I see.
I keep having to delay a more detailed commentary on Chapter 4, but for now I'll say I hope you'll consider adding the chance. I was sad at how abruptly Mallory's path closes; I understand what she was asking, but from my point of view she was still moving way too fast (at least for people who haven't known each other very long). Plus, there's no follow-up on the matter the next day (though admittedly I might not have seen everything thanks to the lunch bug).
The closure of Jaye's path works better as the issue has been brewing a lot longer. But even there I still feel like we shouldn't have to leap straight into bed (literally and figuratively) before we have a chance to talk things over with Jaye. And if the romance is doomed at that point, it still would have been nice if we could at least discuss the matter before walking away.
I'm usually atypical about this sort of thing, but that's how I see it.