finding you? Cheers

 

[Yanis Batler]

Russian Version

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Aleksandr Matveev

 

[Gloub]

that's a pretty good start
I'll definitly look for the next updates

 

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I liked the game so far, will be following this. Tried to find you on PAtreon but no success :/ Are you not on there or am I just failing in finding you? Cheers

I'm not on PAtreon and I will not be (forbidden to earn money from another job that mine). I'm just here (on this forum) for years

Russian Version

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Aleksandr Matveev

I've checked, it's virus free.
Could you tell me where did you find this Russian Version ?
Is it a google translate version or a good translate version ?
It's interesting that my project could be translate in Russian.

 

[balvenie1401]

I'm not on PAtreon and I will not be (forbidden to earn money from another job that mine). I'm just here (on this forum) for years




I've checked, it's virus free.
Could you tell me where did you find this Russian Version ?
Is it a google translate version or a good translate version ?
It's interesting that my project could be translate in Russian.

Weel fair enough, thanks for the answer Will be keeping an eye peered here then

 

[El bacca Del Chew]

Lots of bad comments but a lot of private messages to encourage

As a french man, you must get used to critics and bad vibes. It is kind of second nature for Frenchies to trash before even knowing so...sadly not the only ones it seems.
Anyway, will try the game soon and if seems appropriate will send few feedbacks. All that bla bla just to wish you good luck and as long you have fun, enjoy ! It's all that matters.

 

[balvenie1401]

Gotta say that it's quite impressive for only being at it for 2 months, I played several games with alot worse renders by devs who's been active for years.
Well done sir!

 

[birdienam]

Nice start, very short though.

 

[89898hh]

Has potential looking forward to more!

 

[Sabot]

I like it, Camille is a very good looking character and I can't wait to see how the story goes.

 

[Goblin Baily: DILF]

@Part is the story set in Lille ?

 

[Part]

@Part is the story set in Lille ?

Hum, why do you think the story set in Lille ?

 

[Jansen]

Wow. The model is really hot and thick, but seems like the game pace is going to fast. But Really like it. @Part

Eagerly waiting for next update. When Can we expect 0.2 version?

 

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I've done 35 new renders for the new day. I think there will be about 100 and probably more renders for the new day.
I have the GTX 1080, and will buy 2080 or 2080 Ti, it will improve a lot the time render.
I'm going to Ireland from 10.19.2018 to 11.02.2018. The goal is to upload the 0.2v before going abroad.

I've lost a lot of time in improving my lvl in Daz3D just after the 0.1 release :
- I learn dForce for clothes, it's pretty amazing.
- I didn't undersand how to use outside lights in the 0.1 version. Now, I am doing outside renders, it's quite good.

Here are two renders (preparatory work) with dForce clothes and outside scene and Camille :

 

[Badshaah]

Simply Looks Amazing to play
Thanks for sharing

 

[Angua21]

I don't often download a version 0.1 of a game, but this one has piqued my interest. Good luck with the game - lets hope Camille's decent into corruption is not too rapid!

 

[Carlos RAW]

I really liked your game, I will look forward to version 2

 

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News about v0.2 release :
There will be 4 different scenes.
I have made 100+ renders at the moment for v0.2 (there was 72 renders in v0.1), I think there will be 130-150 new renders in v0.2.
I learn a lot in Daz3d (clothes, lights (inside and outside, DForce, ...), renders, and a lot of other things.)
4 new characters.
Release date ? As I said, I'm in Ireland 15 days from 19th october to 3 november) and I can't finish before leaving. So, my goal is to release the v0.2 before the 12 november.

Here are some renders of the new day, I hope you will love them :

Spoiler: in the v0.2, preview

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Cheers.

 

[balvenie1401]

News about v0.2 release :
There will be 4 different scenes.
I have made 100+ renders at the moment for v0.2 (there was 72 renders in v0.1), I think there will be 130-150 new renders in v0.2.
I learn a lot in Daz3d (clothes, lights (inside and outside, DForce, ...), renders, and a lot of other things.)
4 new characters.
Release date ? As I said, I'm in Ireland 15 days from 19th october to 3 november) and I can't finish before leaving. So, my goal is to release the v0.2 before the 12 november.

Here are some renders of the new day, I hope you will love them :

Spoiler: in the v0.2, preview

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Cheers.

Yeeeey, looking forward to this mate, cheers