VN Ren'Py Corrupted Hearts [v0.5 Part B] [Sinful Studios]

[xert13]

You mean like she boxed up her emotions and stayed on task instead of sleeping with Leon? Oh wait...... Everyone says she can compartmentalize her emotions about cheating with Leon but yet she couldn't do it about the kiss. Double standard much, both are very disturbing to her emotionally, realizing she cheated should effect her more since it was way worse than a kiss.

Jeezus…it’s a farging porn VN game. You want perfect logic? Must be great fun to watch a movie with you. Oh, when the police captain pulled the guards off of Vito Corleone why didn’t they just kill him immediately after? Rose jumped off the Titanic into freezing water, yet didn’t die of hypothermia even while floating on a piece of wood…soaked. You mean they didn’t stop the fight in Rocky after the 5th round? FFS

 

[MoBy28]

Jeezus…it’s a farging porn VN game. You want perfect logic? Must be great fun to watch a movie with you. Oh, when the police captain pulled the guards off of Vito Corleone why didn’t they just kill him immediately after? Rose jumped off the Titanic into freezing water, yet didn’t die of hypothermia even while floating on a piece of wood…soaked. You mean they didn’t stop the fight in Rocky after the 5th round? FFS

You keep saying it's a game but isn't the dev trying to tell a story? Almost all the devs are trying to create something with their story, otherwise it would just be sex scene after sex scene making it pure porn(I'm sure there are those that would prefer things like that). Having inconsistancies in a story doesn't help the story it hurts it, pointing them out can help others make future stories better. The dev may see it, future devs might see it and take note, others might point it out if they communicate with them on other platforms etc. Inconsistancies can make a good story bad. What I keep seeing is everyone using compartmentalize to justify certain parts they like but avoiding the fact it could be used elsewhere to change certain things also making it a double standard of it's good for my story but not if it hurts my story. If your going to use something you need to take the good with the bad or not use it at all is my point. BTW didn't like Titanic or Rocky movies after the first.

 

[ScrewMe]

Jeezus…it’s a farging porn VN game. You want perfect logic? Must be great fun to watch a movie with you. Oh, when the police captain pulled the guards off of Vito Corleone why didn’t they just kill him immediately after? Rose jumped off the Titanic into freezing water, yet didn’t die of hypothermia even while floating on a piece of wood…soaked. You mean they didn’t stop the fight in Rocky after the 5th round? FFS

You can suspend disbelief from time to time(like, hiring a couple in an infiltration mission, where who knows what may happen - oh, conflict of interests. How unexpected), but when it's totally meh - it's meh.
What would've been the best solution for that update(IMO, of course)? Give 'em a drunken kiss, which doesn't feel like Leon boy's pushing it. If you want him to play the role of a guy who steals her through feelings, not magic dick - go all-in.
There was the second way, however: give her some kind of impossible task/choice: kill Alan-sleep with Leon or something like it.
And that's just the first two things that come to mind.
Instead, we've gotten this.
I don't mind her fucking Leon with "oh, I can't hold these feelings off". But it should happen later, not in the midst of first Act.

With that being said, Harrison's probably the route I like the most(if he is one of LIs, and not one random encounter). Getting corrupted through being domineering is a rare thing I see in this subgenre(probably, the first time I see it, actually), since in 90% of cases it's either blackmail or straight up rape/Stockholm syndrome.

 

[UpravDom]

Sorry but it seems like you are the one going around and targeting those who don't seem to agree with your opinion just like how you picked mine out even if my comment wasn't for you. So many people enjoyed the Leon scene with Clara and only the minority who hated it are being more vocal here as expected.

I have long since stopped trying to explain what the game is trying to convey to people like you because I want to respect this thread rules.

Those who were looking for explanation to why the cheating happened can kindly read my earlier comment or ignore if they want to force their opinion on me. That is why I put it out there.

But since you already picked my comment to nitpick on, let me pick something back,

Clara's actions are undoubtedly bad and considered a betrayal by many, but they serve a purpose, in fact, the most important purpose from a plot perspective. It shows and exhibits complicated moral dilemma and human weaknesses to the story. Its quite realistic that everyone has dark desires in their heart and so many succumb to it, even more so under extreme and stressful conditions.

In regards to forgiveness, it falls on Alan's( or the player's) discretion whether or not to forgive Clara. You argued that Alan's trust and faith in her will never be fully regained, but that entirely depends on his character's ability to forgive. There are indeed instances where people have successfully rebuilt trust after experiencing a major betrayal. There is always 2 sides to a coin even if it won't be perfect.

As for Clara's traumatic past which is yet to be made clear, it might not justify her actions, but it should be a significant aspect of her character development and might provide a possible explanation for her actions, perhaps even adding a sense of realism to the story.
You still think she cheated because of a "kiss" and that is proof that you barely understood what is happening between the main characters or you simply skipped or didn't care to pay more attention to everything that happened before.

Depicting characters with perfect moral compasses would be unrealistic and unrelatable; we all have our flaws and make mistakes.

When it comes to lessons and consequences, the story isn't over yet. We have yet to see how Clara's adulterous actions will shape her future and whether the consequences will lead her to accept responsibility for her actions.

