I'm more concerned if every female is gonna be way more skilled than him. Like why is he even here? I know there will be answers but man, he's looking less and less useful by the minute. He's some great war hero and yet he's such a pushover. You can do that in a comedy, but here it just feels forced. Now we have what? Four of the women can definitely kick his ass and then blanche? Not in the right situation, they just can. I should probably hold my breath incase she beats him over the head with that gold arm next update. I'm not saying the MC needs to be OP, but so far his qualification for being in charge is he's "reportedly a hero" but comes off as most likely to get offed if someone attacked them. You can say he doesnt know any of them and its fleshing them out, but he's in charge....he should have a file on each of them if not be having the intel voice in his head telling him. He shouldn't be surprised a girl has been trained since childhood and surprised by her ability twice, especially since its been shown so far he has zero skills and for what? So theres a situation where he can grab her ass? There's the narrative device of show, don't tell.....and you already accomplished that with them already being on the team and each house sending their best or at least people that are insanely skilled. If anything ALL of them should be asking why he's there besides an unproven reputation. I'm waiting for his secret skill to be some master strategist or genius, but once again would make zero sense why he's physically there.
Right now the only thing he's proven to be is the only dick in this scenario and somehow as the only man on this team or apparently the universe, he's completely unqualified to lead, yet for some unexplained reason being a complete wet noodle means every female he runs into want to fuck him because theres literally no other dick around. His literal skillset so far is has penis, eyes glow, has no idea whats going on, wears flannel, and voice in his head. Like I get it, slow burn.....but he needs something and not just "oh hey look, another woman wanted to bang this useless dude again." Like not the team, HE needs to do anything interesting.
after this last one it wont allow me to continue. as there is no ignore button
