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same, dude. 1st sentence was almost painful to read. and it's not like it's a bad translation either
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well
a half point for the try ....
the preview pictures are bait ... (thats not the quality of ingame renders)
the writing is ... omg - wasnt able to read more than 20 lines of text - my brain hurts badly....
oh and i smell some bro-mance shit after meeting dylan ... noone wants this
just a big nope
a half point for the try ....
the preview pictures are bait ... (thats not the quality of ingame renders)
the writing is ... omg - wasnt able to read more than 20 lines of text - my brain hurts badly....
oh and i smell some bro-mance shit after meeting dylan ... noone wants this
just a big nope
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....and VN's about college. Just what the world needs, yet another college VN.
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Hello I'm the dev of this game. I will try my best to fix what you all mentioned. if you can comment all the problems "what's work and what's not" with the game? it will help me!!
Thanks for playing.
Thanks for playing.
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College life, basketball team but with Dom Black MC would be great, too bad no one would do it, instead they still follow the same cliché MC like many college game out there.
MC: You come to me on the day of my Basket Ball practice and as for what? Sex? CAN DO!
Well, most of games here are the boy who returns home to this "mother's friend" and her two daughters.
I prefer college life as a theme
Hello. I suggest you get someone who is a native English speaker to assist you in correcting the grammar. It would have been better to have someone who did not originaly work on your game proofread it BEFORE releasing it.
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Greetings and congratulations on releasing your game. As per my earlier post, you might want to consider changing the name of the game to avoid confusion with the two other games named the same. While one of those is abandoned and almost 3 years old, the other has been Onhold for almost a year so there will be some who may think that one is once again being updated.
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I just finished it.
I liked it so far. The renders are good, the characters interesting. And if the wording can use some improvement, as a foreigner, I had no difficulty to understand anything.
And for once, the MC isn't ugly, he looks like Jason Priestley.
For a constructive criticism, I'd say MC have a chin too short when in profile, but it's nothing important.
Mainly, two things could improve: things gone too fast.
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I advise you to reduce the choices or you will struggle soon with many variables.
I hope you will continue, this game have a great potential.
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The name is a temporary, just to release this and see what the problems! Thank you for your feedback!Greetings and congratulations on releasing your game. As per my earlier post, you might want to consider changing the name of the game to avoid confusion with the two other games named the same. While one of those is abandoned and almost 3 years old, the other has been Onhold for almost a year so there will be some who may think that one is once again being updated.
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Thank You!!
I will do the best to improve upon every major problem!
I will make sure to improve the dialogue of every scene.
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jesus christ on a pogostick...worst english i ever saw in some game
To be honest what bothers me are the faces...for example, Chloe's face when you came into their room and that other girl you end up having sex with...that last picture of you two kissing during sex.... her face is quite deformed...you should work more on that
To be honest what bothers me are the faces...for example, Chloe's face when you came into their room and that other girl you end up having sex with...that last picture of you two kissing during sex.... her face is quite deformed...you should work more on that
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