Well, I still don't know about the art. The original (main) art is fantastic, but it still clashes with the sex scenes of Priscilla and Lytta Neid (didn't she die at Sodden btw?). I understand the art is done quicker this way, but this disparateness really made me feel I'm playing two different games at once. Personally, I didn't find the secondary art style appealing, so I found myself in a weird spot where I was more turned on by stationary Ciri than actual H-scenes. And I dislike this level of ambivalence when fapping to a game.
Same goes for the writing - it is mostly simple (and sometimes bad) English, and then when scenes with Priscilla or Lytta come, it suddenly changes to a cringy attempt at Shakespeare or something. It reminded me of myself at 10 when I believed good writing means primarily sticking as much adjectives in the text as possible, resulting in a stylistic nightmare.
I don't mean to condemn the whole project for this - I enjoyed the game very much. But I would suggest aiming for a unified overall style for future projects. That and identifying what to focus on in games like this - Cwunt was fine, but when you can't really play it with anyone but Yen, what is the point? And the voiceover at the end...really unnecessary. It doesn't add anything to the game, and without a professional voice actor or at least a native speaker, it seems a little ridiculous.