VN Ren'Py Cléo Torres: The Dance of Life [v1.1.3-snapshot.4] [Static Fast Art]

[wildride69]

I’d really like to know your opinion about Vanessa’s story, no matter if positive or negative.

It's weird to me, Now you feel sorry for her and it takes away from her villainy path, but that's just my opinion. I'll try to back off this story for a few updates to see how this story develops.

 

[kcoope89]

Looks promising, hope dev sticks with this!

 

[johnyakuza1]

I’d really like to know your opinion about Vanessa’s story, no matter if positive or negative.

That fat bitch? Oh, please huh... I can't stand her and want to avoid her as much as possible. Although I'm still trying to keep an open mind to see where you take it instead of just skipping it entirely, but I'm currently not inclined to pursue that route at all.

Barbara on the other hand? Very hot!

 

[Ssato243]

i can wait for the lesbian gwen path please

 

[johnyakuza1]

i can wait for the lesbian gwen path please

The next update is about Gwen's path.

 

[Jokr_]

Is this another full-on girl on girl action

 

[GokutheG]

I’d really like to know your opinion about Vanessa’s story, no matter if positive or negative.

Vanessa is the roomate/friend right? I thought her more aggressive form was pretty hot but I think I might have to avoid it because there seems to be no love there. The mc being shown to actually like her and not just tolerating her advances due to having nowhere else to live soured the experience and feels too much on the rapey side. Also didn't like that she took her money.

Making it so that they like each other but the mc is too nervous to ever make the move so Vanessa decides to be the one to act would be more enjoyable to me.

I'd just like to point out that when I played if you decide to skip that scene the script still acts as if it happens anyway.

 

[wildride69]

Vanessa is the roomate/friend right? I thought her more aggressive form was pretty hot but I think I might have to avoid it because there seems to be no love there. The mc being shown to actually like her and not just tolerating her advances due to having nowhere else to live soured the experience and feels too much on the rapey side. Also didn't like that she took her money.

Making it so that they like each other but the mc is too nervous to ever make the move so Vanessa decides to be the one to act would be more enjoyable to me.

I'd just like to point out that when I played if you decide to skip that scene the script still acts as if it happens anyway.

Sounds like you want a love story and not a corruption story.

 

[Poemsporn]

I will give it a try

 

[Sleepwalker59]

I’d really like to know your opinion about Vanessa’s story, no matter if positive or negative.

Wow, that whole backstory was very unexpected and heartbreaking.
Personally, I loved it and it reminded me that this kind of game can have very well done dramatic moments and not just sex and sex. You achieved something that is very difficult for me in this kind of games... to empathize with a character, and even more, a character that I hated until half an hour ago!

In just one little update, you have achieved a small story that is much more interesting than other games, even complete ones. Moreover, I repeat what I told you a few days ago, I love how you work together both the visual and sound/musical aspects, the use of effects, distortions, colors... and that piano melody increases the emotional charge of the whole scene even more.

The whole final sequence where we see Vanessa "deteriorating" is so intense, you captured the whole context of the scene in an almost cinematic and effective way.

 

[staticfastart]

Wow, that whole backstory was very unexpected and heartbreaking.
Personally, I loved it and it reminded me that this kind of game can have very well done dramatic moments and not just sex and sex. You achieved something that is very difficult for me in this kind of games... to empathize with a character, and even more, a character that I hated until half an hour ago!

In just one little update, you have achieved a small story that is much more interesting than other games, even complete ones. Moreover, I repeat what I told you a few days ago, I love how you work together both the visual and sound/musical aspects, the use of effects, distortions, colors... and that piano melody increases the emotional charge of the whole scene even more.

The whole final sequence where we see Vanessa "deteriorating" is so intense, you captured the whole context of the scene in an almost cinematic and effective way.

Thank you so much, that really was my goal and I’m happy you managed to appreciate it to the fullest. Working on this little update made me feel so emotionally involved and I’m happy to know someone else liked it

 

[staticfastart]

Vanessa is the roomate/friend right? I thought her more aggressive form was pretty hot but I think I might have to avoid it because there seems to be no love there. The mc being shown to actually like her and not just tolerating her advances due to having nowhere else to live soured the experience and feels too much on the rapey side. Also didn't like that she took her money.

Making it so that they like each other but the mc is too nervous to ever make the move so Vanessa decides to be the one to act would be more enjoyable to me.

I'd just like to point out that when I played if you decide to skip that scene the script still acts as if it happens anyway.

Well, the thing is MC doesn’t have to love each person she interacts with. At the same time, Vanessa’s behaviour needed to get explained somehow, otherwise she’d be a bitch towards Clèo for no reason.
The money grabbing and all the rest is explained in this update

 

[staticfastart]

Is this another full-on girl on girl action

Not at all. Give it a try

 

[staticfastart]

That fat bitch? Oh, please huh... I can't stand her and want to avoid her as much as possible. Although I'm still trying to keep an open mind to see where you take it instead of just skipping it entirely, but I'm currently not inclined to pursue that route at all.

Barbara on the other hand? Very hot!

Try the update and you’ll see how she became a fat bitch. IMHO she was very gorgeous

 

[Sleepwalker59]

Thank you so much, that really was my goal and I’m happy you managed to appreciate it to the fullest. Working on this little update made me feel so emotionally involved and I’m happy to know someone else liked it

I didn't just like it, I loved it! I tell you, that last sequence is just heartbreaking, but beautiful at the same time.
It's all put together perfectly, from the beginning to the end, and the way the ENTIRE atmosphere changes (from oppressive visuals and sounds to a hopeful melody at the end) when Cleo calls her on the phone, it's as if Cleo represents Vanessa's salvation.
Well, I think I've made my point, haha. I'm glad I was able to capture everything you were trying to express.

 

[free pass fans2021]

wonderful，i love this game How often to update

 

[GokutheG]

Well, the thing is MC doesn’t have to love each person she interacts with. At the same time, Vanessa’s behaviour needed to get explained somehow, otherwise she’d be a bitch towards Clèo for no reason.
The money grabbing and all the rest is explained in this update

When I said love I think a better word would have been affection. Sex scenes are always better when there's some mutual attraction between the people which I didn't get when I played. I'll give the route a try to see how you expand her character this update.

 

[wildride69]

Well, the thing is MC doesn’t have to love each person she interacts with. At the same time, Vanessa’s behavior needed to get explained somehow, otherwise she’d be a bitch towards Clèo for no reason.
The money grabbing and all the rest is explained in this update

I guess... I question if we really needed a backstory but I'm not writing the title so hopefully their will be a payoff. It also made you feel a bit sorry for her so any actions she takes now will be clouded like Smeagol in Lord of the Rings.

 

[Lounatick]

Continue the great work staticfastart! I love this game.

 

[staticfastart]

Continue the great work staticfastart! I love this game.

Thank you so much. I will