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I'd say for a general story make sure the player has a goal to work towards and some sort of antagonist. Maybe something like an asshole boss you want to replace because they've mistreated you. A story that's just default character obtaining a harem isn't interesting by itself.
the update is getting better, even though there are still shortcomings, for example when I want to buy a house that costs 50 dollars, it still has an error, but I still respect the game maker
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Invited Eva to the apartment, now cant get her out. When i select the option to tell eva to go i get " Double click to edit text" on the next page. Maybe i hit a bug, any ideas/help?
Thanks
Ah damn, i forgot to program that one.. okay i'll work in it ASAP... a simple code would fix it
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Thanks Man.
Appreciate the game. Using Jav actors was fresh view in real porn games, they are so much better than the videos that are generally found in other games. Keep up the good work. Cheers.
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Maybe, beyond the endgoal of becoming the Owner of the Bank, you could frame your antagonist for something or rather than frame him, expose his crimes, sack him and tip the authorities. Since he's such an asshole, he might actually have committed a few crimes to get where he was in the corporate ladder and you could turn his family against him and either marry or live with the girls of his family, whether it's his wife, daughter or whomever...
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Just wanted to ask everyone the same thing, but decided to read the comments first.
This is already planned:
Anthony Fukuda, the CFO (Chief Finance Officer) is the father of Remu, your AQ specialist. Once you become Division Head like Eva Lovia, you'll be introduced to him, and if you're dating Remu (Planned in 0.03) he will be kinda pleased that you're dating Remu. But after sometime you'll discover that he's an ugly bastard who steals money from the bank, and involved in illegal drug smuggling activity from Japan to the US. When you discovered this, you'll tell her wife Catherine (the model will be Julia Boin), and she will do whatever it takes to shut you from exposing her husband... it's a pitty that Julia & Remu hasn't done any 3some scenes
it will be much hotter if they do.. imagine fucking your GF and her hot mom at the same time
Already fixed
Here's the new html file:
View attachment Corpo Life fix 0.02b.rar View attachment Corpo Life fix 0.02b.rar
Actually i'm pretty impressed that you get to reach this stage, buying house (1 Mill bucks) (and probably fucked the property agent), and invited Eva to live with you... most people would already bail out before they have USD1million in bank.
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I have my ways
. I always believe in working smart not working hard . Kidding, i just help myself with twinehacker from time to time. And adding to that i was hooked to the game seeing jav so i was playing it for quite some time. I have a very kind spot for Jav.
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Alright I'm done with my playthrough. Theres probably more I coulda done to fully explore all the content like going on a date with the coworkers, doing the different sex positions, hiring the other girls as assistants, hiring the other escorts, buying everything in the shop, or limit testing like purposefully getting full or empty stats or error cases like doing stuff with negative money but meh couldnt bother. Maybe next time if I feel like it? We'll see.
What I basically did in regards to main "story" content was buy the gaming setup(Laptop and other gaming equipment) -> grind until I got promoted to manager-> grind till I could fuck Remu into the ground. -> Wake up at her house and stop there.
Over the course of me playing I saw a couple of bugs, inconsistencies, and a lotta typos. More details in the linked post here. The most memorable mistake pattern that I can remember is forgetting to capitalize I, forgetting to put periods, using two elipses or periods when normally people use three and Capitalizing the First letter of the next word after the end of a sentence. Some of the typos or things I wrote or reported are subjective aside from the spelling corrections.
I remember you said you're not a native English speaker with the implication that you aren't that fluent in it? Yeah you're gonna need a proof reader my guy. Hopefully someone will be kind enough to work with you for free (from within this website or community or outside of it) or you can hire someone (check out the recruitment section of this forum)if or when you have a patreon and have enough patrons whatever monetary amount that may be, wait for people to be kind enough to send typo corrections here (or better yet get a discord for dedicated channels for typos and another for getting constructive feedback or ideas to improve the game and another channel to get public opinion to your ideas), or have someone proofread all your work once you have the completed tag.
Don't get me wrong I like the idea of the game and the direction the content is going in.
