- May 22, 2018
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I liked this update more than previous ones since I was feeling like we were getting a few too many hscenes where it didnt make sense or felt natural but I see some people dont see it that way and would rather we have yet more out of place hscenes during one of the most dangerous events in the game so far.
I'll agree that the pacing was all over the place and some things didnt feel right like Vicotria not letting everyone know about the fact the only way to unlock the building to escape is from Meredith's office and instead just deciding to go off on her own in the middle of the raid, I would have understood her keeping it a secrect if it served a purpose in the story but instead 5 minutes later she tells us exactly why she did it so it felt completely pointless tho I did like the route where you dont go running off to help her more since there is much better dialogue between the Red Moon and MC.
The raid so far has been good but I'm hoping things dont just end with us walking out like its nothing, I dont expect anyone to die since its nothing but LIs with us but there is a chance Meredith from her safe room can somehow track Kleo and send some goons to get her to use as leverage or something.
One last note is this whole Meredith thing is just weird to me, especially her being naked in the safe room for no apparent reason other than to cater to the (I assume) very few people that are into her.
As a conclusion I think this chapter was shorter but better than the last 2 chapters in my opinion so I dont think complaining about its length is valid if you still care about the story and if you dont then why are you even reading it, the N in AVN stands for Novel not Nutting.
I'll agree that the pacing was all over the place and some things didnt feel right like Vicotria not letting everyone know about the fact the only way to unlock the building to escape is from Meredith's office and instead just deciding to go off on her own in the middle of the raid, I would have understood her keeping it a secrect if it served a purpose in the story but instead 5 minutes later she tells us exactly why she did it so it felt completely pointless tho I did like the route where you dont go running off to help her more since there is much better dialogue between the Red Moon and MC.
The raid so far has been good but I'm hoping things dont just end with us walking out like its nothing, I dont expect anyone to die since its nothing but LIs with us but there is a chance Meredith from her safe room can somehow track Kleo and send some goons to get her to use as leverage or something.
One last note is this whole Meredith thing is just weird to me, especially her being naked in the safe room for no apparent reason other than to cater to the (I assume) very few people that are into her.
As a conclusion I think this chapter was shorter but better than the last 2 chapters in my opinion so I dont think complaining about its length is valid if you still care about the story and if you dont then why are you even reading it, the N in AVN stands for Novel not Nutting.