VN Ren'Py Abandoned Come Inside [v0.2.1] [ttll]

[ThunderRob]

well..i can say i've zero interest in the blonde(is that Lindsey?) as her face creeps me out..SO..if the minigames involve her it is best i did not do them..matter of fact i chose ALL red down arrow choices on the blonde..i mean it when i said i went Kelly only..i did everything possible to exclude the other dames my MC came in contact with..lol..the choices let me do that..so..YAY? as long as i'm happy Rob

 

[GroPin]

Ok as the grumpiest stingiest "get of my goddamn lawn" and nothing is enough old goat I am i still have to say this game is really good. Play it kids! Now imma tell you how it was back in my days we had to walk to the store to get games uphill, in the rain, and snow... and there where not hot chicks in them either just fat plumbers and smug giggling dogs.

 

[ThunderRob]

Ok as the grumpiest stingiest "get of my goddamn lawn" and nothing is enough old goat I am i still have to say this game is really good. Play it kids! Now imma tell you how it was back in my days we had to walk to the store to get games uphill, in the rain, and snow... and there where not hot chicks in them either just fat plumbers and smug giggling dogs.

and we LIKED IT!!!

 

[GroPin]

and we LIKED IT!!!

xD

 

[thanks for the demos]

Ok as the grumpiest stingiest "get of my goddamn lawn" and nothing is enough old goat I am i still have to say this game is really good. Play it kids! Now imma tell you how it was back in my days we had to walk to the store to get games uphill, in the rain, and snow... and there where not hot chicks in them either just fat plumbers and smug giggling dogs.

Barefoot and uphill both ways! Because space-time was weird like that. Timewimey. You kids with your flat circles don't even know how good you have it today

 

[Huldrafolk]

I really don't understand walkthough... it's simply empty

 

[Disabled Account #1278362]

i do not do mini-games..they are a cheap way to fill content and piss off old people..so if not playing it has no effect..i'll just ignore and continue..

Each mini game unlocks a story scene from the main character's past. You will miss a lot about the MC's background if you don't see those scenes.

If you aren't able to do the first one, there is a bypass that people have posted for it. At the moment, the background story scenes all have to do with Lora, Lindsey is mentioned once or twice but doesn't actually appear in any of the current background scenes.

 

[Draon79]

ttll Love the visuals but please put a longer timer on the minigame part, even with reducing the window size and using a gaming mouse i cant get them done. Thanks!

 

[Only4You]

Okay, so I downloaded this game once before, played through it and I was like - oh, amazing renders and good attention to details; still doesn't have much story or character build up though. Then, a week later, I came back again to this thread - what's all the fuss about? Boy, did I know I missed the real story which is hidden behind minigames, in the pages of the sketchbook!

I am a big mom-son incest lover, but in most games it feels like the sexual desire between mother and son just appears out of the blue. Not only that, as soon as it appears they completely forget about their original relationship (and she somehow turns into his lover/gf), necessarily turning the story into a vanilla romance. Why can’t she still be his mother, even though they desire each other’s body? A concept I proposed in another thread (C-Plan)- when someone said that a mother and son cannot maintain their original relationship once sexuality is introduced-

Call me F'ed up, but I think they can have sex and still act like mom and son (talking hypothetically within a video game's sense of reality). I don't know about you, but I think some sons are very close to their moms - physically even. Many babies like to "play" with their mom's bodies. Of course, this physical affection is innocent. But add sexuality to it and voila - you get an F'ed up incest story. In such situations, the mom and son could argue that sex is just another way of "getting close" to each other or "showing affection". I mean everyone knows about "friends with benefits". If you use enough of your imagination, you can cook up Moms/sons with benefits.

I think this game is going for this sort of relationship between the MC and his mother. This feels like something unique, because the sexual desire does not contradict her motherly love, but somehow a part of it. I feel so grateful now that I found this game, and KUDOS to the dev.

 

[ThunderRob]

they keep beating me over the head to do the mini-games or i'll miss out...maybe i'm ok with that?..lol...GET OFF MY DAMN LAWN!!!

 

[fbass]

sadly...; any female in a game fucks another guy that's not the mc they call it ntr. so they want your game to become full of retarded females who desires MC's cock only " i had this kind of fantazy when i was a kid"

PLEASE. just go on with this "mature" delightful story at your pace, and avoid "kids fantasies". i mean... you will get bugged again and again next 1000 pages about ntr. "oh she fuck that she fucks this"... don't let it disturb your story and characters in any way,just live with it.

a smalll thing i noticed about female characters in this game, all have that weired kind of hostile attitude toward mc whish kills the drama. i guess this story really need a sweet heart, because MC is not really that asshole... i guess ?

for a 0.1 it was a really amazing gameplay and kind of satisfying, waiting so eagerly for next version

I'm suspecting he might actually be an asshole

 

[JCosmic]

Man. The lack of animations in this game is soul crushing. I am sympathetic though. To create good animated scenes with renders of this quality, he'd need a computer that ran off a nuclear reactor.

Just think, though - if this guy got together with PhillyGames or ICSTOR, we'd probably be watching the evolution of one of the better games to ever grace this website.

J

 

[bosp]

The premise that this game will be a success comes from the devs twisted mindset that mini games are the way to go...
It has been mentioned thousands of times here and elsewhere - people generally hate minigames and the majority of games which relied heavily on minigames got abandoned and forgotten very fast.
Maybe doing some research and getting back to the drawing board would be prudent? It's still not too late.

 

[fortuna95]

GREAT, just great! Speechless! Please don't abandon this game!!

 

[yellomit]

Wow, holy shit. This game so far is awesome, and I cannot wait to see more. I've always loved the incest fetish, especially brother to sister/mom. The renders are quite possibly the best I've ever seen, and the story is actually engaging. I tend to skim over long text, but not with this. Great job so far!

 

[Nizzquizz]

The only thought I had while playing this was "... and thus, another one emerges.".
Oh boy. This will either join the ranks of the absolute top on here, or be another huge disappointment if it dies off as version 0.7 due to 'personal reasons'. (still waiting for LaS and MSN)

That said, despite the 'VN' tag it was a good idea to
1) have a look in the walkthrough. Probably would have missed the night-visit, maybe even the whole Enslavement-route.
2) look through the pages here. Enter+Up is a lifesaver for this one. The two clicking minigames are straight from hell otherwise.

 

[woody554]

In such situations, the mom and son could argue that sex is just another way of "getting close" to each other or "showing affection". I mean everyone knows about "friends with benefits".

isn't that pretty much every mom/son game ever?

I get your point though, I hate it when writers don't understand that preserving the tension is paramount. so many of them even ruin it the first night by showing a 'dream sex scene' with the mom. the story just absolutely MUST maintain a tension between the characters or you could just as well roll credits.

 

[lionking25]

Too good Keep going man

 

[JuiceBox12]

I’m sure most don’t really care, but even after having been proofread, the writing’s still not great. The dialogue is still very stilted and unnatural, and a plethora of grammatical errors remain. Most notably being a lot of commas present where periods should be instead. Again, it’s maybe not a big deal, since I assume most people play the game for the art, but it’s still something to think about.

 

[Snappahead]

Looks great - hoping its not a flash in the pan . Good luck with your game devlopment.