Well...it's actually better than average so there's a plus right away. Dialogue is also not too bad. Ai art...always polarising but this has a nice style of its own.
However, FXLS, if you're reading this....do you actually know anything about any kind of business, least of all a business large enough to have a CEO? Please...CEO's do not even deal with manager,s let alone assistant managers. An assistant to the CEO is not an assistant manager.
That aside, not a bad start a VN, especially an AI VN. Look forward to more.