the plot is good, there was no sense of "this could have been removed and nothing would have changed". A little intrigue holds up. The dialogue is interesting to read. The game gives emotion, not just shagging.
The characters are not dumb, with their emotions and characters. The characters behave in their own way, but not once was there a reaction of "what the fuck are you doing" - all their actions lend themselves to logic.
Maximum enjoyment came from the expressions of the characters' faces, they are really lifelike. The game deserves to be read, maybe more than once. I'm so in awe of the way the MC was made. Not a skinny kid with a 30cm bolt. That alone is something to thank the author for. Definitely 10/10
The characters are not dumb, with their emotions and characters. The characters behave in their own way, but not once was there a reaction of "what the fuck are you doing" - all their actions lend themselves to logic.
Maximum enjoyment came from the expressions of the characters' faces, they are really lifelike. The game deserves to be read, maybe more than once. I'm so in awe of the way the MC was made. Not a skinny kid with a 30cm bolt. That alone is something to thank the author for. Definitely 10/10