She calls it a trip down memory lane.nope i think that was just more her fantasy to get herself off in that moment.
and in the end she thought "HE´s in my FANTASYS again" and not "he invades my memorys again" or something like that.She calls it a trip down memory lane.
I haven't analyzed it at all.....yet.As opposed to your amateur analysis?
Us? you mean me and you or you and everybody else?Thats good for us then, right?
That sounds like a mistake in the script like it was supposed to be one or the other but both ended up included.and in the end she thought "HE´s in my FANTASYS again" and not "he invades my memorys again" or something like that.
Honestly if i had am issue with this i really wouldn't say anything i would just move on gonna have wait for the nest update before i decide. Its the devs story i'm not going to try and change it.me and everyone else
i can agree with you the story is going well except for that ending , it makes no sense, even if its just for drama , it will only make people mad and drop this ( i have gave up of some games for the same reason ) , i wouldnt mind if it was another guy just to make MC jealous ( with no NTR of course and with MC getting the girl in the end ) but adding that other asshole rapist makes no sense and is basically asking for backlash and people to drop thisHeh...this is probably the best VN I've read, story-wise, and most of the images are top shelf, yet there is so much butt hurt going on because people want to dictate someone else's story? Haha, man that's just all kinds of crazy right there. I mean really? You aren't being cucked. You aren't being a sleazy cheat. You aren't even being much of a manwhore, to be honest. Hell, the only complaint I've seen that I can half way agree on is that sleazy pos being brought back into the story. I'd drown the fooker and go back to wandering the world and say screw everything at that point. Drama is the only legit reason to bring that back. And if she is dating that pos I swear to god I'll drop this like a hot potato no matter how damn good it is. I swear it. lol
Yes, I'm fully aware that's a little hypocritical of me. But, damn it, there's only so much salt you can pour on a wound.
Still, you guys are still making some good shyte so keep up the good work.
P.S. Just in case it wasn't obvious the first time, if she's dating that ass hat I swear to all that's holy I'll burn this. Over a nice cozy fire, just like a marshmallow.
P.P.S. Oh, and then I'll pee on it to put it out. Only because I'm a gentleman.
P.P.P.S. After it marinates a few days I'll pour gasoline on it and set on fire. Again. To make sure it's done right this time.![]()
It makes perfect sense, if you to create unnecessary drama. Jaye is probably jealous of Mallory (who'll probably end up being the MC's sister from his mom's last marriage) and wants to make the MC jealous as well. Its pretty stupid though, since she was literally telling him to read between the lines, and the MC has always been good towards her.bringing the guy who almost raped you to the family yacht kind of makes zero sense
wth is wrong with the writer , why add the asshole that started this all to the ending ,makes no sense Jaye doesnt even like him or wants him nearby her , wth the story was going so well until this bs
where do you get that that jaye hooks up with tara????
that one scene was her fantasy,and if i remember correctly they just kissed or something while beeing drunk,and jaye made more of it with her fantasy to get herself off.
just want to say that ending with Jaye if that is her ex you will get backlash from many people, because it makes no sense that Jaye would invite the guy that almost raped her, just to make the MC jealous , since Jaye doesnt even like the guy. If that is the route you are going for , an honest advice, please drop it because that is not good writing, no person would invite their rapist to a family stuff. If that is not what you are going with then good, if you are adding that asshole in the yate be prepared for backlash and people dropping this game , i have saw some games doing that and people lose interest with stuff like that.
Jaye remembers when Tara came home with her after prom and they did a hell of a lot more than kiss.
and in the end she thought "HE´s in my FANTASYS again" and not "he invades my memorys again" or something like that.
Please remember them gurls have friends they care deeper than their bro or BF for.This update is actually pretty good, much better than first release. Finally we have some agency over mc. The only annoying thing was main character mumbling "It's not what it looks like" to sister after Mallory kiss. Come on man are you really gonna justify yourself to her?
Scene with milf was very nice apart from sudden anal sex. Mallory is cute and mysterious.
If Jaye really did invite the almost-rapist as her +1 to yacht just to hurt mc or make him jealous then her idiocy knows no bounds. And she looked so fucking smug too.Thank god now we have an option to tell her to beat it and explore other content.
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I like how your mind works, and part of me wants to agree with you, but I can't. The whole axe body spray thing seals it in my mind.It makes perfect sense, if you to create unnecessary drama. Jaye is probably jealous of Mallory (who'll probably end up being the MC's sister from his mom's last marriage) and wants to make the MC jealous as well. Its pretty stupid though, since she was literally telling him to read between the lines, and the MC has always been good towards her.
HOWEVER, I feel like it will, not be that douche from the party, but he will be the MCs traveller friend. They ended up on bad terms after 5 years. This is a classic misdirection I believe.
Yup, at this point currently I don't care much about her... so petty.Thank god now we have an option to tell her to beat it and explore other content.![]()
Couldn't agree moreIts pretty stupid though, since she was literally telling him to read between the lines, and the MC has always been good towards her.
Huh... this will really make the story real interesting for sure! this is a smart from Jaye if true.HOWEVER, I feel like it will, not be that douche from the party, but he will be the MCs traveller friend. They ended up on bad terms after 5 years. This is a classic misdirection I believe.
Yeah, that's what I get from the dialogue... but wouldn't that make her his biological sister? unless this is is an incest game *sigh*... why would she also have the hots for the MC?. Or is she just another step-sister? hmm...Mallory (who'll probably end up being the MC's sister from his mom's last marriage)
I'm not even sure why she gets to invite someone, as MC doesn't (Mallory is not there by his choice).just want to say that ending with Jaye if that is her ex you will get backlash from many people, because it makes no sense that Jaye would invite the guy that almost raped her, just to make the MC jealous , since Jaye doesnt even like the guy. If that is the route you are going for , an honest advice, please drop it because that is not good writing, no person would invite their rapist to a family stuff. If that is not what you are going with then good, if you are adding that asshole in the yate be prepared for backlash and people dropping this game , i have saw some games doing that and people lose interest with stuff like that.
That's cool. I do loose my cool with these kind of stories it gets my emotions really wound up and so I did over react. I don't really think the story is shit but I can't handle separation stories to well.Honestly if i had am issue with this i really wouldn't say anything i would just move on gonna have wait for the nest update before i decide. Its the devs story i'm not going to try and change it.
thats actually the correct war to say it grammatically in most casesI am no native englisch speaker and have a question about a couple of sentences that are bugging me.
just an example:
"He'd spend his days playing with Jaye an I"
The "I" disturbs me somehow, should there not be a "me" ? There are a couple sentences more like this. Is this a simple spelling mistake or the right english past tenses?
It honestly would be terribly stupid if it was the old rapey boyfriend. I don't care what twisted thinking is involved to try and make him jealous in return, it's not like he hasn't tried to be nice and reconcile with her while yet she's given him no chance, and still constantly pushing at him. This would just be over the top dumb to still be involved with the person that was the center of the mess in the first place, there's is no good outcome from that, it's just a one way ticket to mcgetthefuckoutofmylifeforeverville. He also can be swimming in so much pussy he doesn't need this one holding a jealous petty angry grudge for more than a decade now.It makes perfect sense, if you to create unnecessary drama. Jaye is probably jealous of Mallory (who'll probably end up being the MC's sister from his mom's last marriage) and wants to make the MC jealous as well. Its pretty stupid though, since she was literally telling him to read between the lines, and the MC has always been good towards her.
HOWEVER, I feel like it will, not be that douche from the party, but he will be the MCs traveller friend. They ended up on bad terms after 5 years. This is a classic misdirection I believe.