This really feels like it should be a slow burn story. Slowly fighting temptation, only giving in to it bit by bit, no in your face gratuitous nunsturbation until the point where she finally gives in. She should fight to keep her modesty until it's too late. And I feel that the guy should only appear in the chat, maybe until the ending when/if she gives in to him. He's not the main character, she is, he's really only the audience proxy at the moment. We shouldn't know what he's planning until she finds out. I have high hopes for this one, and the simplicity of the art style is a plus.