I'm not into traps so i didn't knew that, damn best boy/girl indeed!And everybody forgets that dog sissyboi tells you that he neuters himself to not preg anyone when in heat
I'm not into traps so i didn't knew that, damn best boy/girl indeed!And everybody forgets that dog sissyboi tells you that he neuters himself to not preg anyone when in heat
It helps cut down on the heaps of flowery tryhard crap that we'd have to suffer through otherwise. I mean, if you can't write dialogue, then just don't. Give us the Cliff's notes instead.Who here likes the Tobs method of writing for the MC? That weird no quotation summarized dialogue thing. I know there is a lot of Tobs hate around here, but what do you guys think when just looking at this mechanic in a vacuum?
I at least prefer it over some of the scenes where your character is forced to seem like a bumbling idiot, or an asshole just because the writer feels like putting words in your mouth. I get that you can't make a good main character without writing dialogue for them at some points, but sometimes I hate what our character just ends up blurting out. Which Tobs is guilty of as well, but I do like it when they can leave it up to interpretation and still make it seem cohesive.Who here likes the Tobs method of writing for the MC? That weird no quotation summarized dialogue thing. I know there is a lot of Tobs hate around here, but what do you guys think when just looking at this mechanic in a vacuum?
Personally, I don't really mind Tobs content, although Hime Kinu is getting on my nerves lol (that's what I get for choosing based on her looks). This method of speaking for the MC is really cringe af though. Maybe it just screams "self insert here." Maybe it's the way he writes it. It's hard to describe... but that weird sarcastic tone and overuse of Hmm? Oh? We--ll... etc. just makes me picture the MC as an insufferable neckbeard.
Don't really care for how each writer does mc dialogue but prefer a mix of direct and indirect. Tobs and wsan are the only ones who refuse to budge from their extreme ends of the spectrum to the point of it hurting the writing. There is only so many times I can read wsans dialoguised grunting and moaning or tobs find replace pronoun upshifting til it gets tiring. Some things are better said directly and others, particularly by the likes of skow and garde, could work better as "you say/do x".Who here likes the Tobs method of writing for the MC? That weird no quotation summarized dialogue thing. I know there is a lot of Tobs hate around here, but what do you guys think when just looking at this mechanic in a vacuum?
"I love you, daddy."
You love her too, sweetheart.
It's hard for a writer to remove himself from his work.just makes me picture the MC as an insufferable neckbeard.
IMO in any text heavy game should have slider in options to change story....person/teller between first (I told her to shut the fuck up), second (you told her to shut the fuck up) and third (%PC name%/him told her to shut the fuck up).Don't really care for how each writer does mc dialogue but prefer a mix of direct and indirect.
Well... I... err..makes me picture the MC as an insufferable neckbeard.
Noooooo don't do yourself dirty like thatWell... I... err..
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It's generally terrible, but it's not terrible because of the no quotations stuff, just because tobs can't write dialogue for shit unless it's intended to be stunted or overly professional. The overuse of the words/sounds you mentioned is definitely something that should be caught before it's sent off to the coding mines or wherever they keep their single programmer.Who here likes the Tobs method of writing for the MC? That weird no quotation summarized dialogue thing. I know there is a lot of Tobs hate around here, but what do you guys think when just looking at this mechanic in a vacuum?
Personally, I don't really mind Tobs content, although Hime Kinu is getting on my nerves lol (that's what I get for choosing based on her looks). This method of speaking for the MC is really cringe af though. Maybe it just screams "self insert here." Maybe it's the way he writes it. It's hard to describe... but that weird sarcastic tone and overuse of Hmm? Oh? We--ll... etc. just makes me picture the MC as an insufferable neckbeard.
I can't fucking stand it. Sometimes it's confusing because it's part of the narration, so I can't tell if the MC actually said the words out loud or is simply thinking them until another character replies. And as someone who writes, it just looks off and amateurish. I'm not sure if I've ever seen a published work (self published or through a publishing house) that used that style of writing dialogue. So that further makes it look like a fanfic writer who developed bad writing habits but is now too comfortable to change them and simply calls it their personal style.Who here likes the Tobs method of writing for the MC? That weird no quotation summarized dialogue thing. I know there is a lot of Tobs hate around here, but what do you guys think when just looking at this mechanic in a vacuum?
did you hug her?If you don't have sex with Kass in the Winter Palace (but weren't outright hostile with her and had sex with her in every other encounter) then do you still unlock her content? (that whole dream realm thingie and repeated encounters i've heard you all talk about.)
The whole dream realm is like five squares, on one of which is sits Kassire..Kassyre...Cassidy...how is her name again? from time to time. And all "repeated encounters" is just a "fuck her" "fuck me".that whole dream realm thingie and repeated encounters i've heard you all talk about
"Immersion" and "Lore reasons" and the worst part "Item management"Why can't they give us enough storage space?
Because we didn't vote for Bernie and now the 1% are hoarding it all.Why can't they give us enough storage space?