- Oct 4, 2020
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I have almost never interacted with Garb characters -- most of them are not appealing to me in design alone -- but l did do the pregnancy content of that horse lady that carries my stuff and I enjoyed it. It felt like it had good understanding of what made the concept of pregnancy hot from a fetishistic angle.I was super excited until I realized it was by Gardeford. He can't write jack shit. And that's exactly what's happening with Lumia. Her scenes are so...dumb. Lengthy prose in all the wrong places and too little detail in the actual act of sex that matters. Plus why the fuck does his Lumia confess in the middle of a sex scene to a hero that she talked to for like 10 minutes total.
Had she been handled by a more competent writer, I definitely would have liked her. You're the super special champion breeding goddesses, what's not to like?
But Savin just had to give writing Lumia to the guy who wrote the second least liked companion in the entire fucking game, Atugia. The companion that literally nobody, no fucking body gives a shit about. At least Quin is polarizing, he has a tiny minority that likes him, and others hate him.
Nobody cares about Atugia simply 'cause all of her writing fucking sucks. And to not be remembered at all is worse than being hated.
The guy who wrote that, wrote this super big character that everyone was excited about. Wtf was going through savin's head I wonder.
Edit: Actually, to make a completely uneducated guess, Gardeford probably promised Savin a few Arona x Lumina scenes in return for being able to write her. Also lol at the forced Atugia scenes in the quest. Dude just had to showcase his OC.
So I am kind of interested in how goddess of fertility can come off as boring.
And when it comes to Atugia, eh... Only thing I have to say is that while I can guess why she may seem forced in, my visceral reaction was "Oh finally, she is not sucking on the tits of the success of our companions. She may actually start interacting with the narrative. Or at least she is getting content.
I have my qualms with "one fuck leads to ever lasting love" approach to establishing relationship between champion and the NPC. I do not mind in some cases, but I do wish more PCs had a slightly more gradual progression. But, at the same time, this is a porn game and people come here for sex.Warning rambly thoughts, opinions, blah blah
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Still, if I was Jstar, the way I would try to satisfy both camps (the sex havers and romance enjoyers) would be like this.
The sex scenes are there from the start but make it so that the further you progress with Drifa, the more romantic the eventual boning will end up being. Like how Zo does it: you can fuck her from the start, but if you hold yourself back, she will confess her love to you and make your first time feel that more romantic. I think that is a good compromise.
Huh, and she confeses her love for you... Yeah no.meh
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