Decent but too slow. This needs way more content before it becomes interesting to a wider audience and potential patrons.
I mean the length of the update falls under the category of "oh I missed 3 min. of this show while I took a piss break and it's over?"
Maybe take longer development chunks and post updates only when you have more substantial content?
Just one more personal matter at the end about the MC - blonde with the bald eagle annoyed face, yuck, pretty repulsive.
Kinda messes up the immersion.
I mean the length of the update falls under the category of "oh I missed 3 min. of this show while I took a piss break and it's over?"
Maybe take longer development chunks and post updates only when you have more substantial content?
Just one more personal matter at the end about the MC - blonde with the bald eagle annoyed face, yuck, pretty repulsive.
Kinda messes up the immersion.