- Oct 21, 2018
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Flow4Master I'm still playing it, but just 2 tips for now:
1 - The Gallery was spelled "Galery"
2 - If you enter the Police Station, talk to Gina, press leave and enter again. It duplicates the entry in the journal.
update:
3 - If you sleep again after the package arrives, the package disappears.
1 - The Gallery was spelled "Galery"
2 - If you enter the Police Station, talk to Gina, press leave and enter again. It duplicates the entry in the journal.
update:
3 - If you sleep again after the package arrives, the package disappears.
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So just a few notes/recommendations:
The Dialogue needs the most work, (Im gonna guess that the original author is Spanish speaking, which is why sentences start with "!? why did you do that".) Gonna need some edits to make it sound more fluent in English. As just about every other sentence has an issue with it or could be at least cleaned up even if its technically correct.
I would recommend a little more detail on the phone menu to help guide players for each of the girl's paths, this will help make it not so necessary for every player to have a guide on their second screen.
I'll give you an A for effort that the characters at least don't sound like horny sluts in their opening dialogues with each person having believable goals that don't exist around the main characters plot.
Also +1 for having girls with realistic clothing and body types for their characters. I didn't even have to minimize this game when someone came in my room randomly.
The Dialogue needs the most work, (Im gonna guess that the original author is Spanish speaking, which is why sentences start with "!? why did you do that".) Gonna need some edits to make it sound more fluent in English. As just about every other sentence has an issue with it or could be at least cleaned up even if its technically correct.
I would recommend a little more detail on the phone menu to help guide players for each of the girl's paths, this will help make it not so necessary for every player to have a guide on their second screen.
I'll give you an A for effort that the characters at least don't sound like horny sluts in their opening dialogues with each person having believable goals that don't exist around the main characters plot.
Also +1 for having girls with realistic clothing and body types for their characters. I didn't even have to minimize this game when someone came in my room randomly.
- Jul 29, 2017
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So I am a bit lost what to do to get past the mayor's guards or to even talk to the woman that you need to talk to as I think its the female cop in the main area of the police station but all I can ask is mundane questions no matter the time of day that I go to her. all the walkthough says is that it is based on your interactions with Gina and then answers oO
There are tutorial screens at the start of the game. The problem is that some of the players do not bother at all with reading "the author's attempts to create a plot" and simply skip the dialogues in order to quickly get to the porn / erotic scenes. I really do not want to lead the player by the handle at every turn, as in most games of a similar theme. And English, of course, is not my native language, a native speaker promised to help, only he warned that he did not have free time yet. Thank you for your feedback.
You need to come to the mayor during the meeting with the voters-afternoon.
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how to get sister out of prison for ordering 'origins' from computer as i cannot see anything on computer
Keep getting this error during the intro. Using Joiplay for Android
Code:
I'm sorry, but an uncaught exception occurred.
While running game code:
KeyError: u'???'
-- Full Traceback ------------------------------------------------------------
Full traceback:
File "script.rpyc", line 358, in script call
File "prolog_1.rpyc", line 100, in script
File "renpy/ast.py", line 715, in execute
File "renpy/exports.py", line 1393, in say
File "renpy/character.py", line 1184, in __call__
File "renpy/character.py", line 1179, in sub
File "renpy/substitutions.py", line 270, in substitute
File "/home/tom/ab/renpy-build/tmp/install.linux-x86_64/lib/python2.7/string.py", line 563, in vformat
File "/home/tom/ab/renpy-build/tmp/install.linux-x86_64/lib/python2.7/string.py", line 585, in _vformat
File "/home/tom/ab/renpy-build/tmp/install.linux-x86_64/lib/python2.7/string.py", line 646, in get_field
File "/home/tom/ab/renpy-build/tmp/install.linux-x86_64/lib/python2.7/string.py", line 605, in get_value
KeyError: u'???'
- Apr 25, 2017
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You missed to say those sex scenes are some random guys fucking some girls, like the interracial one, I stopped playing after that.
It's a shame because I did like the art and the game but I'm not into that type of voyeurism and certainly I'm not into seeing Li's getting fucked. ( I dunno if that girl is a Li but still that scene is forced on the player and there is many people that don't like forced things like that ...)
Good luck anyways with the game.
MC is surrounded by all those hot babes but has the same resting bitch face on every screenshot 
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Here is my very first attempt to create a fan art signature:
- Oct 26, 2017
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Yeah, The MC is about as exciting as TurnipMC is surrounded by all those hot babes but has the same resting bitch face on every screenshot