VN Ren'Py Abandoned Come Inside [v0.2.1] [ttll]

[z3212]

Word of advice to the creator: Don't let the forum users make the game for you. It's about the worst thing that you could do. You're the one who knows the best direction your game should take. Stick to it, as you can never please everyone.

On a different note: I'm somewhat confused as to what Lora's relationship with MC is. It seems like she is (or was) his girlfriend, but the sketchbook scenes give off somewhat of a motherly vibe. Furthered by the fact the main screen shows what I believe to be an adult girl with a kid.
Also, I know what I've said at the beginning, but I'm hoping that the game will go more in the "romance" direction as opposed to "ooga booga MC fuck all the bitches" harem route.

Otherwise, I only have positive things to say about the game. It looks absolutely stunning, and I really like the inclusion of the sketchbook mechanic as well as the functionality of the phone. The fact that other characters react to you reading messages mid-conversation is also fantastic. I'm really looking forward to the finished game.

Well said, couldn't agree more. I honestly think the way the game is going is just great!

 

[Carpe Stultus]

Looks like a great game, renders are outstanding!!!
My only problem is the mini games. I'm disabled and have limited hand mobility and there is no way I can beat the time and click all the dots. Increasing the target size and/or increasing the time by about 25% would be great.

Or you just turn the mini games off and enjoy the game without that stuff.

 

[ThunderRob]

ermmm..i did not know that book/journal whatever was a mini-game..i kinda passed by it..SO..is my game fucked up yet?

 

[z3212]

Very.. very.. very interesting game!! Funny thing is that if it wasn't for the footjob tag i wouldn't have known about this game. I'm very glad for once that this tag exists.

Now about the game, well what can I say... The story looks very promising, great designing of characters and interface.

I would advise on having different colored text in the dialogue box for each character just to avoid confusion, but other than that there isn't anything negative to say about the game. Even though it's fairly new, but the included content is great for such an early update... And that reverse footjob scene is awesome! I really like the fact that the dev focused so much on the models feet and legs. I'm almost sure that the dev has a foot fetish. Not forgetting the foot play under the table.

And for those of you who are not as interested in feet as myself, worry not! It's AVOIDABLE! So y'all can choose other things than feet.


I have high hopes for this one. Good job dev and really looking forward to future updates.

 

[z3212]

Very.. very.. very interesting game!! Funny thing is that if it wasn't for the footjob tag i wouldn't have known about this game. I'm very glad for once that this tag exists.

Now about the game, well what can I say... The story looks very promising, great designing of characters and interface.

I would advise on having different colored text in the dialogue box for each character just to avoid confusion, but other than that there isn't anything negative to say about the game. Even though it's fairly new, but the included content is great for such an early update... And that reverse footjob scene is awesome! I really like the fact that the dev focused so much on the models feet and legs. I'm almost sure that the dev has a foot fetish. Not forgetting the foot play under the table.

And for those of you who are not as interested in feet as myself, worry not! It's AVOIDABLE! So y'all can choose other things than feet.


I have high hopes for this one. Good job dev and really looking forward to future updates.

Footfan check this game out man!

 

[Stanley Potter]

Haven't tried it yet, looks promising, gonna keep my eye on it

 

[The Krypt Angel]

i only want purple haired goddess..zero fucks given if other dames are dicked by random acronyms sometimes..a man's focus zeros in on perfection and does not stray...of course..if she gets dicked by another..rage quit..naughty language..delete..snowflaking my ass off in the thread..and..REAL TEARS!!

You won't be alone I'm all corrupting and or sharing her sister and friend (tho MY sister is mine alone at least on the slave route might go back and pick the share option on the love route later ) but if I see her fuck another dude or force me into a MMF threesome I'll be done with this no matter how good the game is lol. people can think I'm fucking weird if they want but I get possessive even with digital girls especially ones like Kelly who basically checks off all the boxes of my dream girl.

 

[mmmonsterkill]

ooh new upda...*checks changelogs*

damn

 

[Disabled Account #1278362]

ermmm..i did not know that book/journal whatever was a mini-game..i kinda passed by it..SO..is my game fucked up yet?

If you mean did you mess anything up by not playing them by a certain time, then no, I'm pretty sure you can just play them all at the end of the episode and it doesn't really affect much if anything.

 

[ThunderRob]

If you mean did you mess anything up by not playing them by a certain time, then no, I'm pretty sure you can just play them all at the end of the episode and it doesn't really affect much if anything.

i do not do mini-games..they are a cheap way to fill content and piss off old people..so if not playing it has no effect..i'll just ignore and continue..

