- Feb 22, 2021
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I would like to thank the developers for continuing the story!
Personal opinion - I don’t pretend to be objective, but there are a number of points that I would like to draw attention to.
1. The initial theme set in this short story is becoming more and more blurred, losing its outlined contour and spreading out in all directions. Trying to cover all fetishes harms the project, as it causes frustration rather than interest.
2. The growth of primary sexual characteristics is an interesting variant of mutations, but sizes exaggerated to the point of absurdity cause more laughter than any erotic fantasies - it is literally ridiculous.
3. The heroines are too stoic about what happens to them; this does not evoke sympathy, even when they have to enter into an intimate relationship against their will. Banal coercion to copulate does not cause excitement or empathy. There is no moral dilemma here, only mechanical progressive actions without emotional overtones.
P.S. These are private considerations - I don’t claim anything, but it seems to me that the project is going down the wrong path. In any case, we will wait for the continuation of the story. Thank you!
Personal opinion - I don’t pretend to be objective, but there are a number of points that I would like to draw attention to.
1. The initial theme set in this short story is becoming more and more blurred, losing its outlined contour and spreading out in all directions. Trying to cover all fetishes harms the project, as it causes frustration rather than interest.
2. The growth of primary sexual characteristics is an interesting variant of mutations, but sizes exaggerated to the point of absurdity cause more laughter than any erotic fantasies - it is literally ridiculous.
3. The heroines are too stoic about what happens to them; this does not evoke sympathy, even when they have to enter into an intimate relationship against their will. Banal coercion to copulate does not cause excitement or empathy. There is no moral dilemma here, only mechanical progressive actions without emotional overtones.
P.S. These are private considerations - I don’t claim anything, but it seems to me that the project is going down the wrong path. In any case, we will wait for the continuation of the story. Thank you!