(as of Day4 upgrading my review to 5 stars. All my concerns noted below are being addressed by the dev. This is my favourite game on this site).
Normally I wouldn't review a game so early in its development, especially one with original artwork - strong starts that lose their way are kind of a thing here on this site.
But this game - actually VN with some choice and minigames - is such a strong start. It's all sorts of good stuff, and a real refreshing change from the usual fare. It's super sexy, and the pacing is perfect, allowing you to really enjoy the erotic build-up for each scene.
The design reminds me of Sam Raimi's first films. I mean, it's primitive, with character models like cut-outs, but, innovation thrives in constraints, and there is so much clever, creative stuff happening here, neat little animations, expressions, closeups... it stays very fresh and lively. I love the sidelong glances, and the hair-flips, omg, the hair-flips... Just wonderful.
Story, so far, seems to be pretty much out of the 80s, think Up The Creek or Meatballs. I totally don't mind. It's the eroticism that fuels the story. The characters started off nicely differentiated, although I worry that they may become interchangeable... I mean, they can't all be suppressed bdsm horndogs, please? And the sassy redhead friend is pretty much magic and doesn't fit. She's a walking deus ex machina and I would prefer if the story didn't depend so much on her telling people things.
As for the MC... well, he's great. For once we get an MC you actually don't mind identifying with. He's so much better than all those mopey fatherless daz-dudes. Why can't we have more like him?
My biggest concern is to keep the characters consistent to how they've been developed so far, too many similar revelations, too much "Hey, whaddya know, I'm into masturbating on a saddle, too" makes things boring. If everyone has the same fetish then it's no more interesting than giving everyone a popeye chicken sandwich.
The dialogue confuses me. At times it's great, funny, natural and idiomatic, but then it veers into some kind of code and I have no idea what people are talking about. Maybe that's me? I haven't kept up with how teenage camp counselors talk these days.
But I sure hope I haven't jinxed this one, because it's really good.