Just played through and enjoyed it very much. Seems to be a good story-line written very well. I like that the writer(s) seem to have a grasp with the English language so I can stay immersed in the story.
Contrary to popular belief, incest is not required in every game on this site. Chasing Sunsets is fantastic so I can't imagine that adding brother/sister sex would add anything to the story so far.
Very nice graphics/renders with great choices of colors.
With regards to the text box using white lettering on a white background, while at the bar, I find it a bit difficult. Even changing the opacity doesn't really help enough for me. Also concerning the text box, since this is more of a novel than a game, at least at this point, I would like more than one line at a time. It's like reading a good book with only one line per page and annoying to have to click for each sentence.
I very much appreciate being able to click to bypass/speedup graphics in games so not being able to during scenes like the wedding image as well as the sex scenes is very frustrating.
The background music seems very nice but I always mute game sounds....sorry.
Again, it seems like a great story so far. I don't know where it's going but I do know that I'm really enjoying myself.
Thanks and Best of Luck