Moreover, netorare stories are a niche genre that doesn't appeal to everyone, but they thrive on evoking strong emotions. The purpose is to challenge the players and provoke "healthy" discussion rather than make an echo chamber of ntr haters.

But when all is said and done, the dev's choices may not align with the preferences of every person, but they create interesting drama and thought-provoking scenarios than the usual boring cliche where the woman is forced into cheating compared to doing so out of her own will because of "unique" circumstances rather than just simple cheating. "Being forced into cheating" plots are so predictable and overdone that even a pig can guess how it will end. You pick any ntr story out of 100 and 99 times you will get the same thing.

But people are free to dislike what they don't like but what baffles me is why they stick around instead of moving on lol

Listen up! You should be a lawyer, not a policeman! Because you are very patient and know how to defend your opinion in a reasoned manner! I agree with you!A compromise is needed! There are several endings planned in the game, but in order to reconcile all sides, the epilogue should look like this: Alan takes a crying Clara by the hand, and together they go over the horizon! And dear readers, they just watch and reflect on the meaning of life! It seems to me that the game can be given an additional plus sign for the fact that all the characters' faces are new! I haven't seen these faces in other games! It is important! I also follow the game "Perfect Marriage", where the main idea is slow burning, and therefore the main character Anna suffers without sex, and there are outsiders who are looking for an opportunity to have sex with Anna! Old Marvin is the most persistent contender! Readers are salivating in anticipation of the main course! And suddenly screenshots from another game appear on the network, where Anna is already fucking in all poses with old Marvin. Even the names match! A beautiful picture, of course, but such a coincidence spoils the impression of a good game! I want to say something nasty! That's what old Marvin went through 2 brain strokes, but after the last stroke he was very successfully paralyzed! Martin always has a dick, so Marvin can fuck Anna until he dies of a heart attack!!!

 

[truthpolice]

Listen up! You should be a lawyer, not a policeman! Because you are very patient and know how to defend your opinion in a reasoned manner! I agree with you!A compromise is needed! There are several endings planned in the game, but in order to reconcile all sides, the epilogue should look like this: Alan takes a crying Clara by the hand, and together they go over the horizon! And dear readers, they just watch and reflect on the meaning of life! It seems to me that the game can be given an additional plus sign for the fact that all the characters' faces are new! I haven't seen these faces in other games! It is important! I also follow the game "Perfect Marriage", where the main idea is slow burning, and therefore the main character Anna suffers without sex, and there are outsiders who are looking for an opportunity to have sex with Anna! Old Marvin is the most persistent contender! Readers are salivating in anticipation of the main course! And suddenly screenshots from another game appear on the network, where Anna is already fucking in all poses with old Marvin. Even the names match! A beautiful picture, of course, but such a coincidence spoils the impression of a good game! I want to say something nasty! That's what old Marvin went through 2 brain strokes, but after the last stroke he was very successfully paralyzed! Martin always has a dick, so Marvin can fuck Anna until he dies of a heart attack!!!

I told someone here before I was probably meant to be a lawyer. But for now I shall be the lawyer for this game and be the devil's advocate for our lovely agent, Clara

 

[UpravDom]

The plot of the game seems to have already spun to the maximum! Now Anna is not only looking at Alan with loving eyes, but also twirling her ass in front of him and even showed off her body in the shower. But should we take a swing at a new level of destruction, for example, let's Mr. Brown demand that Clara break up with her boyfriend! Leon will convince Alan that Clara can only be saved if Alan starts dating Anna! Like Clara and Alan have nothing in common! Anna will certainly take advantage of the situation: kisses and hugs in public! Living together, drinking hot drinks and other means of rapprochement! True love, of course, can win in many situations, but only when the spouses act in unison and fully trust each other. But if Clara sleeps with Brown regularly, and Alan accepts Anna's courtship, then at the end of the game everyone can only do work and look for a "mole"! The end of the story is quite hot, but also dramatic! At least Alan will stay alive, with coffee and a woman!

 

[mindexcursion]

Good idea! Expecially when Alan is forced to watch that Clara has to enter into a marriage-like relationship with Mr. Brown. Both, Clara and Alan, see how there previous partners have to let go and experience new things.
Both could suffer from it and break down, or come to terms with the situation and it could even excite them.

 

[truthpolice]

The plot of the game seems to have already spun to the maximum! Now Anna is not only looking at Alan with loving eyes, but also twirling her ass in front of him and even showed off her body in the shower. But should we take a swing at a new level of destruction, for example, let's Mr. Brown demand that Clara break up with her boyfriend! Leon will convince Alan that Clara can only be saved if Alan starts dating Anna! Like Clara and Alan have nothing in common! Anna will certainly take advantage of the situation: kisses and hugs in public! Living together, drinking hot drinks and other means of rapprochement! True love, of course, can win in many situations, but only when the spouses act in unison and fully trust each other. But if Clara sleeps with Brown regularly, and Alan accepts Anna's courtship, then at the end of the game everyone can only do work and look for a "mole"! The end of the story is quite hot, but also dramatic! At least Alan will stay alive, with coffee and a woman!

Sounds like possible routes.