Hmm This is actually a very good start imo, way more promising than many others VN.
The setting of the story is not necessaly original but everything comes to what situations and scenes Camille will go trough during the game, there is already some good erotic scenes. You absolutely don't have to makes the most original or crazy story to makes exciting and good erotic scenes, actually one of the most aclaimed VN on this webstise "GGGB"started with the same mindset as this game.
Even if it's only the start I like the way the story/scenes goes on: there is not a shit ton of useless speach that I end up skiping like others VN, in this one the dialogue makes the story progress quickly in a good way but it's not "on your face" str8 to the porn either. It's just the perfect pace the genre imo, I hope the rest continues like that while you focus on making good erotic situations.
I like both of the main characters, even if some people are going to say that having an older dude kinda black-mailing a hot girl is a bit cliché in the genre, not only the landlord looks way more realistic than your typical Weinstein fat guy model but it also makes sense for him to be older than the MC, and it also adds to the perversion than an older man makes a younger does nasty stuff, it makes the story more erotic/perverted but like everyting it's a matter of taste.
Camille also have a lot of charm, she does not look like just another perfect VN model and that's the best thing about her.
+ The renders are also very good
Really looking forward to more content, this is promising and worth a look already.
If I have 1 advice it would be to makes choices matters and no too obvious. Not the typical "yes i want to fuck and go full slut" or "no im a shy virgine" and if you choose "no" you basically skip the sex scene and have nothing. I rather have no choice than that personnaly.