samrolfe

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I really do wish that the creators of these games, would be consistent with the characters they create. I have enjoyed College Kings, right up until the time they get to London, firstly there is no buses going to 118th street in London (but that is an aside). The MC has been actively chasing Mrs Rose from before London and even when she says it must stop at the Airport he kisses her quite passionately and she responds. Then at the bar she says be in my room in ten minutes, there is no confusion, no innuendo. He has been chasing and shagging different girls since he got to college, he is a player. He gets to her room and what happens, he turns into a nervous stuttering twerp who cannot understand what is happening! Bloody Hell, please, please be consistent with your characters? He is supposed to be a confident, charismatic, good looking guy who loves the ladies and suddenly he is a virginal idiot? Keep it realistic as possible, as soon as he was in that room according to his previous character development he should have been taking charge and giving her a good time. End rant.
 

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I really do wish that the creators of these games, would be consistent with the characters they create. I have enjoyed College Kings, right up until the time they get to London, firstly there is no buses going to 118th street in London (but that is an aside). The MC has been actively chasing Mrs Rose from before London and even when she says it must stop at the Airport he kisses her quite passionately and she responds. Then at the bar she says be in my room in ten minutes, there is no confusion, no innuendo. He has been chasing and shagging different girls since he got to college, he is a player. He gets to her room and what happens, he turns into a nervous stuttering twerp who cannot understand what is happening! Bloody Hell, please, please be consistent with your characters? He is supposed to be a confident, charismatic, good looking guy who loves the ladies and suddenly he is a virginal idiot? Keep it realistic as possible, as soon as he was in that room according to his previous character development he should have been taking charge and giving her a good time. End rant.
I disagree. The most he has done with his TEACHER is kiss her. Having sex with her is quite a different subject, especially his teacher which is not in line with any other girl he has been with. While he gets banged more than anyone would in reality, his character still respects the women's wishes, and so it is not out of character for him to respect the teacher's wishes to be in control. Also, when the teacher told him they need to stop, she was clearly fighting against her own emotions and what she actually wanted (based on earlier interactions) and the MC knows she didn't mean what she said, so he kissed her and her true feelings came out. Clearly, later on when they had sex, the teacher decided to go with what she really wanted, but to keep it discrete and maintain her control so nobody finds out (though I felt that kissing him in the bank where cameras are everywhere shows she is losing control, but that may still come back to bite her in the buttocks, we'll see).

The dialog that bothered me the most is that with Charli where he goes on and on and on, and is clearly trying to screw him over and the MC agrees to not talk to Nora?! I was like... "WHAT?!" There's no way he would give in to any of Charli's requests, so I thought that was poorly written. It has otherwise been a fairly good visual novel, even if unrealistic in spots.
 

samrolfe

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How so? We know he is a hound and it was not just a kiss, it was a passionate kiss to a teacher. When she tells him to come up to her room in ten minutes, he knows what is going to happen and yet still acts like a gormless twit. By the way the dollar has never been worth more than the pound (bank scene) and we drive on the left in Britain with the steering wheel on the right, even German imported cars. :):):)
 

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How so? We know he is a hound and it was not just a kiss, it was a passionate kiss to a teacher. When she tells him to come up to her room in ten minutes, he knows what is going to happen and yet still acts like a gormless twit. By the way the dollar has never been worth more than the pound (bank scene) and we drive on the left in Britain with the steering wheel on the right, even German imported cars. :):):)
Wanting more with the teacher and the reality are two very different things, and I would expect him to be nervous. You don't think he should be, but it is realistic, not that I expect realism in a pornographic visual novel. Welcome to FICTION. If you want reality, go outside. ;)
 

TittyLuvr1334

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Disagree on so many levels. Sure some people want fantasy dicks and unicorns too. Some people enjoy fantasies that are based on good story and dialog. Some people like to see average joes succeed, others like rock stars or super heroes.

There are many ways to have a fantasy story with more realism. YOU may like it a certain way while OTHERS might like it a completely different way. Which is fine as it is all subjective and that is why it is good to have many stories that fit different people's idea of a good AVN. Hence why not every game needs giant dicks and unicorns.
Thank you for your response and being respectable while disagreeing.
Can you please tell me what exactly i said that you disagree "On so many levels" with?

I opined:
" it's just as unrealistic that a unnoteworthy seemingly nobody without a legendary dick would be such a successful pussy marauder."

agree or disagree?


I concluded:
"In many stories, the notorious size is the reason for the MC getting the attention he's getting."

agree or disagree?


I posited:
"the AVNs are a fantasy story for a reason - they're unrealistic. If it was truly realistic, it'd be a boring story. That's my take. "

agree or disagree?
 

NewTricks

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When somebody is in a position of authority over you in real life the sex is always weird. I didn't bang a professor until grad school, well into adulthood, and it was still weird. Of course, a first-semester freshman is going to be awkward no matter how much of a cocky git he is.
 

