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Just finished 6 chapter and... wow. Wow, wow, wow, just fuckin wow. That is the most beautiful love story I have ever seen in game or even in my whole life. Feelings expressions are just so well written...
At the beginning I got some doubts, it was looking pretty boring, so much text without any real decisions to make or gameplay itself but it got better pretty quickly. This is actually the first VN where the LI was obvious for me since the very beginning. Mallory is great character and in any other game I would probably pick her but here... she never had a chance. Since game has still potential and some mysteries in plot which will be unrelieved in next chapters, for me it could really end here. The whole story is complete, since beginning it was about Laya and MC love and rest is just noisy background, nice to have but no one can complain if author/s decide to cut it here.
I'm bad at using words with grace so I will end here. Great job, perfect example how VN should look like.
At the beginning I got some doubts, it was looking pretty boring, so much text without any real decisions to make or gameplay itself but it got better pretty quickly. This is actually the first VN where the LI was obvious for me since the very beginning. Mallory is great character and in any other game I would probably pick her but here... she never had a chance. Since game has still potential and some mysteries in plot which will be unrelieved in next chapters, for me it could really end here. The whole story is complete, since beginning it was about Laya and MC love and rest is just noisy background, nice to have but no one can complain if author/s decide to cut it here.
I'm bad at using words with grace so I will end here. Great job, perfect example how VN should look like.
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Someone's got taboo fever!
Just kidding bro. Welcome to the fanclub. You'll be converted to #TEAMMALLORY sooner than you think. It's the correct path.
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Giving my soul at stake that it is not gonna happen everSomeone's got taboo fever!
Just kidding bro. Welcome to the fanclub. You'll be converted to #TEAMMALLORY sooner than you think. It's the correct path.
#TEAMJAYEThere is nothing special in Mallory path, story like that can be found... everywhere. Being best friends since childhood and in love since ever and not being able to get rid of this emotions for couple years on the other hand - that is some real one in a billion story. And not real a taboo since they are not blood related living in Alabama
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As the previous poster said, and as I hav said before, in ANY other game Mallory would be the obvious LI. But in this one my heart is with Jaye. I will happily fool around with Mallory for funsies, but the moment I have to decide between them, then for me persobally there is NO contest.Someone's got taboo fever!
Just kidding bro. Welcome to the fanclub. You'll be converted to #TEAMMALLORY sooner than you think. It's the correct path.
When the game is finished and I have enjoyed Jaye path to the fullest, only then will I go back and do a Mallory centric playthough. But until then my heart belongs to Jaye.
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Giving my soul at stake that it is not gonna happen ever
There is nothing special in Mallory path, story like that can be found... everywhere. Being best friends since childhood and in love since ever and not being able to get rid of this emotions for couple years on the other hand - that is some real one in a billion story. And not real a taboo since they are not blood related living in Alabama
Well, don't worry. It's okay for yall to be wrong from time to time
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Someone's got taboo fever!
Just kidding bro. Welcome to the fanclub. You'll be converted to #TEAMMALLORY sooner than you think. It's the correct path.
Can I make #TEAM JALISMAL, Pleasssssse.Giving my soul at stake that it is not gonna happen ever
There is nothing special in Mallory path, story like that can be found... everywhere. Being best friends since childhood and in love since ever and not being able to get rid of this emotions for couple years on the other hand - that is some real one in a billion story. And not real a taboo since they are not blood related living in Alabama
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And I have said before that in itself is a compliment to StoneFoxStudios in that Mallory is still an appealing enough character that others fall for her instead.Well, don't worry. It's okay for yall to be wrong from time to time
But having read through too many poor 2nd rate incest stories, it is rare that I have seen the relationship and banter between siblings done so well, even though technically they are not blood related. But their emotional connection is what makes them FEEL like true siblings and, along with Jaye being a smoking hot redhead, has meant that I personally have well an truly fallen for Jaye (even though she is still a virtual fictional character in a VN).
But it's ok to have a different opinion.....
I'm just sad Tara and Amanda are side chicks. I can see a couple of threesomes in future chapters, but I like them both more than Jaye and Mallory.
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I don't necessarily want threesomes but it would be welcome for Jaye to have more competition to overcome than just a clone of her mom. Having a path where Jaye is pitchfork angry and an unambivalent antagonist after finding out that Tara snaked her man would be awesome.
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Man, I might be the only one here who doesn't like Jaye all that much? All she got going for her is "I love my bro and I got boobs" and that's about it. Their love story is written well enough but the dev didn't give her any personality except the fact that she got a thing for bro.
Sure, I might be biased a bit because of my own "not blood related sister"(she was adopted).
Sure, I might be biased a bit because of my own "not blood related sister"(she was adopted).
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Nah i don't like Jaye either, never did. Also she blocks the Lisa route, which is imo a way more interesting LI.
Mallory is good althought i'm more curious about Amanda.
Yeah i would like a path with Jaye as clear antagonist, they even had the perfect opportunity.
Where you could ignore her during the storm, instead of a game over because apparently she saw the MC looking at her while drowning and everyone believing her, that would have made for a nice antagonist path.