VN Ren'Py Cléo Torres: The Dance of Life [v1.1.3-snapshot.4] [Static Fast Art]

[Joe Steel]

Don't like minigames, but the one variant that you can't turn off in this version of the game is a doddle.

The latest version has kept what I liked about the previous version and gotten rid of what I didn't care for. The only recommendation I would make is to distinguish more clearly between internal and external dialogue.

Can't wait for more.

 

[KryperCreeping]

I have played a shameful amount of female protagonist games over the years and I have to say that Cléo might already be up there as one of the most beautiful female protagonists i've seen in a h-game

 

[RacistSanta]

I have played a shameful amount of female protagonist games over the years and I have to say that Cléo might already be up there as one of the most beautiful female protagonists i've seen in a h-game

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Agreed

 

[MixQQ]

nice avn with good straight content, keep it up

 

[Dyhart]

The animation is phenomenal. Just saying.

Bus scene was hot.

 

[08Hanbo]

I have played a shameful amount of female protagonist games over the years and I have to say that Cléo might already be up there as one of the most beautiful female protagonists i've seen in a h-game

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Then I guess you might like this one, too.

https://f95zone.to/threads/echoes-of-deception-v0-40-madkoala.177430/

 

[Scotsman1989]

What I am looking forward to most is the lesbian corruption, especially when the women are dominant towards Cleo.
Like Vanessa, except when she pretty much robs Cleo blind, that is the only thing I dislike about her.

 

[wildride69]

I have played a shameful amount of female protagonist games over the years and I have to say that Cléo might already be up there as one of the most beautiful female protagonists i've seen in a h-game

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Thanks I was about to screen capture these to try and make a Signature and you saved me some time. I thin I'm still going to screen cap Cleo in her black going to the gym outfit at the beginning. That screencap and these would make a hot signature.

I hope she starts keeping her hair down at the bar as it is by far a better look for the character in my opinion.

 

[wildride69]

What I am looking forward to most is the lesbian corruption, especially when the women are dominant towards Cleo.
Like Vanessa, except when she pretty much robs Cleo blind, that is the only thing I dislike about her.

I have rarely found great lesbian corruption in a VN, but I'm with you that scene with Vanessa was hot and I can't wait to see what else Vanessa and Robert have planned for Cleo.

If you like Lesbian corruption you may also like Pandora's Box 2 with Ellie and Scarlet, it is NOT a lesbian game but has some of the best corruption I have seen in my opinion.

 

[DoceDoceComoMel]

THX

 

[DoceDoceComoMel]

I just played it for the first time and I really liked it.
Cléo is very pretty and the existing scenes were good and hot, great work so far staticfastart. Looking forward to more.

 

[KryperCreeping]

Then I guess you might like this one, too.

https://f95zone.to/threads/echoes-of-deception-v0-40-madkoala.177430/

Yeah I've played and really enjoy that one too. Like I said, a shameful amount. If its a western h-game with a female protagonist there is a very good chance I've played it. The descent into corruption and level of vile depravity often featured in female protagonist games are just second to none.

Im too far gone. At this point i even have my very own superheroine bimbofication female protagonist VN fully mapped, written, and sketched out but I've never taken the jump because i dont live alone and i wouldnt know how i would explain it to my family. Maybe one day.

 

[Tanzie]

Try looking under OPTIONS
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That option doesn't seem to work, the timing minigame is still displayed. There's no need for stupid minigames for what seems to be just a do or don't binary choice. It's wasteful and annoying.

 

[Jhin00]

The last update was too good bro keep going <3

 

[soapsoup]

Beautiful renders, really enjoyed it so far. Just a bit misleading that it's version 1.08, i thought the game was complete(with an ending)when i downloaded it

 

[staticfastart]

I'm reading your feedbacks and reviews and I'm very grateful to all of you, because so far both positive and negative comments have been very helpful for me to make this game a better one.
According to this I can tell you that all minigames are gonna be optional in the next version.

Regards,
SFA

 

[trainindicator]

The game is a bit short for now, and there is, more or less only an in game day.

This is the usual Good Girl Gone Bad game but i like it so far.

My suggestions for the Dev would be :

1) add a "Hard Mode", with the mini-games inverted:
If you do no click the right way she will avoid the slut path and stay a good girl by default
(you have to proactively win the mini-games to make her a whore instead of just losing them)

2) there is to much events for only one in game day, if you play it well she can loss almost all resistance
and become a slut in this one day. Make it a week or give her more resistance at start

3) remove some of the choices if she is not in heat or have to much resistance at the time

4) Do no make her work immediately in the suspicious bar.
She may work first in a normal burger shop, then lose her job (or car even keep it), and then only
have no choice to work in the suspicious shop.

 

[wildride69]

The game is a bit short for now, and there is, more or less only an in game day.

This is the usual Good Girl Gone Bad game but i like it so far.

My suggestions for the Dev would be :

1) add a "Hard Mode", with the mini-games inverted:
If you do no click the right way she will avoid the slut path and stay a good girl by default
(you have to proactively win the mini-games to make her a whore instead of just losing them)

2) there is to much events for only one in game day, if you play it well she can loss almost all resistance
and become a slut in this one day. Make it a week or give her more resistance at start

3) remove some of the choices if she is not in heat or have to much resistance at the time

4) Do no make her work immediately in the suspicious bar.
She may work first in a normal burger shop, then lose her job (or car even keep it), and then only
have no choice to work in the suspicious shop.

1) I prefer to Lose to activate slut mode. Let the I want her an innocent virgin people struggle to win mini games. The way it is now is perfect.
2) Content is the way the dev wants it to be and it feels great to play a VN that doesn't follow all the regular rules. It's refreshing all of this happened in one day.
3) Choices are fine the way they are. The only thing your suggestion will do is to make this VN unnecessarily grindy.
4) The Dev should maintain the story he wants to tell and his subscribers request on Subscribestar.

Those are your opinions, and these are my opinions.

 

[staticfastart]

I really appreciate your feedbacks guys.

The thing is I don't wanna make "the usual" avn. I know some scenarios or paths may be "unavoidable cliché" but what I'm trying to do is exactly what wildride69 said: breaking some rules.

And this is where things some of you may not like take place:

• Stop thinking about DAY 1, DAY 2 and things like that. All these things happened just in one day and the day is not over yet. If you think it outside of the usual POV, everything happened to Cléo in just one day is nothing impossible. She went to gym, came back home, met a friend, worked a couple hours in a pub and she's gonna end her day with... <someone of your choice>
• Choices are crucial. Most of the choices you're gonna take are of the kind "take it or leave it". Story changes a lot depending on what you chose.
• If you think too many things happened on her first day, again, stop thinking about days. Next release is gonna end her first day but if you think it this way you're playing it wrong. Play the game several times, change your choices, see how things could evolve just by taking another decision and you'll see how this is not just a 1 day game but maybe a 3 or 4 possible different days put together.
• About the choices: sometimes you'll find some of them disabled because of your decency or resistance levels. The "in heat" mood you talked about is already there but remember, Cléo is a "princess"

Regards,
SFA

 

[Roma777]

add more tights please