I am sure everyone can use some ideas once in a while. Even if someone disagrees with what I say, maybe he can come up with something new by reflecting on it, enriching his own thinking.
The plotline with Katie and Victoria could be standalone, not influencing much. Or it could be the defining element of the story. I am for the latter, but the former is fine. Also, this is a graphic novel after all, meaningful choices with divergent plotlines are completely natural. I am sure this is feasible, an an option in the game.
Can a Patreon supporter who also reads this thread, mention it to him, please? I'll repeat it here for ease of use, and then someone can just copy&paste to him.
"I have an idea relating the narrative. In the endgame, If you cannot decide between Katie and Victoria, you could make them duke it out between themselves. You could arrange a meeting, telling them: "I simply cannot decide between you. It is up to you, which one of you can take me."
Victoria, being more aggressive would have an advantage, but lust and score points could modify the result as well. If Katie has more of either of these, that could balance or tip the scale.
This plotline definitely should definitely be part of the story. It would really hash out these two characters, adding some depth to them and the story. When a woman fights for a man, that relationship tends to be much happier and more stable (unless the guy fucks it up, which can happen of course).
Thanks, in advance."