I liked how we are romancing Remu and hope the same approach is done for the other girls (aka taking the time to detail and show the seduction process with hopefully some dating and getting to know them aside from sex). I also like how there are consequences implied for fucking her showing that it wasnt just a one and done thing (like with the club girls) and that most likely (or at least I hope) in general the character remembers what we did with them before (like hopefully being able to visit her place if we make her our gf?). (Best part for me from playing was Post sex next day wakeup Remu. Nympho Remu is best Remu! Can I marry her? Lol)
Personally I'm fine if there isnt an overarching conflict as long as the content for when we romance each of the girls has drama or conflict like lets say for Remu its getting the approval of her dad and making her dad not fire you for boning his daughter. For the boss it's showing her that you are competent and able to bring home the cash and being good at your job. But it would be great if things happened without your control like for example if you dated a coworker they may sometimes randomly call or visit you at the office to schedule a date or buy you a coffee with a note saying they miss you. Having Remu give you a bj while you are talking with someone in your office after having sex with her. Driving your player's dates home from the office or to dates if we get a car. (More suggestions (not necessarily for what content to add) in the linked post here)
I want to see more of this despite all the typos and weird sentences! Hope you continue to develop the game with it full of weird sentences and typos or not! (though preferably not)
What I basically did in regards to main "story" content was buy the gaming setup(Laptop and other gaming equipment) -> grind until I got promoted to manager-> grind till I could fuck Remu into the ground. -> Wake up at her house and stop there.
Over the course of me playing I saw a couple of bugs, inconsistencies, and a lotta typos. More details in the linked post here. The most memorable mistake pattern that I can remember is forgetting to capitalize I, forgetting to put periods, using two elipses or periods when normally people use three and Capitalizing the First letter of the next word after the end of a sentence. Some of the typos or things I wrote or reported are subjective aside from the spelling corrections.
I remember you said you're not a native English speaker with the implication that you aren't that fluent in it? Yeah you're gonna need a proof reader my guy. Hopefully someone will be kind enough to work with you for free (from within this website or community or outside of it) or you can hire someone (check out the recruitment section of this forum)if or when you have a patreon and have enough patrons whatever monetary amount that may be, wait for people to be kind enough to send typo corrections here (or better yet get a discord for dedicated channels for typos and another for getting constructive feedback or ideas to improve the game and another channel to get public opinion to your ideas), or have someone proofread all your work once you have the completed tag.
Don't get me wrong I like the idea of the game and the direction the content is going in.
I liked how we are romancing Remu and hope the same approach is done for the other girls (aka taking the time to detail and show the seduction process with hopefully some dating and getting to know them aside from sex). I also like how there are consequences implied for fucking her showing that it wasnt just a one and done thing (like with the club girls) and that most likely (or at least I hope) in general the character remembers what we did with them before (like hopefully being able to visit her place if we make her our gf?). (Best part for me from playing was Post sex next day wakeup Remu. Nympho Remu is best Remu! Can I marry her? Lol)
Personally I'm fine if there isnt an overarching conflict as long as the content for when we romance each of the girls has drama or conflict like lets say for Remu its getting the approval of her dad and making her dad not fire you for boning his daughter. For the boss it's showing her that you are competent and able to bring home the cash and being good at your job. But it would be great if things happened without your control like for example if you dated a coworker they may sometimes randomly call or visit you at the office to schedule a date or buy you a coffee with a note saying they miss you. Having Remu give you a bj while you are talking with someone in your office after having sex with her. Driving your player's dates home from the office or to dates if we get a car. (More suggestions (not necessarily for what content to add) in the linked post here)
I want to see more of this despite all the typos and weird sentences! Hope you continue to develop the game with it full of weird sentences and typos or not! (though preferably not)
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I wish all members of F95 are like you... instead of ranting and complaining how imperfect a game is.. i can't thank you enough JLP603 thank you very much!
Don't worry, i already got tons of Remu's dating and boyfriend-girlfriend POV videos with her.. and i also plan to make her marriable..
Remu is my prototype on how i want to write romance in this game... for JAV girls, in-depth characterization is no problem due to tons and tons of video materials are available for me. But same thing can't be said for western porn girls. Most of west porn doesn't have enough context to build the story and character. They're just direct fucking that's it.
here's the scene that will be in 0.03.. when the MC had accident while visiting one of the client's infrastructure project, Remu is always by MC's side while being hospitalized.. she's such a sweet girl
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I agree with some random events that the MC can't control, but to trigger such event, i have to study the code first.. since i'm also a newbie in sugarcube-html programming
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My bad! i wrote the wrong code... the variable should've been $location_eva like this:
Instead in i wrote $eva_location
this will be fixed in a moment
click back button, try save the game before taking her home, close the browser, and try again... this kind of error sometime happens to me. sometimes it happens when i open too many tabs