Others Corruption of Champions II [v0.7.33] [Savin/Salamander Studios]
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Sorry if no one is gonna stroke my ego I will have to do it myself.
Not without editing game files, getting one pregged locks out the other because fucking Tobs.
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Not really. Purple prose isn't a sign of good writing.
- Sep 7, 2017
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Hoping to get a new quest allow to impregnate another one soon. (The good story expansion and potential new Kitsune girl too)
It would be nice to be able to impregnate them both in the same playthrough. It would also be nice to be able to impregnate them more than once. But no, because fucking Tobs.
- Jun 1, 2017
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to repeat his own statement, own words, that's all a joke, paid for and commissioned, to "tease people"
- Feb 25, 2018
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>Tsukuyusa
Geez, my japanese skills are barely functional, but he still keeps on doing the same shit as a yandev, trying to translate english verb / nouns into fucking compound names?
Also... who the fuck pays and comission a fucking game, character designs and shit for a "joke"? Dude doesn't even try to hide his fetish lol
Geez, my japanese skills are barely functional, but he still keeps on doing the same shit as a yandev, trying to translate english verb / nouns into fucking compound names?
Also... who the fuck pays and comission a fucking game, character designs and shit for a "joke"? Dude doesn't even try to hide his fetish lol
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- Sep 6, 2019
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He wrote a gentle femdom character(my favorite fetish) and I couldn't even get past a semi-chub, dude. Christ even AO3 authors who use purple prose like Tas_tan can at least get my engine revved. No clue how it's possible for someone to write sex as boring as TOBS does.
Tobs job should be to write lots of words and phrases that other writers then pick and choose to make whole sentences. Sort of like a serial killer who cuts up newspapers to make their statements.
I personally have a bit more nuanced version on Tobs.
I don't actually dislike his writing - I just think his strengths lie in the opposite direction of the most important parts of this game.
I'd say his style works well for certain scenes. I liked the lightsaber quest, it was pretty great (though that was a duo gig). Heck, I actually liked the Gweyr quests in and of themselves - they just belong in a different game.
I thunk his style is ehat made Kiyoko and Kinu endearing at the beginning. Long descriptive text works for you hanging out with the wife and kids, it felt really cozy when he's describing the minutiae of Kiyokos habits and day to day life.
The problem occurs when any character he writes starts talking.
He just continues to write dialogue basically exactly like he writes everything else and it's...grating.bits annoying. His characters often sound inhuman, like every word out of their mouths is a prepared speech.
This also goes for sex scenes. It's not even that being overly verbose is a problem in sex scenes, it's that he has no concept of focus. He spends a lot of words talking about everything and just doesn't seem to have a great grasp on the parts that people want to hear about.
Hell, Wsan also writes long-ass sex scenes. Some of the Brienne sex scenes I thought ended multiple times and they just keep going.
But Wsan is much better at pinpointing which part of the scene he's writing is actually sexy and focusing on that. Tobs will spend a paragraph in the middle relating the characters current feelings in the moment to their backstory somehow.
Tobs weak points are sex scenes and character dialogue, and those two things are kinda what I'm here for, personally: talking to people and then banging them.
I don't actually dislike his writing - I just think his strengths lie in the opposite direction of the most important parts of this game.
I'd say his style works well for certain scenes. I liked the lightsaber quest, it was pretty great (though that was a duo gig). Heck, I actually liked the Gweyr quests in and of themselves - they just belong in a different game.
I thunk his style is ehat made Kiyoko and Kinu endearing at the beginning. Long descriptive text works for you hanging out with the wife and kids, it felt really cozy when he's describing the minutiae of Kiyokos habits and day to day life.
The problem occurs when any character he writes starts talking.
He just continues to write dialogue basically exactly like he writes everything else and it's...grating.bits annoying. His characters often sound inhuman, like every word out of their mouths is a prepared speech.
This also goes for sex scenes. It's not even that being overly verbose is a problem in sex scenes, it's that he has no concept of focus. He spends a lot of words talking about everything and just doesn't seem to have a great grasp on the parts that people want to hear about.
Hell, Wsan also writes long-ass sex scenes. Some of the Brienne sex scenes I thought ended multiple times and they just keep going.
But Wsan is much better at pinpointing which part of the scene he's writing is actually sexy and focusing on that. Tobs will spend a paragraph in the middle relating the characters current feelings in the moment to their backstory somehow.
Tobs weak points are sex scenes and character dialogue, and those two things are kinda what I'm here for, personally: talking to people and then banging them.
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So pretty much entire point of a text-based porn game, am I understood you right?
- Sep 7, 2017
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Honestly, all that just to rile people up? Incredibly based.
Only if it's an anonymous user with no authority to create anything. Having spite as a significant motivation in a creative endeavor is a cancer.
- Sep 6, 2019
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The people who he wants to rile up stopped giving a shit years ago and he's doing it because his feefees got hurt.
If he was some random Anon who was doing it just out of boredom, sure it would be. But he's just being pathetic at this point.