VN Ren'Py Corporate Culture [v0.7] [sqwl]

[NukaCola]

Finally got my fix of Elsa, I'm set for a while now (I wish )

I hasn't play the new update yet. What do you mean by my "fix of Elsa" ? please be a lewd scene, please be a lewd scene

 

[jufot]

Given the state of the story and Elsa and Edward's relationship, anyone expecting lewd stuff with Elsa in less than a year or two is deluding themselves.

I mean, take this scene from the previous update:

Edward: Oh God, Elsa. You can't live without this, can you?
Elsa: Can you live without arguing with me?
Edward: Can you live without evading the question?
Elsa: Can you live without asking rhetorical questions?
Edward: I wouldn't need to ask you anything at all if you would just tell me everything on your own.
Elsa: I tell you everything, Edward. Everything that you need to know.
Edward: And who decides what I need to know or not?
Elsa: Another rhetorical question, Edward.

Do you think people who converse like that are likely to have sex?

 

[Jericho85]

Given the state of the story and Elsa and Edward's relationship, anyone expecting lewd stuff with Elsa in less than a year or two is deluding themselves.

I mean, take this scene from the previous update:

Do you think people who converse like that are likely to have sex?

Are we talking porn game logic or real world logic?

 

[jufot]

Are we talking porn game logic or real world logic?

Well, sqwl did promise a sexual revolution, so who knows?

 

[Canto Forte]

Elsa was ready to perform for MC the minute she got outta prison, for not getting her fired,
Elsa is used to get real men to do her bidding by getting down on them.
Dev specifically promissed Elsa sex and debauchery.
True detective leads bang in the seventh update then move on.
Everything is possible in movie/tv/VN fantasy world.

 

[Toxictitan]

 

[Canto Forte]

This is what we need up in this game.
sqwl make her happen.

 

[Abhai]

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This is what we dont need up in this game.

 

[WICKEDp4th]

If the image is meant to be Elsa, then i have to agree with you. She is a Queen character and not a bitch in heat.

 

[Canto Forte]

She is a Queen

 

[sqwl]

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[Abhai]

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shame on you!
you should have added futa, bdsm/sub-dom, scat, urination, furry, tentacles...and/or any other imaginable "non-vanilla" kink that "hard" players prefer.
because, you know, thats the only proper way in creating adult vns

pro tip: you need to go to offtopic asap and read few user-made guidelines for a "perfect" game.
then come back here and redo everything you have made so far.
then repeat it all over again.
and again.
again...

 

[jufot]

Are you implying that if Ed knew how to apply makeup that would strengthen his masculinity?

Of course, there is nothing sexier than a man who knows how to take care of himself. At least that's what my wife tells me

 

[noctarima]

Somewhat minor-spoiled thoughts on the update.
For me, this was exactly why I love this game. Elsa, character focus, Elsa, dialogue focus, Elsa oh and also Elsa. Jokes Aside, the dynamic between them is superb. I can read about them talking for hours without getting bored. I also like Alice I think she is a good main LI but I always had doubts that she can't be more than just another trophy wife. And once the MC reaches its goal, they both will be miserable. The game mentioning the risk of that with a minor dream sequence is just perfect. Apart from Lucy(which we all now her only goal of existing is to add sex to this game), this is a VN more than an AVN and I think I like it more that way . I would play the possible SFW version with the same hype. The relationship dynamics are that good. The fact that we won't be able to see this game in its near-final form for at least 2-2.5 years is just sad. I wish this game would be able to reach the popularity it definetly deserves.

P.S. previous update was a let-down for me, some childish dialogues with Alice and the update not being a real update, just being a build-up update was not what I hoped for. But this update was more than satisfactory for me.

 

[Mmarsh]

Somewhat minor-spoiled thoughts on the update.
For me, this was exactly why I love this game. Elsa, character focus, Elsa, dialogue focus, Elsa oh and also Elsa. Jokes Aside, the dynamic between them is superb. I can read about them talking for hours without getting bored. I also like Alice I think she is a good main LI but I always had doubts that she can't be more than just another trophy wife. And once the MC reaches its goal, they both will be miserable. The game mentioning the risk of that with a minor dream sequence is just perfect. Apart from Lucy(which we all now her only goal of existing is to add sex to this game), this is a VN more than an AVN and I think I like it more that way . I would play the possible SFW version with the same hype. The relationship dynamics are that good. The fact that we won't be able to see this game in its near-final form for at least 2-2.5 years is just sad. I wish this game would be able to reach the popularity it definetly deserves.

