VN Ren'Py Abandoned CO FreshGirls [v0.5.5] [LiferSub]

[fleetp]

I did a rewrite of the script.rpy file. I corrected the spelling, fixed some punctuation errors and did a bit of word-smithing to improve the dialogue flow. The file is attached if lifersub wants to use it for building the next update, or for anyone to use if desired. The plot is unchanged.
If lifersub objects to this file being here, let me know and I'll delete it.
Very respectfully
fleetp
View attachment script.rpy

 

[aexiel]

ok, I first tried out this game some months back, I stopped since the dialogue was so bad I couldn't stomach it and stopped after 10 mins. It was worse than MTL. But since I'm seeing comments that the dialogue has improved, I'll take a look again.

 

[fleetp]

While his itch.io site still talks about this game, Lifersub's patreon site no longer mentions this game. I should mention Mention of CO Freshgirsls doesn't show in those areas accessible to non-subscribers.

 

[Jack2122]

While his itch.io site still talks about this game, Lifersub's patreon site no longer mentions this game. I should mention Mention of CO Freshgirsls doesn't show in those areas accessible to non-subscribers.

Hello, The game got rebooted. next week it will be uploaded to this site!

 

[Canto Forte]

What is it you expect this new faced game reboot to be?
A conclusion of the former?
A continuation of the same plot?
Same characters/character designs?
Better something? What would be better in this new iteration?

 

[Jack2122]

What is it you expect this new faced game reboot to be?
A conclusion of the former?
A continuation of the same plot?
Same characters/character designs?
Better something? What would be better in this new iteration?

Better story.
Choices that shape the story.
Interesting characters.
The character designs changed, see

You must be registered to see the links

!

I want to do a better game!
not for the sake of doing something.

 

[fleetp]

itch.io link in the first post no longer works.

 

[Jack2122]

itch.io link in the first post no longer works.

You must be registered to see the links

this demo will be available in 4 days here!

 

[Canto Forte]

Nice form, dear! Can we also spin and look lovely?

 

[Canto Forte]

That be me girl! Breath takin!

 

[Jack2122]

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Nice form, dear! Can we also spin and look lovely?

What do you mean?

 

[Canto Forte]

The set up 4 the pic where she does spin and looks pretty and ready 4 fun.

 

[punisher2099]

Better story.
Choices that shape the story.
Interesting characters.
The character designs changed, see

You must be registered to see the links

!

I want to do a better game!
not for the sake of doing something.

Are the tags going to stay the same? What are some of the future tags?

 

[Jack2122]

Are the tags going to stay the same? What are some of the future tags?

the tags will expand.
I can't say what! right now.

 

[HansDampf788]

the tags will expand.
I can't say what! right now.

So the Dev can't say what tags will be added to the game.
If that's the case I can say that I'm not playing the game because I don't like nasty surprises.

 

[DuckDairyDip]

Should this be marked as abandoned?

 

[BadamMan91]

wow

 

[ChadInStrapJacket]

Hope ntr will never be implemented

 

[fleetp]

Should this be marked as abandoned?

I think it should be marked as abandoned.
The thread for his new game is at On Form It appears that nothing on it has been updated since the end of January.

 

[DuckDairyDip]

I think it should be marked as abandoned.
The thread for his new game is at On Form It appears that nothing on it has been updated since the end of January.

There was a Patreon post in March, but no idea beyond that. In any case, On Form is a reimagining/rework of CO Freshgirls as the dev has stated and clear with all mentions of CO Freshgirls pretty much wiped away, so I think it should be marked as abandoned.