Idk, I love the premise but the dialouge is mid. Maybe this isn't the right kink for me. These types of stories are always "you like it when i do this huh" "noooo stop...I...hyaah" "hehe your body's telling the truth" And they manage to stretch that out into a 10-20 minute scene.
I think I like it more when the female dom or when theyre both perverts. funbag fantasy and How to Live a Healthy Hentai Lifestyle! were amazing though.