 

[ThunderRob]

ok..after a long "too big a meal" nap and some waking up..am gonna try the updated version and see if their proofreader is worth anything or just another dude on cheap drugs fooling furriners
guess i'm too old to notice difference..HAHAAA...played same All Kelly All the time path and it seemed the same..turned RP thingie on this time though..so i know everything i said or did with Kelly was arrow up good

 

[thanks for the demos]

Unless you or me or anyone else is actually putting money in the game, yours and mine opinion are worth exactly zero, only opinion that matters are the ones from the patreons

You are right, he shouldn't let the forum users make the game for him but he should listen to the things they have to say and think about what they said. Not every forum user wants to completly change the game but help improving it.

Encouragement is great. Encouragement and constructive criticism is better.

So, some criticism: I enjoy branching storylines, but having your readers only see halve the scenes you made right from the start can backfire badly. It's likely going to fragment more as the story progresses and that means splitting time/effort between branches, having updates feel "too short" because people see only a small part of mutually exclusive events, etc.
Given the way this is appears to be structured, I'm a little worried they'll wear themselves thin down the line. (Also, if Lain ever feels like making a mod for this that chains all non-branch-specific missable scenes, I'd play that one and never go back. Branches are one thing, but a bunch of other scenes have no good reason for being mutually exclusive.)

Anyway, this has lots of potential and hopefully those worries are unfounded. To agree with pretty much everyone in this thread: renders and character models are gorgeous. Writing is compelling. I didn't dislike the phone gimmick nearly as much as I'd have expected
Keep up the great work and best of luck!


EDIT:

hit the up arrow and the enter key at the same time. on your keyboard.

Thanks for the tip. I'd still say minigames should always be skippable, but this works too.

 

[gigsaw78]

nice job bro.tx

 

[Uriel ☁]

i do not do mini-games..they are a cheap way to fill content and piss off old people..so if not playing it has no effect..i'll just ignore and continue..

Almost half the content of the game is behind those mini-games, play them it takes 60 seconds each.
Also a part of the story makes no sense if you didn't play them as the 6 scenes you unlock are the backstory.

 

[ThunderRob]

Almost half the content of the game is behind those mini-games, play them it takes 60 seconds each.
Also a part of the story makes no sense if you didn't play them as the 6 scenes you unlock are the backstory.

guess i'll never know..connecting tiny dots with my arthritic hands is a no go...see now..if the dots were as big as say..the red post reply button i'm about to hit..i could get by fine..but tiny dots are a newp.

 

[jamdan]

guess i'll never know..connecting tiny dots with my arthritic hands is a no go...see now..if the dots were as big as say..the red post reply button i'm about to hit..i could get by fine..but tiny dots are a newp.

hit the up arrow and the enter key at the same time. on your keyboard.

 

[RedPillBlues]

guess i'll never know..connecting tiny dots with my arthritic hands is a no go...see now..if the dots were as big as say..the red post reply button i'm about to hit..i could get by fine..but tiny dots are a newp.

Its fine, the mini games will ruin Lindsey for you anyway, its not worth the extra content.

 

[WICKEDp4th]

i do not do mini-games..they are a cheap way to fill content and piss off old people..so if not playing it has no effect..i'll just ignore and continue..

When you complete a sketch (minigame) you get background story of the past of the MC. Ignore this content and you wil miss huge amount of content. Use a save game from this thread, if you don't want to play them yourself, but i really recommend using the sketchbook!

 

[The Krypt Angel]

hit the up arrow and the enter key at the same time. on your keyboard.

THANK YOU FOR THIS! trying to do it with clicks made me wanna throw my mouse at the frickin wall lol

 

[Carpe Stultus]

Encouragement is great. Encouragement and constructive criticism is better.

So, some criticism: I enjoy branching storylines, but having your readers only see halve the scenes you made right from the start can backfire badly. It's likely going to fragment more as the story progresses and that means splitting time/effort between branches, having updates feel "too short" because people see only a small part of mutually exclusive events, etc.
"Want to get that one scene in Ep.7? Better start over and pick a series of specific choices throughout" can also be a tough sell. Given the way this is appears to be structured, I'm a little worried they'll wear themselves thin down the line. (Also, if Lain ever feels like making a mod for this that chains all non-branch-specific missable scenes, I'd play that one and never go back. Branches are one thing, but a bunch of other scenes have no good reason for being mutually exclusive.)

Anyway, this has lots of potential and hopefully those worries are unfounded. To agree with pretty much everyone in this thread: renders and character models are gorgeous. Writing is compelling. I didn't dislike the phone gimmick nearly as much as I'd have expected
Keep up the great work and best of luck!



Don't be a tease, tell us where and how
I was looking for a way to comment out the minigames or add play / skip buttons, but couldn't find them. Probably missed something incredibly obvious?

Spoiler: Rant about VN minigames in general

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Nah i just confused the whole mini game stuff with another game and i didn't use the sketchbook in here at all, thats why i had in mind that you could turn it off. My bad. lol

After trying the mini games, i personaly don't find them hard just annoying but i can see why it could cause problems for people with disabilities. Still probably won't do them..rather use UnRen and look at the pictures if i really want to see them.