I do know twine as well, i had just recommended renpy because its so easy, ill message you later.Che chabon! Gracias por su respuesta!
I'm currently learning how to write a story with TWINE. Procgamerjohnny advised me to use RENPY but it seems too graphic oriented and since creating and adding renders is not something i feel comfortable doing...
So, I'll write a not to complex story since it'd be my first interactive one, and then will see about adding sounds and images, pics, renders or vids.
If you, or anybody else have advises I'll be grateful.
PS : I prefer boca junior or los cuervos!
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You'll find the link bellow.Please, share it with me too !
I'm french too
It's something I wrote several years ago, I improved since then.
It's not NTR focused per se, but some scenes are...
I had been thinking of going back to erotism for a while now, might do it through this new medium.
"N’y tenant plus il entr’ouvrit la porte et vit Alice la robe grande ouverte, allongée sur l’un des deux lits de la cabine. Elle se caressait les seins, les yeux chavirés par le plaisir. Commençant déjà à ahaner. Ses pieds reposaient sur les épaules du jeune scandinave qui était agenouillé au pied du lit, la tête entre les cuisses de la belle. Elle entr’ouvrit les yeux et son regard croisa celui du jeune voyeur. Elle lui sourit, et écarta les cuisses pour se mieux faire voir. Il avait une vue imprenable sur ses longues et belles jambes, et sur ses seins, son sexe étant toutefois totalement caché par la tête de son lécheur. D’une main elle tapota la tête du jeune homme qui tout occupé à ses libations mit un moment à réagir. Les yeux écarquillés, fixé sur ceux du jeune homme qui n’osait plus bouger, elle jouit alors, et immédiatement fit signe à l’homme qui venait de lui donner ainsi du plaisir, de la venir prendre. Il se releva tournant le dos à la porte. Son sexe de belle taille déjà couvert de plastique disait clairement son désir. Elle leva à l’équerre ses jambes, dévoilant impudiquement son sexe luisant de plaisir, et regardant droit dans les yeux le jeune voyeur, elle se fit pénétrer par le géant blond. Hoquetant à cette vue, il voyait à moins de deux mètres de lui cette verge s’enfoncer dans cette petite foune, puis ressortir, et se ré-enfoncer. Pris par des sentiments antagonistes, il voulut refermer la porte, mais elle l’en empêcha d’un geste de la tête."
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- Jul 24, 2018
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soooo.
much....
text...
I like the game and the personalities.... but soooo.....much....dialogue.
But... That's kinda the point. How else are you supposed to make a believable netorase story without proper communication between partners? Dialogue IS the reason I like this game above others of this genre. Cut all of that dialogue, all the setup, and you are left with a barebones story with dubious motivations of the characters and stringed together sex scenes. There are dozens of netorase games, which do just that, and they are hardly satisfying for me. I get that everyone has different tastes, but it is strange to me that anyone would want to get rid of dialogue and communication in a NETORASE game.
I'm not advocating for sex scenes and no story, story buildup is good. But there's a difference between empty lengthy writing and good lengthy storytelling.
I know I'll likely make a lot of enemies here for saying this - but this is probably my biggest complaint with anime/japanese-style ntrs games. Many seem to think word count = good storytelling, and any critique is defensively met with "well you dont like good dialogue! you want instant gratification! No, I want good storytelling, not a freshman level meandering narrative full of exposition dumps. A professional editor would have a stroke and run out of red ink going over something like "Blurring the Walls."
That's not to say I don't think it has potential, we're so hard-up for decent ntrs games that it's better than nothing. But cmon, Stephen King this is not.
Well, different strokes for different folks. Let's just agree to disagree. I am not saying that this game is some literary masterpiece (as you seem to be implying), but I find its writing well above its contenders in this genre. That's what I am comparing it to.
I suppose that's fair, we do disagree on that and that's okay. I would put it's dialogue in the 'con' category, what I LIKE about it is its treatment of the characters far away from NTR tropes; the girlfriend communicates openly with the boyfriend throughout her teasing and fantasies. I didn't remember it being so wordy the first time I played it, but coming back for the recent update and skipping quickly through text, it's just walls and walls with little on-screen display changes.
You can also let one of the photo buying dudes (Aiden?) cop a feel of Gracie (or another girl? I forgot) when she's sleeping in the nurses' room
- Jan 5, 2019
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What's this game? Can't find it on the forum. Where can I read and see screenshots about it? Thankyou!
I've read most of this by now, and this was a good read. Mira is the best. Thanks for the recommendation!
Initially, I was fairly sour on it but it became better the more I read. Ultimately, it does a decent balance between plot and ero, which allowed me to persist through even scenes I wasn't terribly a fan of.
Other works in the genre (#nts or #netorase) on that site fell short in various ways. It's a shame that Korean adult fiction is age-gated and thus near impossible to read, but this was a nice surprise.
You should ask this in the NTR thread instead of here. My favorite NTR game is
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by Elf. I played it when it was only available in Japanese, but it now has a translation.The spectacle of a roller coaster plot and its irreverent humor is a must play. There are some netorase elements to it but it's an NTR game through and through, and not for the weak hearted.
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wait there's netorase in that? Played through whole thing already but everything are NTR
Did you 100% the game? It's pivotal to the plot involving one of the side characters and forget minor endings -- one of the major endings even squarely smacks you in the face with it. There's even at least 1 other minor ending playing off the theme, and it's overall not subtle at all.
However, I'll reiterate for unfamiliar readers interested in netorase: Gatenkei is an NTR game through and through. I only recommend it as an NTR game. That is all; I'll try to desist from further comments on the game in this thread.
Some time ago I wrote a quick summary of the game together with a link to the previous version. You can find it here: