Hello.
The samples made me come. And the result is raw.
The worldbuilding is limited but fitting.
The characters are few, different and could be introduced better.
The plot is common but the angle you choose to treat it seems original.
The photos/videos are well chosen, though too similar to My Secret Desire.
A loving maried man is surrounded by beautiful ladies. How much longer can he stay faithful and resist the temptation, even more if they plot behind his back for him to succumb?
Since it's a porn game, we all know what will happen but the twist at the end was unexpected (it isn't the one we thought at the start who is caught).
It's just a short introduction of how his life is organized. The characters aren't that much described (even the one for the new employee is too succinct). The flow of events is correct but very quick. You should be more original in your future updates with your images/clips choice (it could be bad if it became a rehash of other games, even a different storytelling wouldn't erase a feeling that strong). The dialogs boxes colors are fine (Ada's and Killy's are too similar though).
The sex scenes are nice and interactive. The only problem is the arrangement of the links of the positions : they change line, can be at the left or the right and we don't know which one we are seeing (it should just be greyed/unavailable).
It has already been said that your english needs some work but at least don't be wrong about your own name
.
Good continuation.
The samples made me come. And the result is raw.
The worldbuilding is limited but fitting.
The characters are few, different and could be introduced better.
The plot is common but the angle you choose to treat it seems original.
The photos/videos are well chosen, though too similar to My Secret Desire.
A loving maried man is surrounded by beautiful ladies. How much longer can he stay faithful and resist the temptation, even more if they plot behind his back for him to succumb?
Since it's a porn game, we all know what will happen but the twist at the end was unexpected (it isn't the one we thought at the start who is caught).
It's just a short introduction of how his life is organized. The characters aren't that much described (even the one for the new employee is too succinct). The flow of events is correct but very quick. You should be more original in your future updates with your images/clips choice (it could be bad if it became a rehash of other games, even a different storytelling wouldn't erase a feeling that strong). The dialogs boxes colors are fine (Ada's and Killy's are too similar though).
The sex scenes are nice and interactive. The only problem is the arrangement of the links of the positions : they change line, can be at the left or the right and we don't know which one we are seeing (it should just be greyed/unavailable).
It has already been said that your english needs some work but at least don't be wrong about your own name
.Good continuation.