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Been replaying this from the start again. I think one of my favourite parts of this game has to be the murder mystery on the ferry. That was a unique visual novel idea that was so much fun.

With regard to characters, I think, aside from Charli, Chris has to be one of the most annoying. One of my favourite quotes from him was something like "she (Nora) doesn't care about me" and I was like... "WTF?! You spend no time with her, you're a f!@king loser!". I'm on Nora's side on that story. The guy has serious issues and his dialog can get annoying, especially when he comes to you to talk about his relationship problems. Nobody is that busy that they can't spend time with their loved one.

Anyhow... love much of the stories in this game. Doing several paths. I only wish some of the dialogs were better, like, give me a chance to tell Chris he's an idiot and maybe punch Charli a few dozen times when he smiles at me. ;)
 

Ragnar

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Been replaying this from the start again. I think one of my favourite parts of this game has to be the murder mystery on the ferry. That was a unique visual novel idea that was so much fun.

With regard to characters, I think, aside from Charli, Chris has to be one of the most annoying. One of my favourite quotes from him was something like "she (Nora) doesn't care about me" and I was like... "WTF?! You spend no time with her, you're a f!@king loser!". I'm on Nora's side on that story. The guy has serious issues and his dialog can get annoying, especially when he comes to you to talk about his relationship problems. Nobody is that busy that they can't spend time with their loved one.

Anyhow... love much of the stories in this game. Doing several paths. I only wish some of the dialogs were better, like, give me a chance to tell Chris he's an idiot and maybe punch Charli a few dozen times when he smiles at me. ;)
Bros before hoes, fuck Nora.
 

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It was a joke but Nora is an insufferable cunt like Chris. She doesn't want a boyfriend, she wants an orbital drone.
Seriously? The guy is on the ferry, and he spends ALL his time trying to get better cell phone reception while Nora is on the other side of the boat. Drop the phone and spend time with her... on a boat it could be very romantic and a chance to rekindle their relationship. Sorry, but I was married for over 36 years, I know a little about how to have a good relationship.

In the end this is just fiction of course, but Chris just rubs me the wrong way, especially when he has such a good woman and he ignores her in favour of frat pranks?
 

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It was a joke but Nora is an insufferable cunt like Chris. She doesn't want a boyfriend, she wants an orbital drone.
If you can't understand a woman wanting to spend time with her boyfriend and that she gets frusterated that he priorities his mobile and frat pranks over his girlfriend and only uses her like a living sex toy, then like Night Hacker said, enjoy being single. You'll have a hard time finding a woman who will agree to be just an accessory.
 

Ragnar

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If you can't understand a woman wanting to spend time with her boyfriend and that she gets frusterated that he priorities his mobile and frat pranks over his girlfriend and only uses her like a living sex toy, then like Night Hacker said, enjoy being single. You'll have a hard time finding a woman who will agree to be just an accessory.
Spending time is one thing, being overly attached or bored is another. The thing is she wants the same things they have at the beginning of the relationship and that's not how relationships work. Relationships evolve with time. Maybe Chris is not paying Nora enough attention but she wants the passion and excitiment of a new relationship from an old one. So she cheated on him with the first dude who paid her attention, the MC.
Is that how you want your girl to be? A cheater? She should have told Chris to fuck off before jumping on the first cock she saw.
 
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Resch

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Thank you for your response and being respectable while disagreeing.
Can you please tell me what exactly i said that you disagree "On so many levels" with?

I opined:
" it's just as unrealistic that a unnoteworthy seemingly nobody without a legendary dick would be such a successful pussy marauder."

agree or disagree?


I concluded:
"In many stories, the notorious size is the reason for the MC getting the attention he's getting."

agree or disagree?


I posited:
"the AVNs are a fantasy story for a reason - they're unrealistic. If it was truly realistic, it'd be a boring story. That's my take. "

agree or disagree?
1. Disagree, most of the stories I have read they don't find out dick size until after they guy has won the girls over. Maybe you are playing a game where the guys are walking around with it sticking out more. Usually it is due to several factors and those can include the big stick, but it is most certainly not exclusive.

2. Disagree see #1

3. Agree, but fantasy encompasses a whole lot of things for a whole lot of different people. Some people will most certainly agree with you. So people will most certainly agree with me. However fantasy does not just mean one thing and generally the best fantasy is one that blends fantasy elements (which could be simply a fantastical story) with some level of realism so that the person enjoying the story can see themselves in the story. It is called immersion.

Anyway, like I said we all have our different takes. I am not saying you are wrong, be as mention it is subjective so there really is no right or wrong. I have written stories, including a few novels, for over 30 years. I have never worked on an AVN, but I am pretty well versed on writing stories to fit different narratives for a fairly wide variety of people.
 
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NewTricks

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Hahahaha.... Haven't finished it yet. But I like this girl. Although first time see her like this kinnda sad and hot at the same time xD
Yeah, Aubrey is probably my favorite girl despite the rough introduction. One of the more interesting storylines in the game, too. She has both hot and sad moments as you get to know her better.
 
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