P.S. previous update was a let-down for me, some childish dialogues with Alice and the update not being a real update, just being a build-up update was not what I hoped for. But this update was more than satisfactory for me.

A PERFECT MARRIAGE is also a nice game where till now the story is very intresting and is holding uo the interest.
another one is A MAN FOR ALL is also one of the best right now. the dialogues between MC and Vanessa are just like between Elsa and MC here, you will wish to keep on reading their beautiful conversation without much worrying about s*x between them.

 

[Canto Forte]

Most human beings are very well heartbroken and aware any talk without any banter/sexual tension
is meaningless. Just like married women talking to single guys they friandzone and giggle at their
attendance when all they use them for is shit dumping their blabber on them ”cause their hubby
could not care less or would shut them up pronto.
Elsa is such a horrible person and MC is written as her doormat she uses and abuses,
kicking and rubbing her shit stained stilettos onto every time she feels like it.
MC is written as moth to her flame, slave and simp and actual Igor for her dumb ideals.
Elsa knows from night one how useless MC is as she tells him point blank he should demand
she suck him off like she does with every man in her life who ever does anything for her.
She also tells him point blank: if he had any brains, he would get her fired.
What does MC do: prove to her he is beneath every other male in her life,
he is beneath her and will keep near her for the specific reason to get demeaned and dumped shit on.

That, gamers, is the premise of this game, for Elsa.
Nothing any actual adult human being working in the corporate cutthroat environment would put up with.

 

[caravaggio]

Most human beings are very well heartbroken and aware any talk without any banter/sexual tension
is meaningless. Just like married women talking to single guys they friandzone and giggle at their
attendance when all they use them for is shit dumping their blabber on them ”cause their hubby
could not care less or would shut them up pronto.
Elsa is such a horrible person and MC is written as her doormat she uses and abuses,
kicking and rubbing her shit stained stilettos onto every time she feels like it.
MC is written as moth to her flame, slave and simp and actual Igor for her dumb ideals.
Elsa knows from night one how useless MC is as she tells him point blank he should demand
she suck him off like she does with every man in her life who ever does anything for her.
She also tells him point blank: if he had any brains, he would get her fired.
What does MC do: prove to her he is beneath every other male in her life,
he is beneath her and will keep near her for the specific reason to get demeaned and dumped shit on.

That, gamers, is the premise of this game, for Elsa.
Nothing any actual adult human being working in the corporate cutthroat environment would put up with.

Seriously, what's the point of writing these wannabe-poetic rants every now and then? You don't like Elsa, you don't like the game, we get it, you need to deal with the fact that nobody else cares about that, and you keeping to write these philippics won't convince anybody..

 

[6pak2go]

Great update, SQWL! Beautiful renders and scenes, lots of subtle symbolism, and the banter between Edward and Elsa was fantastic. The story seemed to move forward a lot as Jufot said, Edward is finally getting a spine. Elsa is masterfully nudging him in the right direction. It was great to see him finally get one up on his bitch of a boss. She couldn't handle it when she realized he had out-maneuvered her.

Again, thank you for bringing us this great story. I'm proud to support you.

 

[Abhai]

meantime dirty pirates noble f95zooners:

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[Canto Forte]

Every story needs antagonists, every story needs fake friends.
There has to be a hero tho, also actual prevailing in the intrigue and the plot.
Like every other story, this one also has fake friends, Lis who are amused and that is it by MC,
the usual man eaters, the usual ”girl uses some nobody crushing on her” to do her bidding.
Writing all kind a thoughts after reading/playing novels or visual novels is only natural.

Seriously, what's the point of writing these wannabe-poetic rants every now and then? You don't like Elsa, you don't like the game, we get it, you need to deal with the fact that nobody else cares about that, and you keeping to write these philippics won't convince anybody..

She couldn't handle it when she realized he had out-maneuvered her.

This is what a Bond movie hero would do to Elsa or Alice or you name it girl asshole in this game.
Then again, not everyone writes/produces Bond movies that are hugely acclaimed and successful the world over.