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Lets be real, the entire Jaye+Mal end feels tacked on anyways. Up until Jaye and MC are in bed at the end of the game I never once thought it felt like Jaye's character would be open to sharing the MC. Imo to make even that route make sense a whole bunch of conversations need to be added throughout the entire game to make it make sense, let alone a actual harem end.
The reason of, well she is basically family isnt a real reason for a relationship.
Nope, Tara basically steps aside when the mc and Jaye start reconnecting, texting the mc to help him (which you can refuse) and texting (Jaye always talks to Tara about everything) and getting nudges herself.
Tara is a character that is there to show support for the MC and Jaye and basically that is it. Once they're back together I'm guessing Tara backs out of their lives while still remaining in contact with Jaye from time to time as she is never shown around them once they return to the states.
Tara also said she would never sleep with the MC again and she was only there to support Jaye in her time of need. Which hints she will take a back seat as Jaye no longer needs her to help take care of her needs.
Does feel that way I agree.
But, she is basically their mother, the MC has shown he loves her and even to some extent Jaye has come to love her. Her and Jaye have some very close moments together as they go through different things in the story.
So, while I do agree, it seems last minute; the story was built to be this way. That is why you get the tally at the end of each chapter for Mal and Jaye and not every girl.
This is really a story about Mal, the MC and Jaye, again look at the love trust points which only include Jaye and Mal, not Amanda or Lisa or any of the other girls.
So, it was the Dev's intent, just poorly executed in the story.
I'm a writer/editor and I look at this story and shake my head, there is so much that needs fixed and clarified to make it much more solid. It could be so much better with just a few tweaks here and there...
I'd offer my help cleaning it up, but I doubt they would accept it. Nothing really needs major changes, just needs cleaned up and some little changes here and there to clarify things.
Not saying it's a bad story, just a bit unclear and jumbled up.
I really did enjoy it.
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Silver lining though. Tara will be a main LI in their next game - Firebreak.
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yeayy maybe.. not quiteSilver lining though. Tara will be a main LI in their next game - Firebreak.
because i just like her then jaye or mel overall
is there jaye & tara ending?
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This has given me a good chuckle this morning. "There's no closure to the Tara path. Tara just disappears after the airport pick-up." etc...
You know who else just disappears after the airport? George. But no one is complaining about him, because no one wants to fuck him There's no Tara path. There's no indication of anything to close with Tara. It's clear from the pick-up scene (and before, frankly) that there's nothing there. Both Tara and Jaye spell it out anyway, but they don't even need to do that. Anything that happened was in the past, and now the relationship is friends only as opposed to friends with benefits. Romantically, it was never anything more than that.
You know who else just disappears after the airport? George. But no one is complaining about him, because no one wants to fuck him
There's no Tara path. There's no indication of anything to close with Tara. It's clear from the pick-up scene (and before, frankly) that there's nothing there. Both Tara and Jaye spell it out anyway, but they don't even need to do that. Anything that happened was in the past, and now the relationship is friends only as opposed to friends with benefits. Romantically, it was never anything more than that.
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No one is complaining about that because we're all afraid of el Jorge.This has given me a good chuckle this morning. "There's no closure to the Tara path. Tara just disappears after the airport pick-up." etc...
You know who else just disappears after the airport? George. But no one is complaining about him, because no one wants to fuck him
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I know what you mean. Tara was (maybe still is) in love with MC, but she was going to keep those feelings bottled up and never act upon them. The only way to win Tara would be to break up with Jaye, which would you lose you Tara anyway for hurting Jaye. A circle that there was no way out of.This has given me a good chuckle this morning. "There's no closure to the Tara path. Tara just disappears after the airport pick-up." etc...
You know who else just disappears after the airport? George. But no one is complaining about him, because no one wants to fuck him
PS. I suspect Lisa has thought about George a few times since the unexpected reveal.
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The Mc, Jaye and Tara throuple makes more sense that the potential Mallory and Jaye one. The emotional investment the three of them have in growing up together and Tara being Jaye's best friend and quasi-lover makes no sense having her in the next game. At least that's the hill I'm willing to die on.
Hi guys!
I ended this update but my gallery looks like this. Where are the other scenes?
Did i do something wrong? I use every mods from here but nothins seems to work.Can anyone help me?
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I ended this update but my gallery looks like this. Where are the other scenes?
Did i do something wrong? I use every mods from here but nothins seems to work.Can anyone help me?
thanks
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I would go the other way. There are three people involved in a throuple, and they all have to be partners in it. Jaye and Tara have both stated they are not interested in this, and something that happened years ago isn't a good reason to say it makes perfect sense now.
The Jaye and Mallory relationship... there are two points here. One, the three are all close now, in the present. MC has (potentially) been intimate with both women, there are strong feelings on all sides - including Jaye and Mallory getting a lot closer and feeling like family. Two, it's actually polyamory rather than a throuple, so it doesn't matter if there are romantic feelings between Jaye and Mallory, as they are not set to be involved (Jaye clearly spells this out when offering the option). As marked in the character cards at the end, Jaye's/Mallory's love is "strong enough to explore polyamory". They love you enough to want you to have the other in your life, so long as you remain committed to both girls.
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I would agree it makes 100 times more sense as a throuple, but Jaye doesn't want a throuple. She doesn't want any sexual partner but MC, and she wants a family. Mal is family, Jaye is not threatened by her and really wants her to be around. She knows there is love between them that is a different love to what Jaye & Mal have. She also makes it very clear, that MC is going to have to work and ensure both of them always feel the center of his world. It's not the way I would have thought it would go, but listening to Jaye, I understand where she is coming from and what she wants. Jaye has got the Poly relationship she is happy to have, not the throuple we all hoped for. As long as MC remains committed to both of them and no one else.
Of course, this could all change in the next update.
Many times it has been said there is no Tara ending.
Tara was a supporting character, she was used to help the MC and Jaye get together. She took care of Jaye's desire for the MC, which Jaye did not return to Tara (it was one sided). She tried to keep the MC from leaving even giving up her virginity to do so.
She then told the MC she would never have sex with him again, it was a one time thing. She explained what was going on between her and Jaye and that they were just friends and nothing else.
Towards the end of the VN Jaye make it clear she is not into women at all, once again showing that the Tara thing was one sided.
This is a VN about the MC, Mal, and Jaye. The tally screen makes this perfectly clear.
I seen in a post a few spots down about Lisa and the lawyer, I doubt Lisa is in him. She all but panics when she finds out she has to ride with him in a cab at the airport, but you never know.