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I have thought about it. With the way the game's story develops, I don't see any way in which a harem ending would be possible. I'm sorry :(
Pleased about that. I despise harems and they don't fit this setting.
If the MC is a player or cheating, it should cause drama, not a harem.

I'm a fan of the college AVN genre and this is a good start.
Dialogue flowed nicely and I didn't get bored reading.

The LIs are likable thus far.
Still a lot to learn about them.

The bros personalities could have more range to differentiate them.
None of them stood out.
It's only the first chapter, so that's not surprising.

Overall, good first effort.
Looking forward to the future chapters.
 
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AnimeHentaiGamer

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Pleased about that. I despise harems and they don't fit this setting.
If the MC is a player or cheating, it should cause drama, not a harem.

I'm a fan of the college AVN genre and this is a good start.
Dialogue flowed nicely and I didn't get bored reading.

The LIs are likable thus far.
Still a lot to learn about them.

The bros personalities could have more range to differentiate them.
None of them stood out.
It's only the first chapter, so that's not surprising.

Overall, good first effort.
Looking forward to the future chapters.
also 100% agree.
 

Daddy-S

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So I got to the part we go to the club with the bouncer outside and saw 3 different scenario's at this point.

1. If Sadie and Tracy's trust are equal Ken comes out and speaks to him to get you admitted to the club.
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2. Sadie trust >4 so you have been invested in Sadie. She come's out looks into the bouncers eyes and makes him happy but wont tell you what she promised, seems shady but not a total loss.
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3. If Tracy's Trust >4 so you've invested more in Tracy, she does similar but walks off with the bouncer. Even more shady.
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At first I was thinking so the girl's you dont pick are going to be fucking other people, but dev told me its just rando's? then it dawned on me I had actually invested the most in Tracy to get this scene. I mean what am I supposed to think here, in a porn game? seems she is going to the alley to suck his cock or similar to get us in.

Not sure what is going on here but this is where I stopped playing and decided to wait a couple update's see how this plays out. This scene just made it seem like I was in for some "technically not NTR" offscreen, not feeling the vibe at this point. The girl you invested in "persuades" the bouncer, if you didn't invest in either of them Ken gets you in.
 

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So I got to the part we go to the club with the bouncer outside and saw 3 different scenario's at this point.

1. If Sadie and Tracy's trust are equal Ken comes out and speaks to him to get you admitted to the club.
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2. Sadie trust >4 so you have been invested in Sadie. She come's out looks into the bouncers eyes and makes him happy but wont tell you what she promised, seems shady but not a total loss.
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3. If Tracy's Trust >4 so you've invested more in Tracy, she does similar but walks off with the bouncer. Even more shady.
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At first I was thinking so the girl's you dont pick are going to be fucking other people, but dev told me its just rando's? then it dawned on me I had actually invested the most in Tracy to get this scene. I mean what am I supposed to think here, in a porn game? seems she is going to the alley to suck his cock or similar to get us in.

Not sure what is going on here but this is where I stopped playing and decided to wait a couple update's see how this plays out. This scene just made it seem like I was in for some "technically not NTR" offscreen, not feeling the vibe at this point. The girl you invested in "persuades" the bouncer, if you didn't invest in either of them Ken gets you in.
Hello! Sorry for the confusion. As I’ve stated before, this won’t be an NTR game, so the Bouncer won’t be sucked off in the alley. I’m going to give more answers in the next episode as to what happened and what the girls told the bouncer. I don’t want to give any spoilers to ruin any player’s experience, but if people are going to be really demanding an answer, I am going to give one. Thank you for understanding and again, I’m sorry for any bad experiences here.
 

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Hello! Sorry for the confusion. As I’ve stated before, this won’t be an NTR game, so the Bouncer won’t be sucked off in the alley. I’m going to give more answers in the next episode as to what happened and what the girls told the bouncer. I don’t want to give any spoilers to ruin any player’s experience, but if people are going to be really demanding an answer, I am going to give one. Thank you for understanding and again, I’m sorry for any bad experiences here.
Don't respond, it's exactly the theories among users that make games grow. My theory when I played was that the girl's parents owned half the town, in my case it was Sadie, but since a friend mentioned that the same scene repeats with Tracy, I'm not sure anymore. Only if they are half-sisters with different mothers, I don't know if your game will have a bit of Intertwined.
 

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Don't respond, it's exactly the theories among users that make games grow. My theory when I played was that the girl's parents owned half the town, in my case it was Sadie, but since a friend mentioned that the same scene repeats with Tracy, I'm not sure anymore. Only if they are half-sisters with different mothers, I don't know if your game will have a bit of Intertwined.
Of course, I don’t want to give too much information to spoil the experience. I also don’t want to leave players confused as to what fetishes are and will be in the game. The answers will come at the right time. As for the tags used, if I stated that a tag will never be used, expect to never see it in the future.
 
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jadepaladin

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Is Francesca some kind of secret bodybuilder? The MC seems to be pretty in shape and she has a tiny frame but when they collided he fell? It felt like the first interaction with Maya in BaDIK but at least he went out on a piece of paper and didn't get body checked by someone probably 50lbs lighter than him.
 

MiltonPowers

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Sorry, I'm not gonna add it. :(
That's good. Although you wouldn't know it from comments on threads. Not EVERY game has to be a harem. I love variety. I love Harem games, but I love Solo Romance games too. I love fuckfest and I also love slowburn. There should be a place for all different types. How boring would it be if every game was the same. You do You MCVN! I really enjoyed the first release!
 

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That's good. Although you wouldn't know it from comments on threads. Not EVERY game has to be a harem. I love variety. I love Harem games, but I love Solo Romance games too. I love fuckfest and I also love slowburn. There should be a place for all different types. How boring would it be if every game was the same. You do You MCVN! I really enjoyed the first release!
Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed my game! :D
 
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