I think the problem is people continue to create VN's with such formality that 1. they suck at it and it sounds like every character is a robot with a speech impediment and 2. this is especially true when it comes to sex scenes. It truly sounds like people lack the experience to write and the imagination to bring a steamy scene to life for readers to enjoy.
A lot of people just write some bullshit including constant Mmm's and Ahh's. Add some life to that shit. Especially if there's no animation to it. Put some sexy nasty dialogue in there like "Girl: Damn... You're so big, I think I'm gonna break! Fuuuu.... *panting* It feels so fucking good!" instead of "Girl: Mmmm... Ahhh.... Yes, yes!" --Shit... I almost fell asleep writing that second piece of dialogue.
Anyways, I would like to get into writing for VN's. Maybe one day, I can gather up enough focus to create my own.
Hey there! Writer and story creator here!hello fellow netizens
this is my game
https://f95zone.to/threads/cheating-wife-v0-2-blade7.34983/
i am looking for
writers that can improve the dialogues
writers that can correct my mistakes
and overall story helpers if you want to suggest something
send me a pm or post here
thank you very much
payment method
[ revenue share ] 10%-25% depending on the quality of work and speed
payment share will be permanent its not going to be changed if game becomes successful and earns more
i am not greedy and not making game just for money i want to gather a good team together and make many games this is ofc my first game
this is sample of how i want dialogues written
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characters short intro
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please contact me on Discord with a sample of your work
Blade7#9330
thank you my friend please join our discordI want this game to keep going and improving. I can help with grammar, dialogue, or words lost in translation. If you're interested, just send me a sample of something you want edited and I'll show u what I can do. Got plenty of time at home with the cold going around...
please join discordHey there! Writer and story creator here!