- Jun 25, 2017
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As Wsan writes largely fluff scenes it's hard to really gauge his writing ability to the same extent as Savin or Tobs, who have their hands in most of the expositional and lore aspects of the story. Not that I don't think Wsan isn't good at what he does, it's just that when we're talking smut scenes I think it's largely preference. Like, personally, I think SKoW is the writer when it comes to that sort of thing, but there's no accounting for taste, etc. Like I said though, I think Tobs is the best *conceptually*, and thoughts and concepts don't necessarily translate well to paper if you don't have the writing ability to adequately convey what it is you're trying to do. As for Convocation, I mostly hate how up it's own ass it is and the fact that it drags on for seemingly forever, forcing you to at least skim it lest you get btfo'd and forced back to the beginning of the encounter again.convoc of mirrors is terrible, but lets not be too hasty with calling it the worst scene in the game, let me remind you they also thought that saying someones naked body smelled like ash was sexy, or that sub content is basically just being abused with the word "babybag" thrown around a lot. def agree he'd be way way way better with an editor who's willing to be harsh
Wouldn't be the best writer even with an editor though, as Wsan exists.
I mean she has basically no personality lol, it's just "I exist and also I am a bee". Even Cait has more going on, and she just boils down to "hot damn I love dicks" in like 80% of scenes.
Also, real talk, but babybag is one of the least attractive descriptors of a womb in an erofic I've ever heard. Fucking end me.