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H.K

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last updated about half a year ago, is this game on hold or something? are the devs ok?
 
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Capture.PNG Oh my God Lindsay, just look me in the face! I hope this gets patched in the next update cause it honestly ruins the immersion.

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Holy shit the game completely fell apart after this scene! I'm sure there's a language barrier so I can overlook a lot of the grammatical mistakes, but story wise the game began to just jump from scene to scene without build up or any sort of transition. One second you're talking to the neighbor, suddenly you're on the phone with her boss (without even finishing the conversation with her first), then your sister is already changed and acting completely out of character (and still looking above the camera), and boom: You're at a cafe with the receptionist! The first half of what's been made was so good! The graphics were beautiful, the story had good pacing and the dialogue seemed natural (and the English seemed to be of native speaking caliber). What happened?
 
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Oh my God Lindsay, just look me in the face! I hope this gets patched in the next update cause it honestly ruins the immersion.

EDIT:
Holy shit the game completely fell apart after this scene! I'm sure there's a language barrier so I can overlook a lot of the grammatical mistakes, but story wise the game began to just jump from scene to scene without build up or any sort of transition. One second you're talking to the neighbor, suddenly you're on the phone with her boss (without even finishing the conversation with her first), then your sister is already changed and acting completely out of character (and still looking above the camera), and boom: You're at a cafe with the receptionist! The first half of what's been made was so good! The graphics were beautiful, the story had good pacing and the dialogue seemed natural (and the English seemed to be of native speaking caliber). What happened?
for me it was perfectly fine to understand. the story and the dialogues are focused on the path everyone is here for. the rest is just bs to legitimize the official upload.
 
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for me it was perfectly fine to understand. the story and the dialogues are focused on the path everyone is here for. the rest is just bs to legitimize the official upload.
A game full of bs filler isn't a very good game. It's a literary mess. A story being focused on one path is absolutely fine, and in some cases perhaps even better because it means the few characters that there are are better fleshed out. That's not the case with this. It was all over the place with pacing and again, conversations wouldn't even end before moving onto the next scene. It's an easy fix with a bit of editing, you wouldn't even need new renders to do so (except for Lindsay's eyes, which should be looking at the camera).
 

Maviarab

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A game full of bs filler isn't a very good game. It's a literary mess. A story being focused on one path is absolutely fine, and in some cases perhaps even better because it means the few characters that there are are better fleshed out. That's not the case with this. It was all over the place with pacing and again, conversations wouldn't even end before moving onto the next scene. It's an easy fix with a bit of editing, you wouldn't even need new renders to do so (except for Lindsay's eyes, which should be looking at the camera).
So why are you still wasting your time on a thread for a game you clearly don't like, and clearly stuggle to comprehend and keep up with? Just curious..askin' for a friend ;)
 

Aion_Abyss

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A game full of bs filler isn't a very good game. It's a literary mess. A story being focused on one path is absolutely fine, and in some cases perhaps even better because it means the few characters that there are are better fleshed out. That's not the case with this. It was all over the place with pacing and again, conversations wouldn't even end before moving onto the next scene. It's an easy fix with a bit of editing, you wouldn't even need new renders to do so (except for Lindsay's eyes, which should be looking at the camera).
The only part of this that was actual constructive criticism was the last 11 words.

Go play other games if you don't like this one. Sheesh.
 
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