For being the first published version of what appears to be your first game made, the overall quality is fairly acceptable, even if it could use some work. The main premise and heavy focus on futa-on-futa is the best part so far, futa-on-futa seems to be a bit of a rarity on this site so anything that promises more in future updates is very welcome. Even if the text and dialogue could be fixed with better proofreading and translation, I assume English isn't your first language which means the grammatical errors and such are to be expected. Nothing about the game is particularly broken mechanically, which is a huge plus, though it helps that you don't have more "in-depth" mechanics like stats or points to worry about. My only real complaint is that most of the sex scenes don't have either a picture or animation for cumming, so all of them end a little too abruptly, and the ones that do show cum are all after the girl's already been came inside of.
First of all, thank you for your kind comment.
Yes, this is my first game and everything is new for me, ı'm trying to improve myself.
My priority for now was the progression of the story, and yes english is not my first language, so please forgive me about my mistakes.
Like you said "heavy focus on futa-on-futa", ı wanted to make a game about it.
I know some scenes need a lot of improvement, next update will be on this topic.
I'm working on this project alone, ı know this is not an excuse. I will fix these scenes and dialogues over time.
I want to create something special, if ı can.
