slick97
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The above discussions are great, and so I'll throw my two cents in.
Its hinted at within the story that Jaye is the true love interest for the MC just by the things they've done as kids and teenagers. MC has always loved Jaye (and his parents) to the point he left because he felt it was the best option for Jaye to grow as her own person. However its clear that both MC and Jaye were hurt by this decision that was a result of miscommunication from day one. Jaye says it best during chapter 4, its not up to the MC to make decisions for her and he needs to accept that if a relationship is going to work between them.
Mallory also works as a love interest for similar reasons. During their time in Aspen the MC sees a side of her thats broken, leading him to feel as if he needs to protect her like he does with Jaye. However Mallory is a more tragic character due to her birth being an enigma and her father being a shitty person. She's even haunted by his insults as she still hears him up until she starts getting closer to the MC (mentioned in chapter 3 when she messages her best friend). In a way the MC unknowingly helps to fix the broken parts of her just by being supportive of her whenever possible.
Both characters can fill the role of the main love interest for the MC, but choosing Jaye feels tragic for Mallory. Chapter 4 addresses her thoughts towards the relationship between the MC and Jaye in which she knows how much he loves her. She accepts that he'll ultimately choose Jaye but hopes to be able to experience intimacy before that choice is made.
The story crafting by Kentyrr and Stoya has been fantastic and continues to improve. From the previews of chapter 5 it's apparent some difficult times are ahead of us. It'll be interesting if it'll be the "crossroads" chapter that'll cut off all other relationships moving forward.
Its hinted at within the story that Jaye is the true love interest for the MC just by the things they've done as kids and teenagers. MC has always loved Jaye (and his parents) to the point he left because he felt it was the best option for Jaye to grow as her own person. However its clear that both MC and Jaye were hurt by this decision that was a result of miscommunication from day one. Jaye says it best during chapter 4, its not up to the MC to make decisions for her and he needs to accept that if a relationship is going to work between them.
Mallory also works as a love interest for similar reasons. During their time in Aspen the MC sees a side of her thats broken, leading him to feel as if he needs to protect her like he does with Jaye. However Mallory is a more tragic character due to her birth being an enigma and her father being a shitty person. She's even haunted by his insults as she still hears him up until she starts getting closer to the MC (mentioned in chapter 3 when she messages her best friend). In a way the MC unknowingly helps to fix the broken parts of her just by being supportive of her whenever possible.
Both characters can fill the role of the main love interest for the MC, but choosing Jaye feels tragic for Mallory. Chapter 4 addresses her thoughts towards the relationship between the MC and Jaye in which she knows how much he loves her. She accepts that he'll ultimately choose Jaye but hopes to be able to experience intimacy before that choice is made.
The story crafting by Kentyrr and Stoya has been fantastic and continues to improve. From the previews of chapter 5 it's apparent some difficult times are ahead of us. It'll be interesting if it'll be the "crossroads" chapter that'll cut off all other relationships moving forward.