The game seems interesting. Played it via Android emulator and I liked what I've seen so far... The only thing I think you can work more into is the balancement of enemies/chars and the English, but I can even give myself as an example since I started my own game knowing a very poor-ish EngRish, and now I'm kind of (At least what people say) right on the kick... So don't worry, you will get used and when its time comes you can rework text, etc.
About the battle system; I highly recommend you to disable "Auto-Mode\Remember command" since it's pretty bad done by Rpgmaker Company itself.
About the quests system; I myself don't like quest/affair systems, but if you're going to use it, make sure to set it as "Optional/outside" of the game storyline. But I haven't found anything bad\soo boring to say of it. (Basically, because not everyone has guts to grind too much)
About the storyline; It's sure okay, you have something interesting to go with.. Don't know if I'm thinking too much but I feel some "Deus EX Machina" vibe coming from it. There's nothing wrong and every Dev has to work with what they feel comfier within, so take your time and do not change too much of your game's soul cause eventually, you will find people who will like it as it's meant to be writ.
Good luck.
About the battle system; I highly recommend you to disable "Auto-Mode\Remember command" since it's pretty bad done by Rpgmaker Company itself.
About the quests system; I myself don't like quest/affair systems, but if you're going to use it, make sure to set it as "Optional/outside" of the game storyline. But I haven't found anything bad\soo boring to say of it. (Basically, because not everyone has guts to grind too much)
About the storyline; It's sure okay, you have something interesting to go with.. Don't know if I'm thinking too much but I feel some "Deus EX Machina" vibe coming from it. There's nothing wrong and every Dev has to work with what they feel comfier within, so take your time and do not change too much of your game's soul cause eventually, you will find people who will like it as it's meant to be writ.
Good luck.