Biostar

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While I don't mind stretch marks, they weren't drawn the best way. Just looked weird in the artstyle. I'm fine with dickgirls and I'm mostly okay with dommi mino since you don't take a dick yourself. Only problem is the "mistress" stuff. That's my limit in the case of letting the other person take charge.
 
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Skandranon

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Meh.

Neither of the two new characters are available for female PCs, disappointing.
And the wyld elf is a futa...who doesn't use her dick at all and only takes it in the rear...why?

The cowgirl is good though. This game has almost zero actual femdom. There are a few scenes where a few ladies take the lead, but I think this might be the first fully femdom character in this game unless I'm forgetting someone.
 
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M0nte

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Well, hi there people, It is me, Monte, here to bring you something that may not be for everyone taste (hell, probably for most but I need editors) but still something I believe should be worth their time if they like the idea

The doc as it is now contains introduction and 2 whole scenes where you devour or get manhandled by the sweet gym going doggy. The last scene is finished, but for purpose of not wanting to overload you, my dear readers, it will be posted tomorrow after which I will wait 24 hours to submit it. For those that are not into guys, I should also be announcing a new project next week. I already have around 2500 words baked into it.

Nevertheless, enjoy.
 
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Well, hi there people, It is me, Monte, here to bring you something that may not be for everyone taste (hell, probably for most but I need editors) but still something I believe should be worth their time if they like the idea

The doc as it is now contains introduction and 2 whole scenes where you devour or get manhandled by the sweet gym going doggy. The last scene is finished, but for purpose of not wanting to overload you, my dear readers, it will be posted tomorrow after which I will wait 24 hours to submit it. For those that are not into guys, I should also be announcing a new project next week. I already have around 2500 words baked into it.

Nevertheless, enjoy.
Maybe replace the weird caveman talk for bimbos? I've alway seen typical perception of bimbos as exaggerated valley girls.
 

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A character solely created for having a horse asshole because that fetish was specifically needed. I can understand horse cock fetish (even if there are too many, even the futa demons have a horse cock instead of a corrupted human/demonic one) but then there is horse vagina and now asshole. Was bait with the promise of a wyld efl with an interesting mark but no a dickgirl with a horse butthole. End of rant, was not entertained.
 

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Well, hi there people, It is me, Monte, here to bring you something that may not be for everyone taste (hell, probably for most but I need editors) but still something I believe should be worth their time if they like the idea

The doc as it is now contains introduction and 2 whole scenes where you devour or get manhandled by the sweet gym going doggy. The last scene is finished, but for purpose of not wanting to overload you, my dear readers, it will be posted tomorrow after which I will wait 24 hours to submit it. For those that are not into guys, I should also be announcing a new project next week. I already have around 2500 words baked into it.

Nevertheless, enjoy.
You're probably gonna want to read your scenes over some more, I've underlined some of the more obvious issues I saw on the first page or so.

"Hmmmmmm?" is all he mummeres before a harsh push throws him into the clearing, with his plushy derriere absorbing all of the impact. n appropriate "Umffffffff!" spilling out of his maw.
I'm guessing the first word was supposed to be "murmurs"? I'm also gonna throw out another guess here and say the second sentence was supposed to start with the word "An"?

Only to finally feel all the prior trepidation melting across his androgynous face as it adorns something more in line with his prominent stiffy; a profile sipped in lust.
"Sipped" is a verb that means to drink something slowly. I'm thinking the word you were looking for here was "steeped"?

His two heads looking up as they crave for an answer. And you are quick to oblige both of their pleas by the way of your [pc.foot] tip-toeing across his dick, elising a groan from the former and a nice jitter from the latter.
I'm assuming this word was supposed to be "eliciting"? Elising isn't an actual word.
 
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M0nte

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You're probably gonna want to read your scenes over some more, I've underlined some of the more obvious issues I saw on the first page or so.



I'm guessing the first word was supposed to be "murmurs"? I'm also gonna throw out another guess here and say the second sentence was supposed to start with the word "An"?



"Sipped" is a verb that means to drink something slowly. I'm thinking the word you were looking for here was "steeped"?



I'm assuming this word was supposed to be "eliciting"? Elising isn't an actual word.
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NODOGAN

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I HAVE RETURNED BROTHERS!
After my self-imposed abstinence from playing until a Level 7 was attainable by our character (Haven't played since V3.44) I've decided that this whole abstinence deal is fucking bullshit and I RETURN WITH ONE QUESTION:
Are White Mages/Charmers still the most OP classes?

TLDR: Got bored as fuck and wanna know if my 2 favorite classes still hold up after all the content I've been missing.
 
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Futa_Buddy

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I HAVE RETURNED BROTHERS!
After my self-imposed abstinence from playing until a Level 7 was attainable by our character (Haven't played since V3.44) I've decided that this whole abstinence deal is fucking bullshit and I RETURN WITH ONE QUESTION:
Are White Mages/Charmers still the most OP classes?

TLDR: Got bored as fuck and wanna know if my 2 favorite classes still hold up after all the content I've been missing.
SALUTATION BROTHER! ;)

I can't comment on the White Mage class but Charmer is still good, tease attacks are great (still)!
 
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I HAVE RETURNED BROTHERS!
After my self-imposed abstinence from playing until a Level 7 was attainable by our character (Haven't played since V3.44) I've decided that this whole abstinence deal is fucking bullshit and I RETURN WITH ONE QUESTION:
Are White Mages/Charmers still the most OP classes?

TLDR: Got bored as fuck and wanna know if my 2 favorite classes still hold up after all the content I've been missing.
Whites mages still cannot die and deal insane damage while charmers still nuke everything not lust resistant yes.
 
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